Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-10868 Selective reinforcement of conflict processing in the Stroop task PLOS ONE Dear Dr. PREVEL, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. I have received two expert reviews and am ready to act. As you will see, the reviews of your manuscript are excellent and very relevant (thank you to both reviewers). The good news is that both reviews are positive and ask for minor revisions. My own reading of your manuscript converges with their decision. I will not spend time summarizing the reviews in any detail, you can see the detailed reviews below. Given these positive reviews, I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please pay attention to the following comments and give them due consideration, as those changes are required for acceptance. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I found this study interesting. It investigated the learning effect of reward on conflict processing in 3 experiments using the prime Stroop task. A performance-contingent reward was selectively presented after incongruent or congruent trials, leading to 3 types of congruency-reward contingencies: rewarded incongruent (RI) condition, rewarded congruent (RC) condition, and neutral condition (half incongruent and half congruent trials were rewarded). In Exp 1, a cue presented in the beginning of a trial to indicate the start of the trial. In Exp 2 and 3(?), the shape of the cue additionally indicated the congruency of the upcoming trial. In Exp 1 and 2, responses that were correct and faster than an adaptive threshold were rewarded. In Exp 3, responses that were correct and faster than a fixed threshold were rewarded. The results showed that in Exp 1 and 2, the first half block of data showed an interaction of congruency and contingency, and Exp 3 showed a similar interaction, indicating a smaller Stroop effect in the RI than in the RC condition. The authors interpret the results as that reward reinforced conflict processing in the RI condition and therefore reduced the conflict effect. I think the experimental design and analyses were generally sound, but the interpretation of the results needs some consideration. Below my comments are only minor. 1) As the shape of the cue in Exp 2 and 3(?) also indicated the congruency of the upcoming trial, participants may alternatively learn a shape-reward (instead of congruency-reward) contingency. This left open the possibility that the shape of the cue may modulate motivation trial-by-trial, and the increased motivation may enhance cognitive control in incongruent trials in the RI condition and therefore reduce the conflict effect. This alternative explanation might deserve some discussion. 2) In Exp 1 and 2, only the first half of the data showed the interaction of congruency and contingency. The authors suggest that this is because of the adaptive threshold. This is somehow speculation. Is there any way to analyze the data (e.g., comparing the first and the second data) to support this idea? In addition, learning reward contingency often takes time. Are participants able to learn and already utilize the congruency-reward contingency in the first half data? 3) What are the actual reward frequencies for the 3 experiments? I expect a frequency of 50% for Exp 1 and 2, and a higher frequency (> 50%) for Exp 3. Therefore, the stronger reward effect in Exp 3 could also be due to more rewarded trials? Reviewer #2: In the manuscript „Selective reinforcement of conflict processing in the Stroop task” the authors present a series of three experiments aimed at investigating whether participants would adapt conflict processing to selective reinforcement of conflict (incongruent) or no-conflict (congruent) trials. Results show some indication of a reduced Stroop effect with selective reinforcement of performance in incongruent trials. But this effect seems to rely on specific boundary conditions. The authors investigate a well-motivated research question and present interesting results. I have a few comments – aimed at improving the well written manuscript further – that prevent me from recommending publication of this manuscript in its present form. - My first comment concerns the issue of contingency which has also been addressed by the authors themselves to some extent. In Experiments 1 and 2, the authors used a reward rate of .5 in all blocks which could mean that participants perceived the reward more like a random gain than a performance-contingent reward. (Perceived) reward contingency is associated with very different effects on cognitive control functions (Fröber & Dreisbach, 2014, 2016; Müller, Dreisbach, Goschke, Hensch, Lesch & Brocke, 2007) in studies investigating the effect of pre-cued reward. But also studies that used mere reward feedback (like in the present study) demonstrated oppositional effects of contingent and random reward on the congruency sequence effects (Braem, Verguts, Roggeman & Notebaert, 2012; Stürmer, Nigbur, Schacht & Sommer, 2011; van Steenbergen, Band & Hommel, 2009, 2012): Conflict adaptation was increased following a contingent reward but reduced following a random reward. This made me wonder, whether an additional exploratory analysis of the congruency sequence effect with the same design as in the across experiment analysis on pp. 17/18 could give more insight here. If it is indeed the case that rewards were perceived as less contingent in the second half of the blocks, one might see differences in the congruency sequence effects between first and second half. - The fact that no significant effects with the factor time-on-task were found in the separate analyses of Experiments 1 and 2 and that a significant effect was found when collapsing data across experiments and focusing on the first half of blocks only, made me wonder about a possible power problem in this study. Maybe the influence of reward contingency on the Stroop effect is a rather subtle effect that needs more power to be detected with a high probability. Likewise, in Experiment 3 the critical interaction between Contingency and Congruency just falls below the conventional threshold of significance (p = .047) for the learning items and misses significance for the test items, while the descriptive data (Figure 5) looks pretty similar. Maybe the less pronounced interaction effect in test items would also need a higher-powered study to reach significance. - My last comment might just be personal preference, but I would recommend to use a different naming for the different levels of the Contingency factor. While reading, Negative and Positive were not intuitive names for me. I understand that these names are a consequence of the formula explained on pp. 5/6, but the formula seems like an arbitrary choice to me (∆p could also be P(r|c) – P(r|i)). Therefore, I suggest to use more meaningful terms instead. For example, incongruent reinforced vs. congruent reinforced. ********** 6. 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Selective reinforcement of conflict processing in the Stroop task PONE-D-21-10868R1 Dear Dr. PREVEL, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ludovic Ferrand, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-10868R1 Selective reinforcement of conflict processing in the Stroop task Dear Dr. Prével: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ludovic Ferrand Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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