Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-34442 Three clusters of content-audience associations in expression of racial prejudice while consuming online television news PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Takano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I am writing to let you know that your Manuscript ID JOU-20-0103.R2 entitled "Applying News Values Theory to Liking, Commenting, and Sharing Mainstream News Articles on Facebook" which you submitted to Plos One has now been reviewed. The comments of the reviewers are included at the bottom of this letter. Please note that the reviewers have recommended major revisions to your manuscript, which I believe will result in an improved manuscript overall. Therefore, I invite you to revise your manuscript, in conjunction with the comments of the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Competing interests can arise in relationship to an organization or another person. Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study tackles digital racism through an examination of racist discourses of Japanese television viewers on ABEMA. The paper provides us with an important gap in our understanding of global television and news consumption and their implication for othering and racism. ABEMA case study is very good and innovative, I quite enjoyed reading their work. In order for the article to be considered for publication, it will have to be revised based on the below suggestions. Major comments for the revision: 1) The authors should define the concept of racism. This can be done by appealing to critical race studies. Old fashioned and modern racism are not widely used in the existing literature. It is rather “new cultural racism” and “bio-racism”. Among many others I recommend the authors to conceptualise new cultural racism and bio-racism from the beginning of the paper using the works of Barker (1981), Shohat and Stam (2014) and/or Balibar (1991). 2) In this perspective, racialisation and racial formation could be good concepts to introduce to the paper. I recommend Omi and Winant, Bonilla-Silva and Beck et al. to define these concepts. The paragraph on the history of racism on the 2nd page is a good start but not sufficient. More historical, social and political context needed for readers who do not know the background of the historical tensions between Japan and Korea. Race and racism should be clarified in Japan in relation to its imperialism. “The antipathy toward Koreans by the Japanese can be partly attributed to extreme tension between the two Korean states and Japan over historical and territorial issues” – This really is not helpful to locate racism towards the Korean, please refrain from simplistic approaches. 3) On the second page the authors also discuss global racisms. This part should definitely include anti-refugee racism and Romaphobia because these two forms of racism are widely shared across specific national contexts and they are now widely accepted examples/forms of acceptable forms of racisms on a global scale. 4) The authors should define the concepts of audience behaviour and hate-speech as these are quite used but generally misunderstood terms. Especially the authors should bring in literature and discussions from audience research in relation to news consumption. 5) Several other studies included discussions on anonymity and its relation to online racism such as Keum and Miller 2018, Criss, Michaels and Solomon.. (2020) and Ozduzen, Korkut and Ozduzen 2020. The authors could benefit from a further contextualisation of online racism and how it is related to being anonymous. 6) “The majority of comments posted on these programs promoted an extremist right group and claims on the inferiority of ethnic Koreans in terms of morals, abilities, and appearances” – this looks quite like bio-racism not “new cultural racism”. 7) In terms of labelling the clusters as non-expression, ambiguous, evocative, and non-evocative, the authors need further explanation why they are named as such and what this naming entails. Organisational comments: 1) The main objective of the study/its case study is introduced a bit late (55-56th lines on the 2nd page). It should be obvious from the start that the authors aim to unpick racism against Koreans on an online platform. 2) Same with the “material and methods” section – it should come way before than page 12. 3) There should be a conclusion section which wraps up all arguments and findings. 4) On top of the third page, the paragraph starting with “media exposure” could be connected to the previous paragraph in a better way. 5) Authors may wish to remove phrases like “to the best of our knowledge” and I also recommend the authors to read the piece once more even if the language use is good. Reviewer #2: This manuscript addresses a relevant and interesting research topic, namely it explores the short term effects of television news on the expression of racial prejudice using the case of a Japanese online television provider. While the manuscript generally follows an intriguing idea and has interesting data to investigate, I have quite a few unanswered questions and methodological concerns that left me puzzled after reading it. I want to share my concerns below: MAJOR: The authors explain that to the best of their knowledge, there is no study that investigates the short term effects of television news on the expression of racial prejudice. While this might be so, the authors do not explain why this may be important and different from what we know from studies about news on the internet or on social media. This is particularly relevant because the medium they study “ABEMA” seems to be a very specific and unique hybrid that merges television and social media aspects. What would we expect to be different? MAJOR: While the data from “ABEMA” seems very useful for this study, I have to wonder how generalizable the findings are. Are there any similar media in other countries? I am particularly surprised by the non-existent content moderation that leaves me wondering about the journalistic quality of the platform and the non-representativity of the audiences using it. MAJOR: Different forms of racism have been identified based on a dictionary approach. However, neither the validity of these dictionaries, nor the validation procedures used are being discussed in the manuscript. Automated approaches to text analysis are only as good as the human validation they are based on. Right now, this remains a complete mystery. See https://doi.org/10.1080/10584609.2020.1723752 MAJOR: I have similar concerns with the topic modelling. Was there any cross-researcher validation of the topics that resulted of the topic models? On ensuring the validity of topic models, see https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/19312458.2018.1430754 MAJOR: I may have misunderstood the authors, but are they using the comments to identify the topic of the news casts? If so, this needs to be made clearer. Furthermore, I am wondering whether this measure can really be used to identify the topic of the news cast itself. I would at least want to see some clear evidence that comments and news casts are always clearly connected. MINOR: I am missing a clear definition of the different forms of racism. To sum up, I have quite a few concerns and open questions that need addressed appropriately before publication. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-34442R1 Three clusters of content-audience associations in expression of racial prejudice while consuming online television news PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Takano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The reviewers believe most of their concerns have been addressed, and I concur. But there are a few lingering questions that need clarification. Particularly, one reviewer wants to see a much clear explanation about the validation of the dictionary. Another reviewer suggests that you conceptualize TV audiences using existing audience research literature. Meticulous proofreading is required. I look forward to receiving your revision. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Chang Sup Park, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I believe the authors did an excellent job of revising this paper. The concepts are defined better (such as racism and hate speech) and there is more context for Japan for international readers (more could be done here). The added table is very good, summarising the findings. The part where the authors define racism towards the end of the 15th and the top of the 16th pages is good, but it concentrates a bit too much on McConahay’s take on racism. I still think TV audiences should be conceptualised in the paper using existing audience research literature. Also, the paper would still benefit from a good read of its English: for example, imposing a time-pressures -15th page/Not romas but roma – 16th page. Also, I think this sentence should be removed: “However, we do not have intention to exclude conceptualizations other than McConahay’s”. Finally, on the 18th page, right before the title “results”, there are some fragmented very short paragraphs – could be good if the authors turn them into better a better flowing longer paragraph. Looking forward to reading the article’s published version. Reviewer #2: I want to thank the editor and the authors for having given me the opportunity to review this manuscript a second time. I really believe that the authors tried to address all my previous comments. Generally, I do believe that the manuscript is now ready to publish. However, I would like them to clarify a little better what they did in the validation of the dictionary first. Particularly part 2 of their validation seems a bit ominous: "2) two trained coders independently evaluated each comment whether they match the definition of relevant form of racism". When validating the dictionaries, did you test whether it the respective racism dictionary discriminates against non-racist comments or against comments including the second type of racism? Judging from the high validity measures, I fear that they did the former. So, we don't really know how well it discriminates between the two types of racism. If it actually is the latter, I am a bit skeptical that the authors may have over-fitted the dictionary to their specific data. Otherwise all concerns have been addressed either by clarification or addressing the limitation in the text. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Three clusters of content-audience associations in expression of racial prejudice while consuming online television news PONE-D-20-34442R2 Dear Dr. Takano, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chang Sup Park, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Looking forward to reading this research published! Many thanks for all the authors to adequately and meticulously address all of my revision requests. Reviewer #2: Thanks for these additions! I have no further questions. I am looking forward to see this published! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr Ozge Ozduzen Reviewer #2: No |
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