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PONE-D-21-08006 The association between guidelines adherence and clinical outcomes during pregnancy in a cohort of women with cardiac co-morbidities. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Millington, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In my opinion, this is an interesting article because heart disease in pregnancy is an area of little available evidence. Currently, it has a lot of relevance since it is becoming a significant cause of maternal morbidity and mortality in both developed and developing countries. Despite this relevance and international guidelines that highlight the subject, most of the topics are recommendations made by experts who have little available evidence. This type of study helps to support the recommendations of the guidelines. It is especially relevant to highlight the role of multidisciplinary groups, the early detection of heart disease in pregnant women, and the timely direction to the best care centers where it is possible to have a better follow-up of the guidelines. Also, it is interesting to see that some pathologies, in particular, alert the health team, and they allow improving the standards of care. But, it is also a challenge to bring these levels of adherence to all patients, even when the diseases do not seem to be so complex. This kind of article shows the work to be done and can raise awareness to achieve better results. However, I consider it pertinent to review the following aspects: 1. To understand this article better, it is necessary to thoroughly review the study where the authors evaluated adherence to the guidelines. However, It could be helpful to add a brief description of the design aspects and the previous publication to permit the readers to inquire about the topic. 2. I consider it is essential to highlight the difference between the three hospitals mentioned. 3. Although maternal mortality was very low, the number of patients who presented with cardiac arrest was significant, so it would be relevant to report which were the pathologies that were associated with cardiac arrest in the description of outcomes (it could be a table) 4. Cesarean section deliveries were very high. It would be interesting to know the indication for cesarean section (cardiac vs obstetric) since most heart diseases can end by vaginal delivery, leaving a cesarean section for a cardiac indication to very selected cases. It would be essential to know more characteristics that help define why the high rate of cesarean sections. The authors mention that state practices do not suggest elective cesarean section as the first option (and neither do the other pregnancy and heart disease guidelines) but, they recommend that this enhanced the results for both: mother and baby. So, it is essential to know in which scenarios the cesarean section was performed because if it was in severe and unstable conditions it would be justified. 5. 30-40% of patients had deviation in the delivery plan. As far as possible, given the retrospective nature, it would be good to know why the change occurred (change in the clinical condition that caused an indicated change or preference of the treating physician), as this has implications for quality of care and the impact of the concept of the multidisciplinary group. 6. The acronyms should be reviewed as some do not correspond or are not referenced before their use. Reviewer #2: This was a sub-study of a retrospective cross sectional observational audit of 261 women that evaluated adherence to clinical practice guidelines for South Australian pregnant women between 2003-2012 previously published in PloS one in 2020. Although an interesting topic, it was difficult to understand the exact aims and hypothesis of this specific paper. Due to my confusion with the aims of this current paper, I reviewed the original submission which was clinically very useful as it looked at the assessment and the relationship to outcome as well as barriers to care. Although the results were reported as adherence versus non-adherence the tables and methods did not really reflect this. Results were reported for two groups: Those with pre-existent cardiac issues and those with acquired cardiac issues. Table 1 shows multiple frequencies of cardiac outcomes, multiple obstetric clinical outcomes, and multiple neonatal clinical outcomes for the two different cardiac groups and the two groups combined. I believe the hypothesis was the association between adherence to guidelines and outcomes, but if that was the case it would be important to truly show characteristics between the adherent and non-adherent groups prior to showing the regression. Multiple clinical outcomes were presented: Cardiac variables, obstetric variables and neonatal variables. Specific questions include: 1) Was there data on congenital neonatal conditions, in particular neonatal heart disease and how did that relate to the outcomes? 2) What was included in the multivariate model? 3) Was there a power analysis done for the outcomes of interest, many were rare events 4) Most of the presentation of results seems to be a comparison of the outcomes in the preexistant versus Reviewer #3: SUMMARY Pregnant women with cardiac conditions are at increased risk of maternal, obstetric and neonatal complications. The two broad categories of cardiac conditions in pregnancy are preexistent heart disorders and pregnancy-acquired cardiac conditions. In both South Australia and Western Australia, statewide guidelines integrate all levels of evidence to aspire to reduce maternal mortality and morbidity. The same research group demonstrated in 2020 (1) that the adherence to the statewide guidelines developed and available in South Australia since 2010 is suboptimal across three SA Health public metropolitan, university-affiliated hospitals and variance in the level of adherence across the three hospitals correlated with the exposure to higher acuity cases. Aim of the present sub-study is to describe the frequency of clinical morbidities, outcomes, and interventions in the preexistent and acquired cardiac groups of women with cardiac conditions during pregnancy and to determine the association between the adherence score to the guidelines and clinical variables. Clinical outcome variables are divided in cardiac, obstetric and neonatal. Descriptive frequencies of the categorical clinical variables for the overall cohort of women and the two cardiac groups are reported. Primary cardiac outcomes (maternal cardiac death, cardiac arrest, decompensated heart failure (HF) and acute pulmonary oedema, acute myocardial infarction (AMI), and a new diagnosis of valvular heart disease (VHD) or congenital heart disease (CHD) diagnosis during pregnancy) were more frequent in acquired cardiac group except for diagnosis of additional cardiac pathologies such as VHD or CHD during pregnancy. On the contrary neonatal morbidities and outcomes were more frequent in the preexistent cardiac group. In the multivariable model statistically significant association has been found between the adherence score and the following cardiac variables: the stronger association was with women with heart failure, than women in the preexistent cardiac group (p = 0.004), those women who had balloon valvoplasty (p = 0.004), those who required cardiac surgery (p = 0.041), and the investigations of CTPA inclusive of an echocardiogram (p = 0.047), whilst adjusting for all other covariates. No association with cardiac arrest. Among obstetric variables elective LSCS mode of delivery had the statistically most robust association with an improved guideline adherence score (p < 0.001). Other associated obstetric variables were emergency LSCS (p = 0.0120), diagnosis of preeclampsia (p = 0.034) and placenta praevia complication (p = 0.011). The only neonatal variable reporting a statistically significant association with the guideline adherence score was NICU admission. The study is very interesting for many reasons: first of all because cardiac pathology during pregnancy is a challenging field of increasing interest with few data and evidence reported in literature. The present study is well done and well argued nevertheless there are several points that deserve to be clarified. MINOR ISSUES 1. In Discussion is enphasized that the association between the adherence score to the guidelines and several clinical variables indicate improved outcomes with greater adherence (line 315), but this statement must be better argued. It is implied that the outcomes are improved with greater GL adherence because the group of newly diagnosed women has a lower adherence to the guidelines and worse outcomes but it needs to be explained. 2. Since to be aware of the presence of heart disease and follow GL antenatal care is critical to evitate worse complications (ie maternal cardiac death, severe morbidity after cardiac arrest, Discussion line 319-346) is there any parameter in the score that can increase the sensitivity of the diagnosis of heart disease in the first trimester? Can you specify if are there GL indications on routine CV screening and if are considered in your score? (Discussion lines 359-369) 3. Discussion lines 389-397 needs to be clarified: The elective LSCS mode of delivery showed a statistically significant association with increased adherence to the guidelines. The rationale for elective LSCS included common obstetrical indications but it prompted early admission to hospital for cardiac optimisation In our cohort, the high rate of elective LSCS (although not considered the first option in thestatewide guidelines) but with increased guideline adherence scores related to other aspects of the guidelines yet improved the overall clinical outcome for both mother and baby. This result supports the safety of elective LSCS in severe and unstable cardiac conditions. What unstable cardiac conditions? What kind of cardiac optimization is done ? 4. In Methods (line131-134) needs to be clarified how is calculated “the total adherence score”, unless reporting table of the previous study, at least by mentioning the criteria by which it is computed. Moreover the sentence “The researchers agreed on the minimum acceptable score of 17 for the newly acquired cardiac group and 35 for the preexistent cardiac group”. Needs to be better explained. 5. In results when it comes to mean guideline adherence score for groups of patients is not clear how it is calculated (e.g at lines 284-285: Women with HF had a mean guideline adherence score of 3.546 units higher than those who did not (mean difference =3.546, 95% CI, (1.689, 5.403)). REF (1) Millington S, Arstall M, Dekker G, Magarey J, Clark R. Adherence to clinical practice guidelines for South Australian pregnant women with cardiac conditions between 2003 and 2013. PloS one. 2020;15(3) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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