Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03889 Complete mitochondrial genomes of four species of praying mantises (Dictyoptera, Mantidae) with ribosomal second structure, evolutionary and phylogenetic analyses PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Smagghe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. One reviewer identify some minor editorial issues that would improve the grammar and presentation of the study and is worth addressing since this would improve the manuscript overall. The other reviewer identify a number of methodological issues, notably that some genes that was missing might be present in the genome. I suggest that the authors look at all of these methodological issues and address them since they will all improve the manuscript significantly and prevent unnecessary errors that might detract from the study. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the manuscript titled 'Complete mitochondrial genomes of four species of praying mantises (Dictyoptera, Mantidae) with ribosomal second structure, evolutionary and phylogenetic analyses' the author present the complete mitochondrial genome of four species of mantid. Overall the study is good and should be published but some revisions need to be addressed before publishing. 1) The authors need to have a native English speaker review the document for grammar. It is not unintelligible but there are many spots where it is difficult to follow or does not sound scientific. 2) Throughout the document, the species D. truncata and D. lobata are converted to truncate and lobate due to autcorrect from their word processor (it actually just did it now in this response portal). It is annoying but an easy fix. 3) I would like to see a table or tables that list the gene order and position for all ORFs for each species, this generally is a useful reference for other readers. Reviewer #2: The authors sequence and annotate the mitogenomes of four mantises species and combine this new data with existing mantis data to estimate phylogenetic relationships in the group. They find a few missing genes in some of the four new mitogenomes, but tRNA secondary structure and codon usage was similar to other mantises. The phylogeny also tended to agree with current taxonomy. I think the study is definitely a worthwhile addition to insect mitogenomics. I particularly appreciate that you discuss your findings in the context of insect and mantis mitogenomics. However, I do have several issues that should be addressed, some more major then others: 1. You need to re-work some of the structure in the Introduction. For example, the second paragraph introduced mitogenomes and then abruptly switches to introducing the taxonomy of mantises. I would separate these. 2. Because the Methods comes last, I would include some brief methodological details in the Results and Discussion section. 3. Please include more specific results. For example, you vaguely state that there is a high A+T% and list the most-used codons. Please provide specific values in the text. 4. You begin discussing the utility of using cox1 as a barcoding gene (starting line 151), but this discussion appears abruptly. Why is this relevant? Is it related to your nucleotide diversity results? Please explain. 5. I’m a little confused by your sampling strategy. Did you sample the 35 mantis species mentioned in lines 189-190? Or were these taken from GenBank? 6. I am not convinced you are actually missing the atp8 genes. In my experience, it can be difficult to annotate this gene, and you often have to look for it manually based on ORFs, etc. It also seems like there is a non-coding region on the 5’ end of your atp6 genes when a “missing” atp8 is reported. I would bet that is the atp8 gene. Also, were your missing genes confirmed with your PCR step? Finally, it looks like both atp6 and atp8 are missing from one species (bottom left in Fig 1), but I didn’t see any discussion of this. Please elaborate. 7. Did you confirm that these assembled mitogenomes are in fact complete and circular? I recommend doing this, especially since you report missing genes. 8. Please provide more methodological details. For example, how did you calculate Ka/KS? What were your PCR conditions? What GBlocks parameters did you use? 9. There are several portions of the manuscript that are difficult to read. I recommend going through the text and again and edit for grammar, awkward phrasing, etc. Some minor comments: Line 25: There is no context for referencing the “Schwarz and Roy (2019) taxonomic system.” Perhaps just say “the latest taxonomy.” Line 31: No need to say “respectively.” Same in line 82. Line 42: Be careful about using “bugs” when you mean “insects.” Entomologists will strongly object to this usage… Lines 74-78 should be in the Introduction Line 100: Why do you rule out this second possibility? Please elaborate. Line 144: Please provide a brief overview of dN/dS ratio (i.e., dN/dS > 1 is evidence for positive selection, < 1 for purifying selection, and =1 for neutral). Line 217: Confusing phrasing. Please re-write. It’s not clear what “miniscule to align means.” Figure 1: It’s not clear which mitogenomes go with each species. Please add names to the figure. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-03889R1 Complete mitochondrial genomes of four species of praying mantises (Dictyoptera, Mantidae) with ribosomal second structure, evolutionary and phylogenetic analyses PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Smagghe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Minor issues were raised which can be considered since they will improve the manuscript somewhat. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 09 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ben J Mans, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Thank you for your thorough responses and edits to your manuscript based on my comments. I think the manuscript has been improved. I do have a few comments that still should be addressed, based on my first round of comments: 1. I still think the paragraphs in the Introduction are a little disconnected. Perhaps switch paragraph #2 (on the utility of mitogenomes for mantid phylogenetics) and paragraph #3 (on mantid taxonomy). 2. I think you should add the AT% to the main text, not just in a supplement. 3. I’m still somewhat skeptical that the atp8 gene is actually missing, but your combination of NGS and PCR results are more convincing. It is difficult for me to fully evaluate this claim without access to the sequence data; but as is stated in the manuscript, atp8 and other genes are missing from other taxa. Is this the first case of missing mt genes in mantises? 4. I recommend one more round of editing for writing clarity. For example, Lines 50-51 are a little confusing, and should probably be split up into two sentences. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Complete mitochondrial genomes of four species of praying mantises (Dictyoptera, Mantidae) with ribosomal second structure, evolutionary and phylogenetic analyses PONE-D-21-03889R2 Dear Dr. Smagghe, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ben J Mans, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-03889R2 Complete mitochondrial genomes of four species of praying mantises (Dictyoptera, Mantidae) with ribosomal second structure, evolutionary and phylogenetic analyses Dear Dr. Smagghe: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ben J Mans Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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