Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 18, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-05546 Ward-Level Factors Associated with Methicillin-Resistant Staphylococcus aureus Acquisition – an Electronic Medical Records study in Singapore PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tun, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to comments from the reviewers, I have the following comments and suggestions: 1. Describe the baseline infection prevention practices in place for MRSA colonized patients and whether these are the same or different in ICUs vs wards or by specialty. 2. For the finding that longer length of stay is associated with lower risk of MRSA acquisition, the authors speculate that this may reflect stricter infection control measures in the in-patient wards in which patient length of stay is longer. Are there any data to support this? Are longer-stay patients typically housed in certain specific wards? Could this represent bias or confounding in the data? See also the next comment relative to this finding. 3. The authors only brief touch on the significance of the following results: “The results of the latter showed that hand hygiene compliance itself was not associated with MRSA acquisition rate in the subset of wards for which this information was available, after controlling for other factors. However, compared to the main analysis, the estimates were substantially different for ward specialty, presence of MRSA cohorting beds, and median length of stay (S3 Table)”. This merits more discussion, particularly as the length of stay association changed quite a bit, as well as the ward-specific risk estimates after adjusting for hand hygiene compliance. 4. Supplemental figure 1 shows decrease in acquisition over time. Is there a need to stratify the analysis by time period or otherwise account for temporal changes? Please also see Reviewer 2's comment regarding accounting for different time periods in the analysis. 5. In Table 1, admission prevalence should be expressed as a percentage. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 31 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article examines ward-level factors including network measures based on patient transfer patterns to identify ward characteristics that are associated with MRSA acquisition rates. This article adds some expected and unexpected findings to the literature and represents a beginning to further exploration into the ways that patient transfer may or may not contribute to the spread of MRSA across wards within a hospital. General comment: It would be surprising if ward connectivity measures as you defined them influenced ward-level MRSA acquisition after controlling for the ward admission prevalence, do you agree? Because what matters is not the ward connectivity at the aggregate level, but how ward connectivity between individual ward-pairs corresponds with the movement of MRSA between wards. But you are not able to capture that in the current way that the model has been structured. Do you have any thoughts about how you may be able to restructure the model so that connectivity measures provide more explicit information about how different wards contribute to acquisition rates via patient transfer? Specific comments: Please clarify what ‘the Patient Affordability Simulation System (PASS)” is referring to on lines 13-14 on page 5. Is that the name of the dataset, or the electronic medical record, or a system that interacts with the electronic medical record system? Please clarify whether or not the “Twenty observations of healthcare staff hand hygiene activities…” (lines 9-10, page 6) are done for each of the 40 random audits each month. Is there any potential bias in the estimates of hand-hygiene compliance? If so, how might this bias impact your results and conclusions? Can you add just a brief sentence making more explicit what data were linked? In particular, was the hand-hygiene compliance included in the linked dataset? If so, probably linked at the unit level, but not patient-level, right? It seems that the Network analysis data is created to correspond with the hand-hygiene compliance data. Are they both included in the ‘Data linkage’ step? If not, perhaps the ‘Data linkage’ paragraph can go after the ‘MRSA Active Surveillance Cultures’ paragraph. In the calculation of ‘patient-weeks at risk’, the censoring time is the time of collection of a positive MRSA sample. In reality, time at risk could be any time between the last negative test and the first positive test. How might this impact your study? Clarify how ward MRSA admission prevalence is computed (lines 9-15, page 8). Is it the number of positive tests at ward admission/transfer divided by the total number of tests that occur at ward admission/transfer? Why were you unsuccessful at linking 100% of MRSA screening results to PASS (lines 18-19, page 9)? Reviewer #2: The authors study the co-relations/associations between MRSA cases (or acquisition rates) and ward characteristics, including the network weighted in-degrees, given by patient transfers. This is a valid and relevant study. I have a few technical suggestions/comments: - Data spans 4 years and were divided into quarters. It is unclear to me how the authors took into account these different periods in the analysis. The ward population varies considerable over the year and this may have an effect in terms of screening, for example. If we look at table 2, the confidence intervals are quite broad suggesting a large variance in numbers. Reporting data for different quarters (e.g. 4 quarters, with averages per quarter in different years) or different years (e.g. averages over all quarters in the same year) might be more appropriate for a comparative analysis and to reduce the effect of high variation of inpatient flow. - In the discussion, it could be pointed out that other network structures may be relevant as indicators or to be associated with MRSA cases. In-degree is an important but very simple network measure. -similarly, the abstract reads "We did not find evidence that network measures of 20 ward connectivity, including in-degree, weighted in-degree, ..." But in reality, the authors study only in-degree and weighted in-degree. This sentence (and also "relative connectivity" in the conclusion) should be rewritten to make this point clear. - Dynamic contact networks of patients and MRSA spread in hospitals. Sci Rep 10, 9336 (2020). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-020-66270-9 is very much related to this study and could help improving the contextualization in the introduction and findings reported in the discussion section. minor: - I suggest the authors review the text to remove a few typos here and there and improve a little the grammar - the CI is not always reported in a standard format (see e.g. p12, row 4), I suggest to always report using brackets [] - In p6, "<48 hours" should be "in less than 48 hours". 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Ward-Level Factors Associated with Methicillin-Resistant Staphylococcus aureus Acquisition – an Electronic Medical Records study in Singapore PONE-D-21-05546R1 Dear Dr. Tun, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Surbhi Leekha Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-05546R1 Ward-Level Factors Associated with Methicillin-Resistant Staphylococcus aureus Acquisition – an Electronic Medical Records study in Singapore Dear Dr. Tun: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Surbhi Leekha Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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