Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 26, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-02755 Significance of serum FGF-23 for risk assessment of contrast-induced nephropathy and clinical outcomes in patients undergoing coronary angiography PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Huang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all the points raised during the review process by the two reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present their study "Significance of serum FGF-23 for risk assessment of contrast-induced nephropathy and clinical outcomes in patients undergoing coronary angiography". I congratulate the authors for this work which highlights the value of FGF-23 in the risk-classification of AKI, in particular CA-AKI. Here are my comments to improve this report: 1-The authors should use a more contemporary term such as contrast-associated AKI (CA-AKI) rather than contrast-induced nephropathy (CIN) as it has been recently adopted by Radiology and Nephrology groups (PMID: 31961246), particularly when the cause of AKI cannot be attributed with 100% certainty 2-One limitation to acknowledge is the low incidence of CIN/CA-AKI (8.3%) and the lack of severity classification. Therefore, I suggest the authors to report the number of CIN/CA-AKI cases in which SCr doubled from baseline value according to tertiles of FGF-23 (if any). Further, major adverse kidney events (MAKE) could be also reported if data were collected (e.g., death, dialysis dependence, eGFR drop >30% from baseline or SCr >=50% above baseline). The latter outcome could be explored within the first 90 days of contrast exposure and also reported according to tertiles of FGF-23. This is a more relevant clinical outcome with very low incidence (<5%) according to the recent PRESERVE trial 3-Reporting MACE is a little misleading given the low number of cases of CV death, ischemic stroke and non-fatal MI. It is clear that the weight of the association is mostly driven by all-cause death. I suggest the authors to report all-cause death as the main dependent variable in the models 4-It is not clear if the authors measured intact vs. C-term FGF-23 levels. Please clarify 5-Consider citing other studies highlighting the association of FGF-23 levels with AKI and MAKE (PMID: 32123869) 6-Please specify if the coronary angiography procedures were all elective or if emergent cases were also included 7-Please specify the duration of isotonic saline infusion before the exposure to contrast 8-Please add to the Methods text the medications included in the multivariable models 9-The discussion of FGF-23 data in CKD is too long, perhaps focusing on the interaction between FGF-23, Klotho and vitD in AKI could be more informative for the reader, specially because the authors highlight the lack of these measures as a limitation of the study -although no background information was provided in the Discussion Reviewer #2: To the authors, The manuscript by Shao-Sung et al describes an interesting association between FGF-23 levels and CIN and MACE in patients submitted to coronary angiography. Despite the multivariate analysis, which included most comorbidites, findings are mainly observational and a causal relationship between FGF-23 and CIN and outcomes could not be demonstrated. Nevertheless, a significant association was clearly found. Accordingly, I suggest that in the causal relationship discussion, authors should include that FGF-23 is likely signalling a worse health status in the FGF-23 upper level group, since this group presented significantly more comorbidities (DM, CKD, previous MI and stroke) an more importantly, higher inflammation (higher PCR) and especially lower eGFR. Therefore, it is very likely that this worse health status was actually responsible for the results: greater CIN and worse MACE. For this reason, I suggest that the statement, in both conclusions (abstract and main text), about reduction or modulation of FGF-23 could prevent CIN should be removed since a causal relationship was not proven. Instead, authors should include the MACE analysis together with CIN results in the conclusions. Minor points: Figures - level of significance should be pointed or demonstrated between which groups (upper vs. lower) Figure 1 - correct intermidiate title group (Intermediate) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Javier Neyra Reviewer #2: Yes: Luis Yu [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Significance of serum FGF-23 for risk assessment of contrast-associated acute kidney injury and clinical outcomes in patients undergoing coronary angiography PONE-D-21-02755R1 Dear Dr. Huang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Please, note that Reviewer 1 recommend the authors to briefly acknowledge in the Limitations that the weight of the composite outcomes (MAKE, MACE) is mostly driven by mortality. This will further guide the reader in the interpretation of the results. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed this reviewer's comments and suggestions and have significantly improved their manuscript. I recommend the authors to briefly acknowledge in the Limitations that the weight of the composite outcomes (MAKE, MACE) is mostly driven by mortality. This will further guide the reader in the interpretation of the results. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Javier Neyra Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-02755R1 Significance of serum FGF-23 for risk assessment of contrast-associated acute kidney injury and clinical outcomes in patients undergoing coronary angiography Dear Dr. Huang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Emmanuel A Burdmann Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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