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PONE-D-20-39268 Easter Island Rano Raraku crater lake basin: geochemical characterization and implications for the Moai cult society PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bortolini, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two reviewers have given a favorable opinion of the manuscript so I look forward to seeing a new version with minor revisions. My apologies for the delay in finding reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript refers mostly to climate related changes in the volcano crater lake. to My comments refer to the hydrological aspects and not to the paleoclimate results, which seems to me correct. Anthropic dominated situations like this are common in mountain wetlands. The manuscript would benefit from an additional figure with a cross section of the volcano, the lake, the sediments (including the maximum level in the past), and the visible or inferred hydrogeological conditions in the flanks and in the surroundings. The Cl balance seem too coarse and the origin and value of Cl in rainfall is not mentioned. Under local conditions the values are quite variable and the dry atmospheric deposition should be added, as it is surely relevant. Lake water has the characteristics of rain and intra crater runoff evaporation, but rainfall data also show evaporation during the fall. The presentation of the water.chloride balance should be improved to make them more understandable (lines 265 and ....) The age, alteration degree of the strato and pyroclastic volcano and erosion + organic sediments explain the existence of the lake, as in many other volcanic areas, but some comments should be added on the existence of a natural top drainage level and traces of possible springs or seeps in the outer cone surface and surroundings, if there are some observation ponts or excavations. Line 56 Scoria-ceous delete - Line 181 2H/1H add 1 Reviewer #2: The manuscript is well organized and well written making it easy to read. The authors presented a very good and detailed geochemical characterization of Rano Raraku freshwater lake. The authors used a very comprehensive and detailed experimental design to achieve their goal, which was to investigate the modern environmental process of the lake and its implications in past environmental changes and how those changes in the lake may have influenced in ancient cultures that inhabited on the island. The authors performed major ions, trace and rare earth elements, and diagnostic elements ratios analyses in different compartments of the lake: water (surface water and water column), sediment (sediment-water interface and bed sediments) and topsoil. They also performed an isotopic composition in the water. The materials and methods used are very complete and strong that supports the results found. I recommend the manuscript for publication. This manuscript is an important contribution to the worldwide studies focused in freshwater systems, which in general are scarcer than marine ones. The only weakness of the work is that the authors begin the introduction directly by pointing to the lake under study. I think that before starting to talk about the lake under study, the authors should highlight the importance of the study carried out in Rano Raraku Lake in a more global context. What is known about this lake compared to other freshwater lakes in the world? (previous studies). Why is important to study the Rano Raraku lake? What is unknown about this lake that has not yet been studied previously? The authors should highlight the importance of studying this lake compared to others. In lines 98-100 the authors name three previous studies in this lake “This study expands upon studies of major elements (Si, Ca, S, Fe and Ti) (Saez et al., 2009), pH and electrical conductivity (Geller, 1992) and macro and microfossils in a soil survey (Horrocks et al., 2012). The results of these studies led the authors to ask questions that led them to the present study?. What are those questions, if any? I wonder if the studies mentioned above served as a baseline for the development of this study. If so, I think that a briefly mention of the main results of those studies may contribute to understand better the importance of the present study. Material and Methods Well detailed and complete. I only suggest to the authors that they add what statistical analysis they used for the significant differences they show in the results and the statistical program used. Line 146: “at -27.12220, -109.29031”: I suggest putting P1 in place of the coordinates to continue with the same writing format. Line 158: “HDPE bottles”: What does HDPE means? Are special bottles? Results and Discussion Well developed and complete with reading easy to follow except in a few cases mentioned below: Lines 219-220: “These values are within the range of the Eriksson (1952) equation that suggests Cl- values between 6 and 12 mg L-1 (in meteoric waters at ~1 km from the sea).” This sentence is a bit confusing for me. What does Ericksson's equation show? When the authors say these values are within the range… What values do the authors refer to? The values from table S4 correspond to the soil and the ones from Eriksson (1952) equation correspond to meteoric water. Also, Cl- values between 6 and 12 mg L-1 in meteoric waters are much smaller than found in the present study. Please clarify. Line 247 “Chloride mass balance section”: This section is a bit confusing for me. In lines 271-274 the authors say “In this study the precipitation record was also used to determine the amount of Cl- supplied by rainfall. Assuming the chloride content to be constant in rainfall (8 mg L-1), the amount of the ion that accumulated in the lake since 1954 is ~ 29,000 kg”. Previously in lines 263-265 the authors said “The precipitation record was used to calculate the amount of Cl- provided solely by precipitation since 1954 and resulted in a total of approximately 40,000 kg”. I do not understand well what the difference between these two sentences is. It seems similar to me. In both cases the authors are using the precipitation record to calculate the amount of Cl supply by rainfall/precipitation since 1954. If that is not the case please clarify. Also, in some cases is a bit difficult to follow how the authors made the calculations of Cl in this section. As examples: Line 263 “we estimate that the amount of Cl- input to the basin, provided solely by meteoric water, averaged 680 kg y-1 (at 2017 lake level conditions)”. The value 680 kg y-1 comes from 41000kg/60years? Line 265 “...of approximately 40,000 kg”: How is this value calculated? Line 274 “...is ~ 29,000 kg”: the same here. Please clarify. Lines 310-312 “In water samples sulfates were significantly depleted (i.e. SO42-/Cl- ratio ~ 10-3) compared to seawater (SO4 2-/Cl- = 0.14) suggesting that sulfate reduction may be involved in the decomposition of the organic matter”. Yes, but the authors should take into account that sulfate concentrations are typically two orders of magnitude higher in marine environments than in freshwater ones. I wonder if the difference in sulfate concentration between these two environments can affect the results. Is it possible to know if the difference found by the authors is not due to the lower concentration of sulphates in freshwater? Line 324-325 “The Mn/Fe ratios are substantially lower than values found both in Rano Raraku water and in SPM (t-test of the means provides p-value lower than 10-4)”: Which is the meaning of this sentence? Please clarify. What Mn/Fe ratios do the authors refers to? Which samples? What statistical program was used for the analysis? Line 361 “(p-value = 0.16)”: What statistical analysis and statistical program the authors used? Line 398 “(r2 = 0.983; p-value = 0.0089”: What statistical analysis and statistical program the authors used? Line 400-401 “Therefore, the precipitation of carbonates enriched in Mg and Sr depletes the water column of these elements”: I think this is contradicted by line 385 where the authors say that the water is enriched in Mg. Please clarify. Line 424 “(Elderfield et al, 1982)”: Is this the correct form? Two authors are listed in the references. Please clarify. Line 425 “∗”: What does it mean? Line 432 “(p-value < 10-4)”: What statistical analysis and statistical program the authors used? Line 435 “(p-value < 10-4)”: What statistical analysis and statistical program the authors used? Line 476 “(r2 = -0.905; p-value = 0.013)”: What statistical analysis and statistical program the authors used? Line 510 “Rull et al. 2016b”: Is this the correct form? Only one author is listed in the references. Please clarify. Line 522 “Di Napoli et al. 2019”: Is this the correct form? 2018 is listed in the references. Please clarify. Line 582 “References”: The authors should check the list references. See other minor comments in the text. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Rapa Nui (Easter Island) Rano Raraku crater lake basin: geochemical characterization and implications for the Moai cult society PONE-D-20-39268R1 Dear Dr. Bortolini, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: no new specific comments. I agree with the authors thar dry deposition is raraly measured as such but as a difference between bulk deposition and only wet deposition. My mention of dry depossitio was only to call the attention that bulk depossition may be significantly larger than only wet deposition as deduces from point samples of rainfall in gauges that only open prior to rain or are frequently washed, Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-39268R1 Rapa Nui (Easter Island) Rano Raraku crater lake basin: geochemical characterization and implications for the Ahu-Moai Period Dear Dr. Bortolini: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Gregory Carling Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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