Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 9, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-38717 Methodology and applicability of the human contact burn injury model: A systematic review PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Springborg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. The comments from the reviewers are attached. Overall, the manuscript has potential to serve as a valuable resource for researchers interested in the contact burn injury model of inducing primary and secondary hyperalgesia. My primary concern, however, is that the manuscript is burdened by redundancies, which makes it rather overwhelming to read and interpret. I would ask that the authors consider the comments of the reviewers and in turn attempt to streamline the results section accordingly, condensing where possible. In addition, I would request that the authors confirm they searched for previously published systematic reviews/meta-analyses on the topic of contact burn injuries. This needs to be done to avoid duplicate efforts and multiple reviews written needlessly on the same topic. If there are none, please indicate as such in the manuscript. Finally, please consider using the AMSTAR tool to evaluate your systematic review and ensure it meets the highest methodological standard. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript provides a very thorough overview and summary of the contact burn injury model. The background section of the introduction is well written and succinct, however following sections providing additional background are lengthy and could be condensed and incorporated into the introduction, methods, and discussion. The methods are well written, however, substantially more information is needed on the quality assessment of articles. The results are rather repetitive, and the discussion is lengthy, and could be condensed. My main concern with the manuscript is the lack of removal of low-quality intervention studies. It is unclear to what end the author’s main findings are derived from low quality studies compared to high quality. I would suggest incorporating a more critical assessment of the literature throughout the discussion. Specific comments attached separately. Reviewer #2: This systematic review by Springborg and colleagues aimed to synthesize data from studies using human burn injury models. This is an important work and, for the most part, provides a nice overview of many human model parameters as applied in the literature. It is very comprehensive, which introduces some difficulties in reporting clear, concise and synthesized results due to obvious variation between studies. I only have a few comments: Page 12, line 125: "QST…….by application of graded chemical, electrical,…." What chemical and electrical stimuli are the authors referring to? To the reviewer`s knowledge, classical QST protocols do not employ such stimuli. I would like to commend the authors on their consistent use of terminology, as they are certainly well aware of the ongoing controversy regarding 'central sensitization' being used as a broad term in human studies in contrast to the very well-defined neuronal construct in basic animal studies. I am glad to see that the psychophysical terminology was used and distinctions between primary and secondary hyperalgesia were made appropriately. This was especially important for the interventional trials as some drugs will affect the primary input and the 2HA, respectively. However, with respect to the "timing of intervention" it would be interesting to know if the studies aimed at investigating whether the drugs affected the induction of hyperalgesia or lead to a reversal of an already established state of hyperalgesia? In my personal opinion, only the former would constitute a true "anti-hyperalgesic effect". The latter could just be called "analgesic effect" considering CBI as a human surrogate pain model. In table 6 the use of "assessments of central mechanisms" is recommended. These tests are merely listed in the outcomes section in the introduction. Please explain the methods/paradigms in a bit more detail, especially with regard to what mechanisms are potentially investigated with the respective paradigms. Thank you. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-38717R1 Methodology and applicability of the human contact burn injury model: A systematic review PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Springborg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Review 2 has made a number of important suggestions, which the authors should consider. There is a need to consider the effect of heterogeneity between studies and the impact this has on the overall interpretation, as well as update to current standards. I am hopeful that, with a fair response to these comments, the manuscript will be satisfactory and ready for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, John Kramer Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have substantially improved the manuscript through the revision process. Many redundancies have been removed, improving the readability of the manuscript. The majority of my comments have been adequately addressed. I have a few minor comments for the authors consideration. The first should be very easy to include, and the remaining two may be worth consideration (or perhaps authors already considered this and sought not to include as it did not improve the interpretation). PRISMA Diagram and checklist. These are the old versions of the PRISMA diagram and checklist. These were both updated in 2020. Consider updated to keep in line with PRISMA guidelines. I previously suggested authors further discuss their quality assessment. Following revisions, the authors have pointed out that only intervention studies were assessed for quality. Are there no available tools to assess article quality for non-intervention studies? To that end, while the quality of intervention studies has been assessed, do the authors believe there would be any value in also using a tool to evaluate the quality of the data/findings from each study (using the GRADE tool perhaps)? Throughout the results and discussion, there is clearly much heterogeneity in study findings. The general sense from the review is there is still “much work to do” in terms of using this model. An example of this would be the perplexing findings of the non-responsiveness of the model to anti-inflammatory drugs, despite being an inflammatory model. One avenue to address these concerns may be in weighing the quality of findings (in terms of Oxford and GRADE tools) to reach some more definitive conclusions. As it stands now, the quality assessment for the most part appears to be for the reader’s information, rather than directly used to help guide the synthesis of findings. It would be interesting to see if incorporating study quality alongside such contrasting findings could provide some clarity in such circumstances. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Methodology and applicability of the human contact burn injury model: A systematic review PONE-D-20-38717R2 Dear Dr. Springborg, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, John Kramer Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Unclear to me why Figure 1 (PRISMA diagram) is referenced in the introduction. Please consider removing the "?" in Table 4. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-38717R2 Methodology and applicability of the human contact burn injury model: A systematic review Dear Dr. Springborg: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. John Kramer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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