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PONE-D-20-25007 How norm violators rise and fall in the eyes of others: The role of sanctions PLOS ONE Dear Dr. van Vianen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In the revised version of the paper, please address the reviewers' comments listed below. Additionally, please better explain the meaning of the variables you have used to validate the two studies. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 04 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper tackles an interesting and important topic, it is well written and all analyses are described clearly, including limitations and indicating which aspects where exploratory or previously hypothesized. I thus have only a few minor comments: - the authors remain a bit silent about which online participant pools they use. Is this something comparable to MTurk, or are these student participants? - Some of the arguments for the difference in effects between the first study and previous studies are based on arguments about the German Railway norms, however, the second study then is (again, as previous studies, I guess) done in the Netherlands. It would be interesting to understand whether this - as opposed to the design differences - plays a role for the effects, whether norms and norm abidance are perceived differently in the two systems. - the authors themselves discuss that one problem with the results is the hypothetical character. There are by now several studies from the team of Marie-Claire Villeval (Lyon) which use real settings to study similar questions. I am wondering whether the authors are aware of this research and whether they might consider doing more real world studies in the future. - in their motivational examples, the authors always use firm contexts (interrupting colleagues etc.) - why do they then choose railway examples for the study? - my main issue is actually with the signaling idea. If norm violation signals power through being a potentially costly volitional behavior, sanctioning should not necessarily reduce perceived power. The study actually cannot scrutinize this link, as it is a one-shot behavior that is being described. If there were no sanctions, it wouldn´t be costly signaling. Thus, the described mechanism could only work if norm violators keep violating even though there is a chance of being sanctioned - which implies, that in some cases they will be fined, in others not. The design is as it is, but I would like to see a more thorough discussion of this. Reviewer #2: The study deals with an interesting and important topic related to social norms. The methods sound appropriate to test the hypotheses. I now focus on issues that would help to improve this manuscript: - One major issue with this paper is the need to explicate social norms. The literature has been well-documented with norms being conceptualized as injunctive norms and descriptive norms. The association between norms and social sanction has been extensively discussed in the work of Cialdini et al. (1990), Fishbein and Ajzen (2011), and Lapinski and Rimal (2005). Injunctive norms refer to what ought to be done while descriptive norms pertaining to the prevalence of a behavior. Thus, this study seems to intend to deal with injunctive norms rather than descriptive norms. Further, social norms and law are distinct concept (see Rimal & Lapinski, 2015). This study does not seem to distinguish law violation from norm violation. I would think this paper focuses on law and legal sanction, rather a norm-based approach. - Similarly, the explication of the power concept is limited. Authors define power as the perceived potential to influence others, which is not real power (individuals might not actually hold that power, but only are perceived by others). The lack of explication makes the conceptualization and operationalization of this variable sound less convincing. When we read/see a person not buying a bus ticket, there is little ground to argue that others would think the violator has a great deal of power. The authors use an example of people violating the talking norms in meetings to illustrate their point, but these two contexts are fundamentally different: Some people can talk freely in meetings because they either have real power or the behavior could actually be part of the organizational norms (the meeting norm is that you can interrupt others' talk if you do have something important to say). I would not think a traveler who did not conform to the law as having "a great deal of power," not mentioning that they told lies to authorities. I would think that someone escaping a law sanction as a lucky individual and that should be inferred as the person having power, unless he/she has further actions (ex: making a phone call to powerful others, which is a form of reference power). Such definition and operationalization as written in the paper, therefore, do not sound convincing to me. - I see that it is quite controversial to argue that freedom to do something would always lead to inferences of power possession. It might only signal power as the authors suggest under some certain conditions (there should be boundary conditions). I would think that people can think of someone who acts as she/he wants, which deviates from social approval, as having less power. This rival theory can be illustrated, for example, by historical accounts related to social movements in which less powerful individuals in a society (both real and perceived) violate a political norm/law to gain power. We may also see drivers overspeed and think of them as traffic violators who would likely confront more powerful others (policemen). This social comparison will likely lead to perceptions of the violators as being less powerful, or even having no power and thus defying law to satisfy their desired power. In the same vein, a person did not buy a ticket might mean he/she has no other choice (lack of freedom) and thus violates the law (no power). This line of reasoning shows that the theorization of the model in this paper seems problematic because the authors left too many rival theories unaddressed. - When theorization is not sound, having supporting data does not help much. The three key variables likely often have some sorts of correlations. A statistical model can be statistically significant without any theoretical background. Plus, the idea that someone has power could have more freedom to do things, even violating a law is not new in the literature. Also, the idea of sanctioning someone reducing his/her power offers no novel theoretical implication (someone goes to jail of course will normally have much less power than before). I do not see how such theorizations add to the literature. That says, I commend the authors on engaging in a project with a rigorously methodological design. I sincerely appreciate the author(s)’ work, and I wish them the best of luck with this project. Reviewer #3: This manuscript reports two experiments designed to test the hypothesis that norm violators will appear less powerful when they are punished than when they are not. The experiments build on earlier research showing that norm violators are perceived as more powerful than norm abiders; they introduce sanctions as a moderator of this effect. The manuscript has a number of strengths: The research is methodologically sound; the analyses are appropriate; the write-up is clear and complete. At the same time, the research makes a very modest contribution to the literature, even more modest than the write-up suggests. It mainly shows that an effect previously demonstrated by these investigators has limited scope. It is good to know that, of course, but it does not represent the level of contribution typically found in PLOS ONE articles. Let me describe briefly how I would interpret the results of this research, as my interpretation is somewhat different from how the authors frame the results. These results demonstrate that in a situation in which there are rules for how to behave, people are sensitive to where the power lies: with the rules or with the individuals. (I’m using rules here, rather than norms, because the research scenario conflates the two, but the same analysis holds for norms.) To the extent that people follow the rules and violations of the rules are enforced, power lies with the rules; to the extent that people violate the rules and get away with it, power lies with the individuals. Volition, on the other hand, depends on whether people try to follow the rules. Study 1 shows that neither rule-abiders nor rule-violators have much power if the rules are enforced, but if the rules are not enforced, even people who accidentally violate them (by not having their ticket to present to the conductor) have power. Study 2 shows that rules are powerful when people abide by them and when they are enforced; the relationship between individual volition and power is strongest when rules are weak. This summary captures all of the findings of this research and is entirely consistent with current views of how social rules and norms work. They clarify that the earlier finding of greater power attributed to norm violators holds only when norms are weak, but that simply serves to limit the scope and importance of the earlier finding. It does not challenge or extend current understandings of the way norms work. I will leave to the editor the decision of whether this manuscript makes enough of a contribution to warrant publication in PLOS ONE. Regardless of where it is published, I think some revision is in order to simplify and clarify the presentation and interpretation of the results. Reviewer #4: Referee report: PONE-D-20-25007 Summary of the paper The authors (1) replicate previous research that third-party observers believe that norm violators have a greater volition and power than norm abiders, and (2) extend that research to understand whether sanctions can be used to reduce perceptions of power associated with norm violation. The authors conduct two studies: (1) with a German online sample and a 2X2 design (Abiding norm, violating norm)X(Sanctions, No Sanctions) and (2) with a Dutch online sample with 1X3 design (Abiding Norm), (Violating Norm X Sanctions), (Violating Norm X No Sanctions). The authors use a vignette about a passenger buying or not buying a ticket on a train, and a controller either sanctioning (or not) the passenger who fails to show a ticket. They measure survey respondents’ perceptions of the passenger’s volition and power using survey questions. The authors claim that the main mechanism of how norm violation affects power is through volition i.e., a passenger who violates a norm is considered to act on their own volition, and this belief about volition leads to increased perceptions about the power they possess. The authors find that sanctions reduce the perceptions of power of the passenger irrespective of whether they are norm abiding or not, and irrespective of their volition (Result of Study 1). They find weak evidence for the mechanism that norm violation affects power through volition. The paper is well-written, and the data collection and analysis are well-done. Major critique 1. The paper clearly shows that introduction of sanctions reduces power associated with both norm-abiding and norm-violating individuals. However, the mechanism that norm violation leads to increased volition that further leads to increased power is not supported by evidence. The authors cannot claim that the mechanism is true unless they vary volition exogenously and find that perceptions of power are affected by that variation. 2. The results from Study 1 suggest that introduction of sanctions reduce perceptions of passenger’s power irrespective of his/her volition and his/her norm abidance/violation. In study 2, the authors find a different result because that they do not have a treatment with sanctions for norm-abiding behavior in this Study and thus do not have much variation in volition. I don’t think we can conclude from Study 2 that the claimed mechanism (Norm Violation-->Increased volition-->Increased power) is true. 3. Moreover, volition and power are correlated. However, there is no evidence that it is higher volition that leads to greater power. It could be the other way round where higher power leads to having greater volition. 4. It is not clear what “power” means in the context of a passenger who either buys or does not buy a ticket on a train. How does not buying a ticket make one more influential? A better way to measure power in this situation would be to see if the third-party observer is more likely to follow instructions from someone who violated the norm versus who obeyed the norm. 5. The payment to participants is small and probabilistic. For example, the participants had a 20% chance of winning a 10Euro voucher in Study 2. It is unclear how seriously the participants took the survey with these small incentives. 6. The authors use a vignette about the norm of buying a ticket or not on a train. The authors may want to discuss how this specific situation can be generalized to other situations. Minor critique 1. When you say norms, can you clarify if they are descriptive or prescriptive norms? 2. Both the sanction and no sanction conditions in the paper technically have sanctions, in one case they are enforced and in another they are not. The authors can clarify that by changing their terminology. 3. 75% of the sample is women and is not representative of the German population in Study 1. The authors may want to discuss how the gender composition of their sample may affect the result. 4. Since Study 1 and 2 are conducted with different populations (German vs Dutch online samples), the others should comment on how comparable these studies are. Are there differences in norms of ticket buying in these two populations? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-20-25007R1 How norm violators rise and fall in the eyes of others: The role of sanctions PLOS ONE Dear Dr. van Vianen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In the revised version of the paper, please try to clarify the aspects related to descriptive and injunctive norms, how the perceived power has been measured, the specificity / limitations of the study. When revising the paper, please consider the reviewers' comments listed at the bottom of the email. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for considering my comments carefully. I do not fully agree with your take on the signaling part, but your arguments are solid, and it is rather an empirical question whether your take is right, I think. As you refer it to further research, I think that´s sufficient. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors’ efforts to address reviewers’ comments. I have these questions for the authors to clarify: 1. Descriptive and injunctive norms were not clearly defined in the revised manuscript. These norms are individually perceived. Social norms can be examined at the collective level, which is different from social norm existing at the individual/perceived level. At the collective level, both types of norms can converge, but not necessarily so at the perceived level. People are not always cognizant of the prevailing descriptive or injunctive norms in certain contexts (please see Tankard & Paluck, 2016). The social norm approach, therefore, suggests that misperception of social norms is a problematic issue for norm-violating behaviors (please see Berkowitz, 2005). The authors wrote that injunctive norms and descriptive norms almost always work in the same directions. They wrote that behaviors that are endorsed as appropriate by the majority of the members of a group (injunctive norms) also tend to be enacted by the majority of the members of a group (descriptive norms). However, there are many situations where these two types of normative influences do not overlap, such as when people approve of, but do not practice, particular behaviors (Cialdini et al., 1990). Descriptive norms and injunctive norms can also be antagonistic, and they may provide us with conflicting information about normative behaviors in a given context (Lapinski & Rimal, 2005). For example, consider these norm-violating behaviors: drinking, smoking, speeding, etc. (please see, for example, Chung & Rimal, 2016; Hue et al., 2015). The authors responded that “almost all prior research on responses to norm violators has examined behaviors that would be considered violations of both descriptive and injunctive norms.” Perhaps, this manuscript needs to speak for itself as to why these two types of norms are almost all considered in such a way? Also, it might be necessary to address other theoretical frameworks that argue otherwise. For instance, the focus theory of normative conduct (Cialdini et al., 1990), the theory of normative social behavior (Lapinski & Rimal, 2005), the reasoned action approach (Fishbein, 2009) suggest that violation of injunctive norms does not necessarily go along with violation of descriptive norms, and vice versa. The authors commented that they see legal violations as a subset of the broader category of norm violations. So, it looks like this research approach suggests that violating the law also means violating social norms. To this point, please address this argument from social norm theorists: “Different from laws, norms are socially negotiated and contextually dependent modes of conduct; laws are explicitly codified proscriptions that link violations with their corresponding punitive measures. Laws are not socially negotiated (although their enforcement might be), whereas norms and their transgressions, by definition, are negotiated through social interaction. This is an important criterion because it explains why the same mode of conduct (e.g., littering) is acceptable in one social context (littered environment) but not in another (clean environment; Cialdini, Reno, & Kallgren, 1990). Laws and norms can certainly reinforce each other. For example, smokers may choose to refrain from lighting up in a public place for a number of reasons, including legal (fear of being penalized) or normative (fear of being accosted by someone in the vicinity), both of which lead to the same outcome (not lighting up). At other times, the two may act in opposition to each other, as when underage college students follow alcohol-drinking norms despite this behavior being illegal.” (page 394, Rimal & Lapinski, 2015) Berkowitz, A. D. (2005). An overview of the social norms approach. Changing the culture of college drinking: A socially situated health communication campaign, 1, 193-214. Chung, A., & Rimal, R. N. (2016). Social norms: A review. Review of Communication Research, 4, 1-28. Hue, D.T., Brennan, L., Parker, L. & Florian, M. (2015). But I am normal: Safe driving in Vietnam. Journal of Social Marketing, 5(2), 105-124. Lapinski, M. K., & Rimal, R. N. (2005). An explication of social norms. Communication Theory, 15(2), 127-147. Rimal, R. N., & Lapinski, M. K. (2015). A re-explication of social norms, ten years later. Communication Theory, 25(4), 393-409. Tankard, M. E., & Paluck, E. L. (2016). Norm perception as a vehicle for social change. Social Issues and Policy Review, 10(1), 181-211. 2. This study focuses on the association between norm violation and perception of power. The authors defined power as the perceived potential to influence others. Additionally, they suggested that the perception of someone having the capacity to do what that someone wants, it signals that the person has the capacity to influence others (perception of power; line 58-60, page 4). Following this logic, a person who does not buy a ticket is perceived as having the potential to influence others. I am still confused with this logic. How is it possible that we travel on a bus and witness a stranger not buying a ticket would make us think that that person has the potential to influence us and others? In this scenario, I might think that the person possesses some degrees of autonomy to conduct such a behavior. Yet, autonomy is conceptually different from power and does not always lead to the attribution of power. So, an inference from a high degree of autonomy to a high level of power sounds like a leap in logic. The authors cited several studies to back up this argument in their response, but the manuscript should speak for itself considering that this is a pivotal theorization in this study. Additionally, the authors wrote that “people who violate norms demonstrate that they can behave as they wish.” How do we tell if people would attribute someone who does not buy a ticket either as the person wishes to do so or that the person has no choice at all? If the attribution is related to the second scenario, does that still mean that the person is perceived to have the capacity to influence others? This situation seems to relate to observers’ perceptions of efficacy of a norm violator as well as observers’ attributions of the norm violator's traits. Attribution theory suggests that human tends to attribute others’ negative behaviors as causally due to internal factors and with less positive traits (e.g., fundamental attribution errors). As such, a norm violator can be attributed with more negative attributes (e.g., poor, desperate) than positive attributes (e.g., rich, high self-efficacy). Isn’t it logical to think that positive attributes would be more likely to associate with higher perception of power? 3. Operationalization of perceived power: It might be helpful to see the specific items used to measure perceived power. Right now, the manuscript says that the authors measured this construct by items like “I think this person has a great deal of power,” which does not tell if participants understood that power was about the potential ability to influence themselves and others. It would also be more informative for reviewers and readers to see the specific items measuring other scales because the items were adapted to this research situation. 4. What has been the common context of the studies the authors cited? Were these studies mostly conducted in the western context where law and order and transportation infrastructure are to some extent more stable than that in developing countries? It is hard to fathom that a thieve on a public bus in a non-western country (norm violator) would be perceived by on-lookers as having the potential to influence others (power). It is also hard to think of an illegal drug user as being someone who has power to influence others. I wonder if there is such a line of research related to this study’s main theoretical framework to be able to be generalized with a global implication. Even in the review of Stamkou et al. (2021) that the authors cited, this norm violation – perceived power linkage was shown to have contradicting effects in India. To this point, I still see that there’s a significant challenge to persuade readers of the causal link between the observation of norm-violation behaviors and perceived power. 5. The citation of perceived norm types should be acknowledged to Cialdini et al. (1990) who coined the terms, which then became widely adopted in social science. 6. The term “costly behavior” should be clearly defined and with an example. Perhaps, not all readers will have the in-depth knowledge of the authors’ research discipline. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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