Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 2, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03614 Predicting performance in 4 x 200-m freestyle swimming relay events PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments Authors are to be accomplished by selecting a very interesting topic in competitive swimming and by applying an in-depth data analysis to understand variations between individual and relay swimming performances. Manuscript is well contextualized, well written from a formal point of view and provides some interesting insights on relay performances. Still, there are some conceptualization aspects that authors should justify and some arguments that should be further explained. Also, some of the main study limitations should be acknowledged. Please see specific comments for details. Lastly, authors should reconsider if seven tables of results are needed to present the main results to achieve the proposed aims. Specific comments Introduction Line 60-61: Is there previous research on differences between the flat start performed in individual events and the flying start performed by swimmers assigned to the second to fourth relay positions? In this case this research should be referenced. A very recent research on the topic has been published days ago (DOI: 10.1080/14763141.2021.1878262), but not many more examples of this are available…from what the present reviewer knows. Lines 69-70: contrary to what is stated by authors, other research (http://dx.doi.org/10.1123/ijspp.2014-0577) indicates that “Highly trained swimmers do not swim (or turn) faster in relay events than in their individual races. Relay exchange times account for the difference observed in individual vs relay performance.” Maybe this should be also acknowledged on introduction. Lines 64-76: In the present paragraph, the present reviewer considers authors are pretty “optimistic” about findings of cited studies. For example, are there enough evidence to state that relay swimmers “exert more effort than those in earlier positions”?? Authors are suggested to revise paragraph and to stick to evidence by previous studies. If additional interpretations should be inserted, authors are encouraged to used terms like “probable”, “may be”, “it is supposed”, ... Line 99. Why 4x200m freestyle event was selected for the research purposes? This should be justified in introduction. Methods Line 108: what exact dates were selected for “season best time”? Natural year? September 1st to August 31th? Please specify. In the opinion of the present reviewer, one of the main weakness of the present research is that individual times could be obtained in a different season period than the major competition. Previous research has highlighted 1) the great proportion of swimmers who do not swim best times in major competitions and 2) % changes between different season periods (https://doi.org/10.1123/ijspp.2018-0782). Therefore, differences between individual and relay leg performances could be not caused by the specific relay conditions but to the different physical status of swimmers. This could be minimized by comparing the individual and relay performances within the same major competition. Race conditions would not be equal, but authors would ensure similar physical status of swimmers. Line 112-114: The present reviewer considers it would be interesting to include exchange block times. Do these times change according to the race status or ranking for each leg? Are differences between individual and relay performances based on differences on the remaining of the race (beyond block times) or based on both block times plus the swimming laps? Considering the present research aims to “to predict and understand variations in swimmer performance between individual and relay events, and the contextual factors affecting relay team finishing positions”… does it make sense to exclude one of the main variables affecting relay races result? Authors should at least acknowledge this as a study limitation. Line 116: what date was considered for world ranking of the swimmers in the relay? Day of major competition beginning? World ranking of the complete year? Please specify. Line 119: 121 teams of a total of … (179 according to what indicated in line 110)? Results Line 213: “in the third leg the swimmers tend to swim slower than expected by 0.24 s (CI=[-0.05,0.54], p=0.10) than swimmers on the first leg”. Please rephrase. Lines 214-216: are authors referring here to the individual or relay performance? Should “individual event” be substituted by “individual relay leg”? Table 2: Is this table really needed in the present results section? what is the utility of the present table within the manuscript? Table 4: Could be table 4 expressed in the text instead a table? Considering overall seven tables could distract readers from the main findings of the present research…. Discussion The present reviewer would expect “race partial positioning” as an important variable to be included in the model to predict variations between individual and relay performances. Indeed, team tactics are usually developed according to expected partial positioning after the first, second, third leg. Are differences between individual and relay performances related to the partial positioning of relay swimmers at the beginning of their relay leg? References A recent reference on relay tactics (doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2021.573285) seems to be adequate to support and discuss some of the ideas explained in the present manuscript. Reviewer #2: General comments The work is of interest to PLOSONE readers and a novel approach. However, some parts of the manuscript are confusing and hard to read. I recommend that you do the proposed changes and re-review it. Specific Comments 1. Abstract. It needs to be rewritten in its entirety. Participants/sample, stasticical analysis and results are mixed. They are hard to read. Please re-write it with this in mind. 1.a) I recommend impersonal wording throughout the Abstract. Instead of "Our aim...", "The aim was..." etc. Please re-write it with this in mind. 1.b) Lines 33-35. The objective should coincide with the objective at the end of the Introduction and the beginning of the Discussion. The objective must be in the past tense as the study has already been carried out. The objective should include the term “4x200 m swimming freestyle relay events”. 1.c) Lines 35-36. “We applied linear regression and machine learning to 4 x 200-m swimming freestyle relay events”. This should be in the sentences about the statistical analysis (after participants/sample). 1.d) Line 40. “…American swimmers...” Is nationality of swimmers a studied variable? It is confusing. Information about table 1 could be included. 2. Line 82-88. It is too speculative. Please, re-write. 3. Line 98-99. Please, delete it. The objective should be the last sentence of the Introduction Section. 4. Line 135 and followings. “…a relay order of “2-1-3-4” indicates that the second fastest swimmer swam the lead-off or first leg…”. This second fastest swimmer is the second fastest according “the start time” (before the relay was swam) or “the final time” (after the relay was swam). I it can be inferred, but it needs clarification. 5. Line 155-157. Was the stepwise selection procedure used? Please, clarify 6. Please, first explain what is a “random forest” (lines 163-168) and after why was it used (lines 158-162). 7. Line 258-264. Why was the 2019 FINA World Championships used to test the model? Why not the 2012 or 2016 Olympic Games? Why was only the “battle for the 3rd place” analyzed in female? Would the results be different if other Championship was analyzed? These questions are really relevant. This information should be clarified and included in the Statistical Analysis Section. 8. The paragraphs of the Discussion section are a bit unconnected and repetitive. Please, try to make it more “readable”. 9. Line 321-324. This is a repetition of Results. Please, re-write. 10. The team position at the moment that swimmer swims could influence (very probably) in his/her time. Please, include this as a limitation. Minor comments 11. Too much “Given…” Line 81, 84, 89… Please, re-write. 12. The Statistical Analysis Section is a bit hard to read. Please, consider to re-write it and make it more “readable”. 13. Abbreviations are used to avoid repeating words… Mean Decrease in Gini (MDG) in line 243, 252, 321… ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-03614R1 Predicting performance in 4 x 200-m freestyle swimming relay events PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Dalton Müller Pessôa Filho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The reviewers congratulate the authors on the improvement of this manuscript after the first round of revision. However, Reviewer #2 has addressed two new comments to the authors. Therefore, the authors need to provide the responses to these other comments before the final decision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have adequately addressed the comments raised in a previous round of review. However, it was difficult for the present reviewer to find the authors’ responses within the text. Authors should indicate their responses by bullet points or “response”. Reviewer #2: General comments Thank you for accepting the suggestions. I would like to suggest two more things: The objective should coincide with the Abstract (lines 33-36) and the Introduction (lines 104-107). To predict and to enhance are not the same. Line 101-104. Please, clarify more why the study was done in 4 x 200-m swimming freestyle relay events ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Santi Veiga Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Predicting performance in 4 x 200-m freestyle swimming relay events PONE-D-21-03614R2 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dalton Müller Pessôa Filho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewer #2 has accepted the manuscript for publication in Plos One. Congratulations to the authors! Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-03614R2 Predicting performance in 4 x 200-m freestyle swimming relay events Dear Dr. Wu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Dalton Müller Pessôa Filho Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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