Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 18, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-01872 Self-organized division of cognitive labor PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Andrade, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The three reviewers have provided constructive and detailed comments. They all agreed that the work has merit. However, there are several major aspects of the paper that need improvements, for which the reviewers have provided constructive suggestions. Please carefully consider them in the revision of your manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 17 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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They all agreed that the work has merit. However, there are several major aspects of the paper that need improvements, for which the reviewers have provided constructive suggestions. Please carefully consider them in the revision of your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overview and general recommendation This manuscript investigates how humans coordinate their efforts to accomplish a common task by dividing labor. The authors present experimental evidence, through an iterated two-person game, that, although only 57% of the participants managed to divide labor efficiently, successful participants adapt their behavior throughout the different rounds of the experiment and converge to focal points. Finally, the authors propose a series of four models of incremental complexity, and show the “win stay, loose shift”, mirroring of the other player’s actions (i.e., adopting a complementary response) and shaky-hand behaviors are important features of participant’s strategies in the proposed game and may explain how humans coordinate. I would like to congratulate the authors for a very well written manuscript and very interesting results. The authors have successfully managed to combine empirical and theoretical work to explain a very important question in human behavior, i.e., how humans coordinate in the absence of (explicit) communication. For this reason, I believe this paper should be accepted. Nevertheless, I do have a number of minor comments that I would like to have addressed, before the paper is published. Minor comments Abstract: The abstract should contain an indication of the results that are being presented in the paper. Additionally, the authors mention that this work has several potential applications. Yet, this is never discussed in the main article, so the reader is left with the question of how are these findings really applicable to multi-agent systems or human-robot collaboration? I believe the authors should add this to the discussion. Introduction: The authors indicate that “maximization of expected utility often is not sufficient to explain why individuals act in accord with one particular Nash Equilibrium instead of another”. Although I do agree that ‘bounded rationality’ often accounts for human behavior better than a fully rational model, this does not mean that humans are not optimizing. Rather, they are optimizing with constrained resources, and indeed may adopt heuristics. Moreover, one has to be careful, since game equilibrium may be altered both by player’s beliefs (in case that rationality is not assumed) and preferences, which affect utility. In this line, the authors make a strong claim by saying that “game-theoretic explanations might only provide distal causes of behavior”. Game theory is a large field, and not all of it is about studying Nash equilibria. In fact in Evolutionary Game Theory, no assumptions are made about rationality, nor ‘bounded rationality’ (see ref. [1-4] for evolutionary dynamics on coordination games). I thus believe, the authors should relax their claim. Experimental design: From the experimental description, it is not clear whether participants receive an incentive (in this case the course credits) in function of their performance during the game. If this is not the case, I do not understand how one can make the argument that maximization of utility is not relevant, since this is simply not being tested in the experiment. Moreover, I would like the authors to clarify whether the students that participated in the experiment belong to some course the authors (or their colleagues) teach. In which case, I would argue that there may be some confounding effects due to players knowing each other. Finally, this effect might be intensified since some of the sessions had a very low number of dyads (2 or 3) which makes it easier for participants to identify with whom they are playing, and indirect reciprocity might play a role in the results. I do not have an issue with the results of the experiment being published, and fully understand that not all behavioral experiments follow the precepts of behavioral economics. Yet, the authors should be more critical in the discussion and comment on these possible limitations of the study, as well as give an overview of the general applicability of their conclusions. Regression on Figure 5: The regression shown on Figure 5 does not seem to fit well the data (there are many points far away from the mean). This may indicate that a linear regression is not appropriate in this case. Moreover, although the authors indicate that their data shows that the interaction between consistency and overlapping tiles is positive, this is only true assuming the model they are regressing. If they regressed only over the variables diffConsist(n) * Overlap(n-1) the result might be different. Thus, this should be indicated in the manuscript. Figure 7: A similar problem occurs in Figure 7 top-right panel. It is difficult to extract any meaning from that figure, but it appears that a logistic model would be a better fit to that type of data. With so much variance in the points, the linear fit may not be giving you proper information. it would also be interesting to find out how players react to the unicorn not existing. This could be done by cheeking the effect on the player's behavior in subsequent rounds when the unicorn isn't found and when it is found. Finally, I only found one typo, which really shows the effort the authors have put in writing the manuscript: Page 10-line 1: “mayority” should be “majority” There is also a formatting error in Ref. [15]. References [1] Zhang, Chunyan, et al. "Evolutionary dynamics in division of labor games on cycle networks." European Journal of Control 53 (2020): 1-9. [2] Stephenson, Daniel. "Coordination and evolutionary dynamics: When are evolutionary models reliable?." Games and Economic Behavior 113 (2019): 381-395. [3] Pacheco, Jorge M., et al. "Evolutionary dynamics of collective action in N-person stag hunt dilemmas." Proceedings of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences 276.1655 (2009): 315-321. [4] Ohtsuki, Hisashi. "Evolutionary dynamics of coordinated cooperation." Frontiers in Ecology and Evolution 6 (2018): 62. Reviewer #2: This manuscript investigates the cognitive processes behind the emergence of division of labour in human groups, without the use of explicit communication between individuals. It addresses this using a novel task involving uncovering squares on a 8x8 grid, where dyads must try to minimise overlap while maximising coverage. Experiments are performed with human subjects, and a computational model is developed and fitted to the data. Overall the results look sound to me. I do think that the task is quite complicated. I wonder whether the same results would be obtained in a simpler game with only two focus points? Could the finding that players do not immediately use their heuristic biases, but take a few rounds to start using these, be simply an artefact of the complexity of the task and the number of different focal points available? I would like to see this discussed, as well as some discussion to justify why a simpler task isn't used. For example, you could even just use a smaller grid? What made you choose an 8x8 grid? The abstract mentions potential applications outside of cognitive science, but these are never discussed in the manuscript. The discussion section should be expanded to discuss each of the suggested applications in turn, or alternatively, the mention of these applications should be removed. The first two sentences of the introduction are saying the same thing -- that an individual can benefit from DoL. I think you mean that there are both group and individual benefits, i.e. it's not altruistic. The third paragraph on game theory is quite difficult to follow. It would be good to give an example of what a payoff matrix might look like, or at least a concrete example of how the payoffs depend on the choice of actions of both the focal player and others. Could you give some explicit examples of real world examples that are modelled by the unicorn game? How common is division of labour in humans with no explicit communication? You should give more empirical examples to better motivate the work. Do you expect your results to generalise to n-person interactions (which are surely more common in human groups)? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-01872R1 Self-organized division of cognitive labor PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Andrade, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The two reviewers have provided constructive and detailed comments. They both agreed that the work is interesting, relevant and would provide a good contribution. However, there are some aspects of the paper that need improvements, for which the reviewers have provided constructive suggestions. Please carefully consider them in the revision of your manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, The Anh Han, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The two reviewers have provided constructive and detailed comments. They both agreed that the work is interesting, relevant and would provide a good contribution. However, there are some aspects of the paper that need improvements, for which the reviewers have provided constructive suggestions. Please carefully consider them in the revision of your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to congratulate the authors for a great work in adapting the manuscript, and I recommend their work for acceptance. Yet, I do still have some minor comments: There are still some typos in the text (e.g., Line 259: Fi 5 instead of Fig. 5), so I recommend that the authors review it before publication. The authors indicate that a logistic regression would not work in their setting since “the outcome variable (consistency on round n) takes ordered values”. However, for these cases you may use an Ordinal Logistic Regression (see https://stats.idre.ucla.edu/r/dae/ordinal-logistic-regression/ ). Finally, the availability of resources including Code and Data is spread over the document, which makes it sometimes difficult (or cumbersome) to find/understand this information. Therefore, I recommend that the authors add an extra session at the end of the manuscript titled, e.g., “Data and resources availability”, and group all the links to code and data there with some explanation. Additionally, I might have missed it, but I could not find any direct link to the data of the experiment. What I did find was this CSV file in the authors Github: https://github.com/EAndrade-Lotero/SODCL/blob/master/Data/humans_full.csv . Is this the data of the experiment? If this is the case, I recommend that the authors add a README.md file to this folder, explaining the format of the datasets contained in it, and the meaning of each column. Optionally, I do think it is best to deposit the data in a dataserver, e.g., https://datadryad.org/stash, where information about the data is correctly stored. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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