Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 11, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-05815 MEASURING LEADERSHIP: An Assessment of the Multifactor Leadership Questionnaire PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Batista-Foguet, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 18 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors: First of all, allow me to apologise for the delay in responding to your paper, but it was extremely difficult to find reviewers and, moreover, it has been difficult for me to make a decision, since, on one hand, I find the approach taken very interesting and novel (discussing whether the models are formative or reflective seems to me something extremely necessary, but, despite this, it is very infrequent) and, on the other hand, I see that it has important methodological restrictions, many of which I find difficult to remedy. I think the most interesting analysis the article has is that of content review, but without presenting the items, it is impossible to appreciate their value and make them useful beyond people who are broadly familiar with the MLQ (which would make the article relevant for a leading journal, but not for a broad audience such as PlosOne). Additionally, some of the psychometric analyses used are inadequate (or, at least, their adequacy has not been made explicit), e.g. the estimation method used is inadequate for ordinal variables, it is not specified whether the polychoric correlation matrix is used, relevant fit indicators are not reported, principal components should be used for the formative model and not CFA, among other things that can be remedied. However, the major restriction to carry out these analyses is the limited sample size, so that any structure could be the product of mere chance, and it is necessary to increase it or provide other guarantees that give greater certainty in the results. As you will see, the task is a difficult one and I leave it to you to decide whether to go ahead with the review or to look for a journal that better suits your work. Frankly, I find your work very interesting, but I need it to be redesigned [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The aim of the manuscript was to investigate the factorial validity of the Multifactor Leadership Questionnaire. The authors must be commended for conducting a very thorough and original analysis of the factorial validity of the MLQ by investigating the MLQ as a reflective and a formative model. The introduction covers the relevant literature and frames the aims of the study very well. The authors provide an interesting and highly relevant discussion of the face validity of the items of the MLQ that are used to operationalize subscales of the MLQ. The authors state that they cannot present the individual items of the MLQ due to copyright issues. This is a big shame, as it is quite difficult to follow the discussion of the face validity of the items. Therefore, the authors should decide whether to 1) omit the discussion of the face validity, as it makes little sense in the way it is presented in the current version of the manuscript, 2) provide a more thorough description of the contents of the items (e.g. in a table), so that the reader is actually enabled to follow the discussion or 3) to present the items and deal with the copyright issues. As it stands now, this reviewer does not find that the basis of the discussion of the face validity of the MLQ satisfactory. Another general comment is that this reviewer is a bit uncertain about the target group of the study, which leaves me wondering, why it was submitted to a general journal as PlosOne. First, the paper deals with a very specific problem regarding the measurement of leadership behaviors, which makes this reviewer think that the paper could have been more appropriately submitted to a leaderships journal. Second, the paper has its’ focus on very specific issues regarding construction of questionnaire-based measures of theoretical constructs and methods for construing and validating such measures, which makes this reviewer think that the paper could have been more appropriately submitted to a statistical journal. Since the authors have submitted the manuscript to a ‘general’ journal, this reviewer assumes that the authors wish to target a general audience with an interest in leadership theory and/or psychometric testing. If this is correct, the authors should consider presenting the analyses in less technical terms and elaborate more on the content and implications of the analyses. Having presented these two general comments, the authors must be commended for having prepared a very interesting manuscript with interesting ramifications for the assessment of leaderships behaviors and for the psychometric assessment of such measures. Reviewer #2: General concerns: - In my opinion, the manuscript seems too extensive considering the design used. In this line, some ideas are mentioned in several paragrphs. For example, the nine first-order factors, three second-order factors, and one global MLQ-5X factor. In addition, relevant information it is not described. For example procedure, software, participants, instrument. Major concerns: - The sample is very small (n = 129). Although the authors address this fact in the limitations section, this can be the main issue in the validity of the described results. Yet, I leave it to the decision of the editor of the journal. Additional concerns: - The qualitative section, although interesting, its for me extensive and confusing. I suggest a table that summarises the comments for each item. - There is no mention of the software used. - It is not clear why the authors do not use additional fit indexes (e.g., CFI, TLI, IFI) and perform reliability analyses. - It is not clear to me which questionnaire the participants answered (English, Spanish or Catalan version). - The information about the participants is not described. - It is not clear why the authors refer to the quasi-experimental design. Strictly speaking, the authors (for the manuscript) use a cross-sectional self-reporting design. - The authors suggest replicating their study in different organisations, cultures and countries. However, they do not provide relevant information for doing so. All the best ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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MEASURING LEADERSHIP: An Assessment of the Multifactor Leadership Questionnaire PONE-D-20-05815R1 Dear Dr. Batista-Foguet, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rodrigo Ferrer, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors, first of all I am apologizing for the huge delay in the review, but I have been facing health issues and a multitude of new responsibilities that have led me to fail. Regarding your article, it seems to me that you addressed all the suggested improvements and, those that you did not implement, have a reasonable foundation, so I endorse their publication. Additionally, I would like to compliment you for looking at the formative models and providing a discussion that, despite being very necessary, is very rare. Greetings and best wishes Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-05815R1 MEASURING LEADERSHIP An Assessment of the Multifactor Leadership Questionnaire Dear Dr. Batista-Foguet: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rodrigo Ferrer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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