Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 22, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-05740 Kinesiophobia and its correlations with pain, proprioception, and functional performance among subjects with chronic neck pain PLOS ONE Dear Dr. REDDY, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you are unable to obtain consent from the subject of the photograph, you will need to remove the figures and any other textual identifying information or case descriptions for these individuals. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presented a study aimed to evaluate the relationship between kinesiophobia, pain, proprioception and functional performance among subjects with chronic neck pain. The influence of kinesiophobia in the musculoskeletal rehabilitation is well understood in the previous studies, however, the authors justified that limited studies have been done among people with CNP. Generally, the paper was written with a good flow, A few comments for improvement is suggested prior to publication: 1. Revise the title, may need to change the term subjects. Also be consistent in the paper either to use subjects or participants. 2. In the introduction, it was not clearly explained which one comes first, pain or kinesiophobia or vice versa. As it is clearly stated in the previous literature pain is the cause of impairment. This needs to be clearly discussed. 3. In the Methodology; some outcome measures were not well described in terms of its procedure, so that it is replicable. 4. In the results: The authors have not considered any confounding factors such as duration of condition, nature of job, etc. 5. Others: i. Some typo errors were noted, need to check for English as well. Reviewer #2: In the current manuscript, authors have investigated the “Kinesiophobia and its correlations with pain, proprioception, and functional performance among subjects with chronic neck pain”. It is a very interesting study, but I strongly encourage the authors to edit their paper with someone who has professional proficiency in English. In some parts, I had some difficulty to understand what the authors are trying to communicate. Reviewer Comments: Title: Change the “subjects” to “individuals” Introduction and discussion need to be written again and consider adding more up to date references. You can use key words like “neck pain and upper limb proprioception” in your literature review researches. Methods: • What is “patient information sheet”? Is it study procedure or any type of questionnaires? • My suggestion is to change the subjects to participants for the entire of the manuscript • What was the age range? You just mentioned: “All the participants included in this study were over 18 years and ...” for example you should say (18-50 years) • In addition, say how many male and female were participated in your study. • Page 6: “1) Subjects diagnosed with CNP and pain subsequently felt between the first thoracic spinal process and the occiput's lower margin” how did you diagnosed that? • Page 6: “2) neck pain intensity of 30 to 7o mm measured on a visual analog scale (VAS).” Fix the number 70 and clarify why you choose this intensity? • Page6: “3) moderate neck disability score, between 15 to 30 measured on neck disability index” according to the NDI scoring your value should be between 15 - 24 to be consider a moderate neck pain. Check the following website (https://chiro.org/LINKS/OUTCOME/Painter_1.shtml) • For sample size calculation what was your rational to use Tempa scale of kinesiophobia (TSK) score to estimate the study sample. • Page 7: for the Anthropometric Data, refer to the table that has these information • Page 7? Why you have the results for the Kinesiophobia Assessment but you did not included the results for Pain assessment • Page 8: you should explain here what is your rational for choosing (50 % of their maximum ROM) • Page 8: did you only analysis the absolute error? How about constant and variable errors? • Functional Performance need to be more clarified. For how long they hold the dynamometer. What do you mean with neutral position? What was the position of the shoulder? What do you meand with dominant side> Right hand or left hand? Why you chose the highest value for analysis? Why you din not average the trials? How many trials they did? Why one minute rest? You should explain all the procedure and rational of your work in here. • Change the title of table 1 to “Participant demographics, self-report measures, and study data” • Page 10 “Kinesiophobia showed a positive mild to a moderate positive correlation with proprioception JPE errors in extension” there is two positives • You should add more information on how to use the CROM • Improve your JEP section section ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Associate Professor Dr Maria Justine Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-21-05740R1 Kinesiophobia and its correlations with pain, proprioception, and functional performance among subjects with chronic neck pain PLOS ONE Dear Dr. REDDY, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You have mainly addressed the reviewers' concerns however However simply say that only absolute errors were recorded as a limitation is not acceptable. Constant and Variable errors can be calculated from the data that you have. There are many articles with the formulas. Here is one of many that explains how to calculate absolute, constant and variable error. https://motorcontrol.wordpress.com/2008/06/19/constant-error-variable-error-absolute-error-and-root-mean-square-error-labview/#:~:text=The%20formula%20for%20it%20is,alone%20without%20mentioning%20the%20direction. Please include all error types in the methods, results and discussion of the next revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Bernadette Ann Murphy, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Kinesiophobia and its correlations with pain, proprioception, and functional performance among individuals with chronic neck pain PONE-D-21-05740R2 Dear Dr. REDDY, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Bernadette Ann Murphy, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-05740R2 Kinesiophobia and its correlations with pain, proprioception, and functional performance among individuals with chronic neck pain Dear Dr. Reddy: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Bernadette Ann Murphy Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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