Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-03547 Accuracy of the Geriatric Depression Scale (GDS)-4 and GDS-5 for the screening of depression among older adults: a systematic review and meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Alvaro Taype-Rondan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This is an interesting review but the rationale and methodology(especially) warrant considerable revisions. Please refer to references provided in the peer-review feedback on resources that can guide the correct methods for conducting and reporting systematic reviews and meta-analyses of Diagnostic Accuracy studies. One example is the PRISMA statement for diagnostic accuracy reviews which was not used and referenced by the author team. Please submit your revised manuscript by 30 April, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall, the authors have done rigorous work to examine the utility of the brief versions of GDS (GDS-5 and 4) in screening for geriatric depression. Despite the challenge of inconsistency in the item used and the cut-off value, they managed to segregate the various versions of GDS4 and 5 with the same cut-off point and performed meta-analysis whenever possible. The outcome is summarized as pooled sensitivity and specificity with the Youden index. Since2*2 contingency table is constructed it would be more informative if the authors could report other measures of diagnostic accuracy like a pooled estimate of the positive and negative likelihood ratios, summary diagnostic odds ratio and area under curve (AOC). Major: Methods: For the outcome measures, since 2 by 2 contingency table is constructed, it would be better if authors could include other measures of diagnostic accuracy like a pooled estimate of the positive and negative likelihood ratios, summary diagnostic odds ratio, and area under curve (AOC). Furthermore, I wonder if Cronbach’s alfa of the items enlisted in table 2 could be summarized to recommend for future studies. Minor: Line 60: it is combining? Or just selecting some items from the original 30-item version? Line 62,63: word different and altogether may not be needed. Line 147: Regarding the population, …. The sentence needs reconstruction. Only one study excluded the sample with dementia. Line 74-81: Authors have elaborated the various eligibility criteria for inclusion. Authors can further clarify: 1. Language of the tool. If translated, whether the translation was done appropriately 2. I understood that irrespective of Study design, setting, the way the interview was included. It may be better to mention. Reviewer #2: This review aims to assess the diagnostic accuracy of Geriatric Depression Scale (GDS)-4 and GDS-5 for screening of depression among older adults General comments This is an interesting paper but the rationale needs to be strengthened and methods revised considerably. The methodology is presents some inaccuracies and confusion with methods used for meta-analyses of intervention reviews. I would recommend the following references to the authors; • PRISMA for Diagnostic Test Accuracy Reviews (DTA): http://www.prisma-statement.org/Extensions/DTA • Leeflang MM. Systematic reviews and meta-analyses of diagnostic test accuracy. Clin Microbiol Infect. 2014 Feb;20(2):105-13. doi: 10.1111/1469-0691.12474. PMID: 24274632 https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24274632/ • Leeflang MM, Deeks JJ, Gatsonis C, Bossuyt PM; Cochrane Diagnostic Test Accuracy Working Group. Systematic reviews of diagnostic test accuracy. Ann Intern Med. 2008 Dec 16;149(12):889-97. doi: 10.7326/0003-4819-149-12-200812160-00008. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/19075208/ • DTA meta-analyses methods: Chapter 10 (Analysis of results) of the Cochrane handbook for DTA reviews. https://methods.cochrane.org/sdt/handbook-dta-reviews • GRADE: https://gradepro.org/ GRADE Pro /GDT is a free software that enables authors conduct GRADE assessments accurately and also generates nice summary of findings tables. (Table 3 needs to follow this format) Specific comments ABSTRACT Methods section • This statement in the methods section is unclear. “We conducted sensitivity and specificity meta-analyses of those studies using the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM) or the International Classification of Diseases-10 (ICD-10). Do the authors mean using “Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM) or the International Classification of Diseases-10 (ICD-10)” as the reference standard? In its current form, the statement implies that these were the statistical methods used to pool the estimates of sensitivity and specificity. • “Mostly, significant subgroup differences across versions were found”. It would be helpful to state which subgroups were measured. Do the authors means subgroup differences at different test thresholds? Conclusion • This statement in the conclusion is not qualified in the results section. “Conclusions: The accuracy of the different GDS-4 and GDS-5 versions showed a high heterogeneity”. This statement is best placed in the results section. MAIN TEXT Introduction • The rationale, “accuracy remains unclear” is a vague rationale. Is the lack of clarity due to variation in accuracy estimates of existing primary studies? Please qualify that rationale better. I also disagree that the existing published systematic reviews are all outdated. Some were published in 2017 (ref 27) and 2019 (ref 26). These are recent reviews. An outdated review is usually > 5years. • It would be good to include a paragraph in the rationale about the best available test/reference test- what it is, its strengths and limitations as well as the anticipated role of the index tests. Are the GDS scales being evaluated as replacement tests for the reference tests/existing tests? Methods • The reporting of this review would be greatly improved if the authors were guided by the PRISMA extension for Diagnostic Test Accuracy reviews and not the original PRISMA. Please re-write this review based on PRISMA DTA.[ McInnes MDF, Moher D, Thombs BD, McGrath TA, Bossuyt PM; and the PRISMA-DTA Group; Clifford T, Cohen JF, Deeks JJ, Gatsonis C, Hooft L, Hunt HA, Hyde CJ, Korevaar DA, Leeflang MMG, Macaskill P, Reitsma JB, Rodin R, Rutjes AWS, Salameh JP, Stevens A, Takwoingi Y, Tonelli M, Weeks L, Whiting P, Willis BH. Preferred Reporting Items for a Systematic Review and Meta-analysis of Diagnostic Test Accuracy Studies: The PRISMA-DTA Statement. JAMA. 2018;319(4):388-396.] Search strategy • Please clarify why only the first 100 results yielded in google scholar were searched. Google scholar generates lots of hits. How did the authors ensure that the first 100 were the most relevant to screen? Data selection and extraction. • The authors state that duplicates were removed using endnote reference tool and data extraction was done using an excel sheet. Please clarify which platform/software specifically was used to screen titles, abstracts and full texts of the search yield? Risk of bias and certainly of evidence • Please add more detail about how GRADE was used to assess certainty of evidence? How was downgrading done? Statistical analyses • This section needs to be revised for clarity. Please refer to Chapter 10 (Analysis section) in the Cochrane handbook for DTA reviews. https://methods.cochrane.org/sdt/handbook-dta-reviews • Please provide a reference to qualify the type of meta-analyses used (bivariate model).Also clarify if it was the bivariate random effects method (which is commonly used) or bivariate mixed-effects models. By mixed effects do you mean random and fixed effects combined? • Please state clearly at the beginning of this section that meta-analyses of GDS-4 and GDS-5 were done separately • Please provide a rationale why the Y index was calculated provided. This is a global measure of accuracy and to my knowledge rarely used nowadays because of its limitations. • Please revisit how heterogeneity is measured in DTA reviews. I2 is used to assess heterogeneity of intervention reviews and not recommended for DTA reviews. Results • The results section about risk of bias is thin. QUADAS has four domains against which risk of bias results are reported. Please specify which domains were deemed to have risk of bias. • Table 3. The reporting of GRADE results is incorrect. GRADE assessment is given for an overall summary of evidence and not individual studies as presented. QUADAS is for individual studies but GRADE summarises the overall certainly of evidence across the domains quality/risk of bias; inconsistency, imprecision, indirectness and publication bias. For example, one would except an overall certainly of evidence for pooled results at each cutoff but not for individual studies. Please refer to the GRADE pro software to help with the GRADE assessment as well as generation of an accurate summary of findings table (https://gradepro.org/). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-21-03547R1 Accuracy of the Geriatric Depression Scale (GDS)-4 and GDS-5 for the screening of depression among older adults: a systematic review and meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Alvaro Taype-Rondan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please respond to review comments about clarifying what constitutes the overall meta-analyses versus investigations of heterogeneity in the abstract and main text (any versions vs similar versions at different common cutoff points?). In addition, do ensure that the conclusions of the review are in line with the stated objectives in both the abstract and main text. Please submit your revised manuscript by 26 June, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Eleanor Ochodo, M.D., PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have responded satisfactorily to the previous comments except those about thresholds. It is still unclear what the overall meta-analyses entails versus investigations of heterogeneity. Overall meta-analysis (any GDS-4 version or GDS-5 version separately at different common cutoffs? ) vs heterogeneity (same GDS version at different common cutoffs). Since different cut-offs and versions have been used it is important to be clear from the outset what constitutes the overall meta-analysis vs heterogeneity. ABSTRACT: Methods section: " We conducted sensitivity and specificity meta-analyses of those studies that used.....". Please revise to we conducted meta-analyses of the sensitivity and specificity of those studies that used...... "We performed a bivariate random-effects meta-analysis to calculate the pooled sensitivity and specificity with their 95% confidence intervals (95% CI). " Please be very explicit what this overall meta-analyses included. For example one could rephrase as follows "we performed a bivariate random-effects meta-analysis to estimate the pooled sensitivity and specificity with their 95% confidence intervals (95% CI) at each reported common cutoff. For the overall meta-analyses, any GDS-4 version or GDS-5 version separately, by each cut-off and for investigations of heterogeneity, across similar GDS versions by each cutoff". Results Being very explicit about the cutoff and versions will help one understand the results better. For example, the first set of reported results is about all versions of GDS-4 and GDS-5 separately at cutoff>2. This implies the overall meta-analyses at cutoff 2?? and subsequent cutoffs?? Conclusion: This conclusion does not accurately reflect the aim of the review which is to estimate accuracy. For example this could be reworded to " We found several GDS-4 and GDS-5 versions that showed great heterogeneity in estimates of sensitivity and specificity, mostly with a low or very low certainty of the evidence"........... MAIN TEXT Statistical analyses section page 7 The overall meta-analyses vs heterogeneity is unclear. For example please see comparisons below: Lines 133-135 We conducted meta-analyses of the sensitivity and specificity of GDS-4 and GDS-5 versions whenever studies fulfilled the following condition: 1) There was more than one study that compared the same version of GDS-4 or GDS-5 and used the same cut-off point. Lines 143-144 In addition, we meta-analyzed all the included studies that assessed any GDS-4 version, and all the studies that assessed any GDS-5 version, by each cut-off. The first statements about meta-analyses (lines 133-135) seem similar to investigations of heterogeneity (lines 145-146). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Roshana Shrestha Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Accuracy of the Geriatric Depression Scale (GDS)-4 and GDS-5 for the screening of depression among older adults: a systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-21-03547R2 Dear Alvaro Taype-Rondan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Eleanor Ochodo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-21-03547R2 Accuracy of the Geriatric Depression Scale (GDS)-4 and GDS-5 for the screening of depression among older adults: a systematic review and meta-analysis Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Eleanor Ochodo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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