Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-00163 Exposure to dexamethasone modifies transcriptomic responses of free-living stages of Strongyloides stercoralis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maleewong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have brought up several serious concerns. The foremost being a concern about developmental timing in addition to a major concern regarding the use of environmental stages and their relevance to the parasitic stages and steroid-based therapy. Please carefully consider the reviewers comments and address them point-by-point. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers have brought up several serious concerns. The foremost being a concern about developmental timing in addition to a major concern regarding the use of environmental stages and their relevance to the parasitic stages and steroid-based therapy. Please carefully consider the reviewers comments and address them point-by-point. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors of ” Exposure to dexamethasone modifies transcriptomic responses of free-living stages of Strongyloides stercoralis” demonstrate that the free living stages of the S. stercoralis lifecycle do appear to respond to the presence of dexamethasone via the regulation of multiple different genes. While the data does not add significant understanding to the interaction between steroids and the parasitic stages, it does provide evidence that at least this life cycle stage can respond to the steroid. Major Comments 1) Line 44 – While it is intriguing to discover that free living S. stercoralis do respond to the presence of dex they unlikely to encounter dex in the environment. With both the gerbil and NSG animal models available the recovery of the parasitic stages if possible and would provide a more accurate representation of the response of S. stercoralis to steroids. Line 462-463 states that it helps define the relationship between “steroid-based therapy”. Hyper infection and disseminated strongyloidiasis are due to the presence of corticosteroids and the parasitic stages of S. stercoralis. Please further explain how these results from the free-living stages applies to the understanding of the relationship between steroids and the parasitic stages. What was the rational for doing the analysis on free living stages 2) How was the concentration of Dex determined. Was it a physiological concentration that is found in feces after a patients treatment with the steroids? The author only gives 3.6mg per plate and no total volume so the reader is unable to determine the exact concentration. 3) While the authors did use multiple plates/individual and made multiple cDNA libraries from the parasites collected from the plates at 72 hours it appears that they growth and differentiation of the parasites isolated from the feces on agar plates was not done as a true replicate. Reviewer #2: In this paper, the authors collect fecal samples from humans infected with Strongyloides stercoralis, incubate the feces on agar plates either in the presence or absence of the corticosteroid dexamethasone (DXM), and then look for transcriptional differences resulting from dexamethasone exposure. Corticosteroid treatment in infected individuals can result in disseminated strongyloidiasis, and while this paper looks at DXM exposure during the free-living rather than parasitic phase of the life cycle, the paper still has important implications for human health. A better understanding of how DXM affects worm growth and physiology could inform nematode control strategies. However, I have a number of issues with the experimental design of this study that in my opinion make the data difficult to interpret. My major concern is whether DXM is affecting the timing of Strongyloides development. This study looks at a single time point. The authors count the number of male adults, female adults, iL3s, and free-living larvae present in the control vs. DXM-treated samples, but they do not examine the worms by DIC microscopy to determine, for example, whether the adults in the control vs. DXM-treated samples appear to be the same developmental age. A lot of the transcriptional changes the authors observe in control vs. DXM-treated samples have to do with “regulation of development, reproduction, signal hormone transduction, and cell division” (Line 391). These differences could arise due to a direct effect of DXM, or they could arise because DXM exposure either speeds up or slows down development. Without a careful analysis of development in the control vs. DXM-treated samples, and without looking at multiple time points, it’s impossible to distinguish between these possibilities. Other comments: 1. More explanation of why the 72 h time point was chosen is needed. In lines 196-198, the authors say, “After 72 hours of agar plate culture, the worms were classed as free-living males, free-living females, post free-living rhabditiform larvae and post-parasitic filariform larvae of S. stercoralis.” How do the authors know that the iL3s are post-parasitic? Isn’t 72 h enough time for some of the post-free-living larvae to develop into iL3s? If DXM does alter developmental timing, isn’t this especially a concern for the DXM-treated worms? 2. Lines 193-196: “Fecal samples from 30 individual cases of strongyloidiasis were cultured using the agar plate technique [30] with and without dexamethasone (DXM); at least three plates/individual fecal samples both with and without the inclusion of DXM were used (S2 Fig). Feces from each of eight strongyloidiasis cases were used for the investigation.” This is confusing. Were feces from 30 individuals or 8 individuals used? 3. The first paragraph of the discussion states that DXM significantly affects the number of worms in the indirect phase of the life cycle, and then later states that DXM does not have a significant effect on whether worms enter the direct vs. indirect phase of the life cycle. The wording here is very confusing and needs to be clarified. 4. Line 57: 100 million seems like an outdated estimate of the number of individuals infected with Strongyloides. Haven’t more recent estimates put the number closer to 600 million? 5. The paper would benefit from careful editing. Some of the sentences don’t entirely make sense as written, such as this one: “However, the experiment was done without replicates, did not validate in worm genetic was because of different human host and environment, also confirming the statistical comparisons analysis.” I’m not sure I follow what the authors are trying to say here. Some grammatical edits are required for the figures as well, and also for the short title. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Exposure to dexamethasone modifies transcriptomic responses of free-living stages of Strongyloides stercoralis PONE-D-21-00163R1 Dear Dr. Maleewong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Adler R. Dillman, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for revising the manuscript to address the reviewer's concerns. This study contributes to our understanding of DXM-strongyloides interactions and should be of interest to the field. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-00163R1 Exposure to dexamethasone modifies transcriptomic responses of free-living stages of Strongyloides stercoralis Dear Dr. Maleewong: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Adler R. Dillman Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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