Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 2, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03611 Relative age effect? No “flipping” way! Nuanced evidence of an apparatus dependent inverse relative age effect in elite, women’s artistic gymnastics PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Langham-Walsh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please respond to the reviewers comments in a point by point manner. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: GENERAL REMARKS: - Please instead R2 use R superscript 2 - Index of discrimination must be consinstently noted in manuscript (compare with line 142) TITLE: Please be less dramatic KEY WORDS: instead self-fulfilling prophecy – use some other key word ABSTRACT: do not use bracet-space-text but bracet-text way of writing. Be consistent INTRODUCTION: - line 71 – add RAE study conducted on male olympian gymnasts (Delaš Kalinski, S., Jelaska, I., & Knežević, N. (2017). Age effects among elite male gymnasts. Acta Kinesiologica, 11(2), 84 – 89. METHODS: - line 136 – in formula y = e(b0+b1x) ...0 and 1 must be written in subscript and remove bracet from formula - line 138 correct right bracet Reviewer #2: My comments: 1) page 2, line 41, missing reference. 2) page 2 , line 43. When? Always or under which conditions? Explain RAE more thoroughly. 3) page 3, line 51-60, is or should be covered in the discussion part. 4) page 3, line 62, please explain the term inter-sport differences or rephrase the sentence. 5) page3, line 64, you make a statement of there being a bias towards delayed-maturation for success but you only seem to base that on the absence of RAE. You mention a finding of reversed RAE first in next paragraph, seems odd. 6) page 3, line 69-71, speculation, does not belong in the introduction. 7) page 4, line 75, if you don’t explain the term “Q2 gymnast” I will assume that you mean gymnast being born in the second quarter of a calendar year since this article covers the subject of relative age effect. This contradicts there being a bias toward being born late in the calendar year. What are you saying? 8) page 4, line 76, Explain “donor sport” and why this would explain the overrepresentation of gymnast being born in the second quarter in the calendar year, 9) page 4, line 90-91, What do you mean with Q1 resp Q4 effect? 10) page 5, line 98-101, Pure speculation, doesn’t fit the context. 11) page 6, line 118, maybe change “present day” to “time of writing”. 12) page 6, line 122, in my opinion, you have to include a table or some sort of description of which countries where represented and to which extent. 13) page 6, line 126, When did you obtain birth dates from Wikipedia and which one did you use (my guess is standard English Wikipedia). 14) page 6, line 130, scratch “cutting edge”. 15) page 6, line 130, just “recent” 17) page6, under Analysis just keep what describes what you did in your analysis and scratch the rest. 18) page 6, line 136, Time of birth? Time of the day??? Be more precise what you mean. 19) page 6, line 137, What competitive year? 20) page6, line 136, to me your formula doesn’t make sense. E^(b0+b1x) cant equal a birth frequency per week, have you confused frequency with rate? 21) page 7, line 149, what is middle of the year? 22) page9, line 11 and 16, no confidence interval? 23) page9, line 12 and 17, start and end of what, what is the respective definition? 24) page10, line 3-5, Belongs to introduction. 25) page 11, line 19, source? and please explain how this differs from any other sport. 26) page 12, line 11, too much speculation. 1. When did we establish that younger gymnast experience enhanced performance expectations? 2. What suggests that that younger gymnasts possess a greater psychological advantage? 3. Even if both 1 and 2 are true McKays findings doesn’t explain how they would correlate. 27) Page 12, line 13, why would the galtea effect explain that more gymnasts practicing beam or vault are born later in the calendar year? Explain. 28) Page 12 and 13, line 22-18, this is pretty much insubstantial speculation. The conclusion from more elite gymnasts being born late in calendar to that “it is important to develop a strong technical foundation, regardless of a gymnast’s physical attributes, to enable them to succeed at the higher levels”, is far-fetched. What would the implication be if it was the opposite finding with more elite level gymnast being born early? 29) page 14, line 4, Again with the Q2 athletes. What are they? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Relative age effect? No “flipping” way! Apparatus dependent inverse relative age effects in elite, women’s artistic gymnastics PONE-D-21-03611R1 Dear Dr. Langham-Walsh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Caroline Sunderland Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All suggestions and remarks of the reviewers were adopted, and quality and clarity of the paper is further achieved. As a reviewer, I have no further objections to the new version of the paper. Reviewer #2: The authors have made a great effort to improve the article with the comments that the reviewers have presented. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Sunčica Delaš Kalinski Reviewer #2: Yes: Staffan Ek |
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PONE-D-21-03611R1 Relative age effect? No “flipping” way! Apparatus dependent inverse relative age effects in elite, women’s artistic gymnastics Dear Dr. Langham-Walsh: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Caroline Sunderland Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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