Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 12, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-32098 Cisgenderism, Transphobia, and Their Impact on Australian Trans People’s Experiences of Sexual Health Care Quality and Access: Findings from the Australian Trans & Gender Diverse Sexual Health Survey PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cook, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 29 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If patients provided informed written consent to have data from their medical records used in research, please include this information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: I believe that the article placed a great deal of emphasis on issues related to testing for HIV / other STIs. While this is certainly relevant, it does not reflect the entire broad scope of the sexual health research field. I suggest the authors to reframe article's objective, so that it is clear to the reader that the focus is on HIV-related barriers of health care access. - Introduction: Please clarify why "most health care providers are ill-prepared to engage meaningfully with the needs of trans patients". Research details should be provided. Please provide clear definitions on transphobia, cisgenderism and gender insensitivity. Please provide more details on Australian on sexual health public policy in Australia. Do the clinics only offer HIV/STIs prevention care? Is there any type of care related to reproductive health? Please provide details on HIV rates on general population and trans population in Australia. I think gender minority stress model could be described here due to its well documented impact on transgender people's health, especially on HIV/other STIs concerns. - Methods: Did the participants signed an informed consent? The authors mentioned in the introduction the intersectional stigma of trans people of colour. Why did they not include the racial / ethnic status of the participants in the research measures? Including these data in the analyses could add to the literature on racial disparities in health. Please clarify what "culturally and/or linguistically diverse backgrounds" means. - Discussion Data could be discussed taking into account the gender minority stress model, as I mentioned above. Please provide more insight on why non-binary trans people had more negative outcomes in comparision with binary people. Final comments: Over all, the article is written in a clear and sound manner, which facilitates reading. As the authors note, trans people often encounter a range of barriers to health care, so this article has the potential to make a useful contribution. Reviewer #2: I have read with the enjoyment the paper “Cisgenderism, Transphobia, and Their Impact on Australian Trans People’s Experiences of Sexual Health Care Quality and Access: Findings from the Australian Trans & Gender Diverse Sexual Health Survey”. It certainly has many merits, including the scale created and a culturally and linguistically diverse sample. There are some important gaps to be filled in the methods and discussion, which I will describe below. The article would also benefit from better structuring. The abstract does not include the strongest predictors. Why is it? The introduction clearly states the problem being investigated. However, authors could offer an even greater insight into the topic by considering individual differences. I was wondering if authors have considered the role of other factors, such as personality and particular behaviours that could impede trans people to access proper care. Is there any literature describing these aspects, beyond the well-known role of stigma? Or even the other way round – some behaviours that could enhance health access? Moreover, the fact that “community-based and peer-led services that provide sexual health care for trans people have been recently introduced in some parts of Australia” could be further explored. I assume there was a good amount of data supporting the opening of these services. I felt that authors could present their hypotheses, as well as could be specific in terms of their study design (as recommended by the Strobe statement). Methods: Please, include the number of participants and their ages in the “Participants” subheading. The newly created measure needs to be better described (i.e., selection of items, piloting, etc.). Table 1 is rather confusing. If you try to sum the percentages, they extrapolate 100% in columns and rows. Please, explain how the reader must interpret these results. Consider adding Table 1 as supplementary material. In study’s variables, clearly state independent and dependent variables. Place all the covariates under the same subheading, please. Report on missing data, outliers, and how these were handled. Please, explain why Poisson regression was used in some procedures and not in others. The inclusion of covariates in data analyses seems repetitive since authors mentioned them previously. You did not mention how comparisons displayed in Figure 1 were carried out, as well as assumptions for the test used. Please, report the means with 95 CI in the Figure. Flag in the graph which groups differed. Please, provide fit indices for your regression analyses and the total variance explained. Report on achieved power. Did you compare the proportions in Table 3? Why not? For this purpose, “recent HIV/STI diagnoses” could be grouped together (yes/no). If you do so, update your data analyses section. Why the first predictor in Table 4 is presented in grey background? The discussion is rather brief and does not explore many interesting aspects from results. For instance, stronger PR were found for sex work and group sex. These same variables were also related to testing frequency. What are the tentative explanations from this, and overall implications for practitioners? The same applies to the other predictors. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Cisgenderism and transphobia in sexual health care and associations with testing for HIV and other sexually transmitted infections: Findings from the Australian Trans & Gender Diverse Sexual Health Survey PONE-D-20-32098R1 Dear Dr. Cook, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Most of my concerns from my previous review have been addressed. I recommend the publication of the revised version of this paper, which will certainly add to the literature. Reviewer #2: All the issues were properly solved in the revised paper. I have no further suggestions to make, or any other questions regarding the study. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ramiro Figueiredo Catelan Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Guilherme Welter Wendt |
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PONE-D-20-32098R1 Cisgenderism and transphobia in sexual health care and associations with testing for HIV and other sexually transmitted infections: Findings from the Australian Trans & Gender Diverse Sexual Health Survey Dear Dr. Cook: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Angelo Brandelli Costa Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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