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Original SubmissionOctober 8, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-31663 Sex differences in sleep and influence of the menstrual cycle on women’s sleep in junior endurance athletes PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hrozanova, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The two peer reviewers have included detailed comments to consider in your revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors measured sleep through radar in male and female youth athletes across 61 days. They report comparisons between male and female, and between various menstrual-cycle related time-points. Their conclusion is that females do have better objective but worse subjective sleep than males, that women spent longer time in bed and in deeper sleep during menses vs. non-menses, lower sleep efficiency during the follicular vs. luteal phase and lower light sleep in menstrual vs. pre-menstrual phase. The authors conclude recovery may be increased during menstrual and pre-menstrual times. The manuscript is well-organised, well-written, correctly interpreted and adequately addresses limitations. The results are important, novel and applicable as well as paving the way for future research. I have few and very minor suggestions: 1) Line 237, should be Figure 2 2) Line 307, I assume this is just supposition and not evidence-based? If the latter, please add reference. The major comment, which the authors have addressed, is that they did not confirm ovulatory cycles. This does not invalidate results, but does mean they need replicating (with confirmation) and/or taking with precaution. Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes sex difference in sleep over 61 days in a small sample of young Norwegian athletes that included 15 girls who also tracked their menstrual cycles. The introduction sets up the research aims, and the purpose is clear. Methods included radar-sleep tracking (Somnofy sleep monitor developed and validated in Norway) for objective sleep duration and sleep stages. The Pittsburgh Sleep Quality Index (PSQI) was used for self-report sleep quality over the past month. Measures are well described for menstrual cycle phases by diary reports of menses days. Analyses included multivariate modeling. Results support past research that women score worse on subjective PSQI sleep quality but better on objective sleep measures. Girls had longer sleep duration than boys, and sex accounted for 25% of the variance (R-square = .25) in Total Sleep Time (TST), and 12.6% of the variance (R-square = .126) in Sleep Efficiency (SE). Sex explained 6.1% of the variance in PSQI sleep quality scores (R-square = .061). For the 15 female athletes, menstrual cycle changes in objective sleep were either less evident, with low variance explained, or sample was indeed too small to obtain statistical significance; they were in bed longer and had less sleep efficiency during the follicular phase; these two variables have obvious collinearity. Results are discussed in light of prior studies, in particular one study by Driver et al. (#21). Limitations are adequately addressed. I do have some specific comments for authors to consider: 1. Sleep stages defined in Table 1 are for minutes. Given the sex differences in TST, one would expect a longer sleep duration to include more minutes in each sleep stage. Standardizing each night’s time spent in sleep stages as a percentage of their TST would better support the interpretation of the results about sleep stages. 2. The Somnofy system was not particularly valid for sleep onset latency in a prior publication, but please indicate the criterion for minutes to onset – it could be lights-out to first stage of LS, first stage of SWS, or first 1, 2, 10 minutes of LS, for example. Do authors have REM onset latency as well? 3. In light of the discussion, please indicate if women took pain medication during menses. 4. Table 1 would be more useful to readers if it was specific to hours or minutes (rather than “time”). Because SE refers to sleep efficiency, the S.E. columns in table 2 and table 3 should be spelled out or distinguished in some way. This would be a useful place to add criterion for sleep onset latency, and to add REM onset latency. 4. There are 2 tables labeled as Table 2. The first table 2 is of less interest and could be supplemental. The second Table 2 with R-square values in the last column needs to be more clear – please provide the total R-square at the end, if all of these were in the same model, but it is unclear if they are separate models because of the collinearity between all these sleep variables. The R-square percentages in Table 2 or Table 3 are confusing, unless the heading in the column is meant to say "percent variance explained" rather than the actual "R-square" value. Italicizing significant p-values is very difficult to see in tables; with p-values provided, italics are not needed in that column. An asterisk or bolding would be better, depending on journal requirements. 5. ICC values need a little more explanation and discussion. They are very low in Tables 2 and 3, and correlations above .80 would be expected for validity and reliability in night-to-night sleep parameter consistency. Please indicate how many nights are represented with these values and why they are important to include in results for the regression model(s). 6. Figure 1 is not particularly useful and could be supplemental material. 7. Figure 2 is very informative showing differences between men and women. It would be helpful to include the women’s data by menstrual cycle phase as part of this figure or as a new figure. 8. Please include Cronbach alpha for PSQI in your sample and whether it differed by sex. The absence of statistically significant differences may reflect the small N for women (n=15) and perhaps effect sizes should be included. 9. Discussion may require a little revision if results about sleep stage percentages differ from minutes. Discussion mentions levels of discomfort, which raises the issue of medications taken by the women during menses. 10. Discussion of comparisons with the prior research is included with possible explanations for differences, but comparisons focus on Driver #21 findings only. Thus, it is not clear if this study supports other studies that also conflict with Driver’s findings, or if Driver’s results also conflict with others. Driver’s participants were not in their own home, and had more uncomfortable PSG electrodes every-other night in a laboratory, creating the potential for first-night effects, so comparisons of SE would be useful in the discussion; was their overall SE worse or better than women in this sample studied at home with less invasive equipment? It would help readers if discussion compared results with other studies besides Driver’s one study, for example, Baker et al PSG in the lab, Lee et al PSG in the lab (1990) or PSG in the home (2000), or Parry et al PSG young women controls. 11. The conclusion that this manuscript provides “long-term” data is a bit of a stretch, as that would usually mean over more time than just 2 menstrual cycles, but enough to have, for example, PSQI self-report at 6-month intervals. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Toby Mundel Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Sex differences in sleep and influence of the menstrual cycle on women’s sleep in junior endurance athletes PONE-D-20-31663R1 Dear Dr. Hrozanova, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Reviewer 2 had one helpful minor comment that you may wish to consider for your final manuscript submission. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: This revised manuscript has improved in clarity with the better explanation of ICC for readers, and with the percentage of sleep stages analyzed. The discussion has more depth, and limitations are adequately addressed. The tables and figures are more logical, and adding units as a column to Table 1 will be more helpful to readers. I do have a minor comment: On Line 468, rather than “divergences” I would suggest “variations”. This was an ambitious and rigorous research endeavor and the manuscript would make a significant contribution to knowledge about young women and sleep. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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