Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-35864 Dogs fail to reciprocate the receipt of food from a human in a food-giving task PLOS ONE Dear Dr. McGetrick, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It was reviewed by two experts in the field and they have recommended a few modifications be made prior to acceptance. I therefore invite you to consider the suggested changes and resubmit your manuscript, along with a response to reviewers to aid re-revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting, relevant and original work. The manuscript is clear and well-written and the authors have tried to do a thorough analysis of the results. They found that dogs were not able to reciprocate the help received from humans. Even when the lack of this ability in a food-giving task is a possibility that this work as well as other previous studies have suggested, the limitations in the experimental designs force us to be cautious. The authors clearly described and analyzed some of these limitations. However, another plausible and parsimonious explanation of the results is that dogs were repeatedly reinforced throughout the procedure for pressing the button. So, they could continue pressing the button, just because this behavior had a strong association with the food, regardless of the rest of the conditions. In addition, considering that reinforced and not reinforced trials were mixed (because of the motivational sessions) in the design, dogs were exposed to a partial reinforcement schedule, which increases the resistance to extinction. In this way, the association between pressing the button and food could be higher than anything else. Moreover, in order to successfully solve the task, the dogs must perform a discrimination learning in which they have to inhibit their learned response of pressing the button in some contexts. This kind of learning usually requires long trainings. You have to state this limitation in the discussion. Anyway, I think this problem always appears when you have to train the behavior required to help the other individual. For this reason, it is better to choose a response that is already part of the repertoire of the animals. On the other hand, one crucial aspect in this kind of experiments is whether dogs are able to understand the situation. In this sense, an overshadowing phenomenon may have occurred. As a consequence of the training, the device (button and dispenser) was very salient. So, when dogs pressed the button, it is likely that they were paying more attention to the device than to the humans. If they paid little or no attention to them, the likelihood of learning about their behavior is low. Do you have any assessment of the behavior of the dogs during the conditions in which humans were present? Can you assess gaze duration towards humans? As far as I understand, you did not perform a preference test between the helpful and the unhelpful human, so you cannot conclude that dogs were not able to discriminate them. Your comparison is indirect and therefore less sensitive. The length of time in which dogs were near each person compared to the owner is not a good indicator of the helper-unhelper discrimination. For example, the presence of the owner during the free interaction session could interfere, decreasing the negative reaction towards the unhelpful human, decreasing the interest in the unfamiliar person, etc. You have to relativize your conclusions in this regard. It is necessary to include some important information about the characteristics of the sample: the description of the breeds and the level of previous training. Which was the reward used? I imagine that the helpful human gave the dog a better reward than the one the dog obtained by itself during training and motivational trials. I can see by comparing Fig 6 and 9 that the performance of the dogs decreased between the two studies. Can you explain this difference? I think that the legend of Fig 1 is too long and includes many details that are already included in the text. I suggest reducing it. Please describe the interval between phases. L 324-325 I do not understand the objective of modifying the first trial procedure. L416 “The video for one of the free interaction sessions was unavailable” Do you mean the video from one dog or the videos of all the dogs during one session? In this case, which was the session? 426 and 551 vs 427. Did you use the number of times or the proportion of times? Reviewer #2: General comments In the present study authors tested if dogs would reciprocate a pro-social act from an unknown human in a context involving food, using a novel experimental design adapted from previous studies in dogs and other species. In the first study the authors did not find any evidence of reciprocity in dogs and speculate that this result could have been due to the complexity of the task or the mnemonic demands imposed to the dogs by the time gap between the training and testing phases. Thus, in a second study the authors simplify the task and run the training and testing phases in the same day. Again, dogs failed to reciprocate the human pro social behavior in this simplified version of the task. These findings led the authors to conclude that dogs do not spontaneously reciprocate the human pro-social behavior in contexts involving food. I want to congratulate the authors for their work; I found the paper very interesting and carefully design. I will suggest some minor revisions that could probably improve the paper. Specific comments Introduction The review of the previous literature is precise updated and well written. Nevertheless: L. 43-44. I would remove the phrase. “Reliable models of reciprocity that can be manipulated experimentally are scarce”. There is a vast literature on reciprocity on rats, mice, and insects. And I believe that there are all valuable models for the study of reciprocity (e.g. Taborsky’s works). L. 89 -102. I found this paragraph a bit unnecessary. Although, as mention, all the listed characteristics made the dog a good model for the study of pro-sociality in general these are not specific characteristics needed for reciprocity. I would focus in reciprocity (See. Trivers, 1971). L. 160-161. In line with the previous comment. Some of the aspects that would enhance direct reciprocity are: the possibility of future encounters (Trivers, 1971), and the bond between the subjects (i.e. De Wal, 1997; Freidin et al., 2013). So I think that one big difference with some previous studies (Quervel-Chaumette et al., 2015; 2016, Sanford et al., 2018; Carballo et al., 2020) is the identity of the receiver. Most evidences showing spontaneous pro social behavior in dogs (or the lack of it, Quervel-Chaumette 2016) came from studies with the owners, or some familiar human, as partner. I understand the methodological choice of the authors to use unknown humans as partners which eliminate a lot of uncontrolled variations that could mixed the results. But I believe that the best solution would be to run a third study whit the owners as partners and counterbalance their role (Helper vs. Unhelper) between subjects. The inclusion or non-inclusion of this third study would not influence in my personal decision to suggest the publication of the paper. I simply mention that this would be an interesting aspect to take into account and probably the authors would like to include a further study or mention this aspect in the conclusion. Methods and analysis I found the methodology very well design and implemented. I think the data presented by the authors in the data set of supplementary material and the variables analyzed are clear and with a straightforward interpretation. So I found the statistical analyses unnecessarily a bit too complex for the data and the number of factors taken in consideration. But authors may well prefer to keep the presented analyses. L. 261. Who was the human who eat the food? Discussion Again, I found the discussion well written and pertinent. And I mostly agree with the authors’ interpretation of the data. Nevertheless, I would include some references to the role of learning mechanisms in the development of pro social behavior in dogs and in reciprocity in particular. The authors mentions this when they speculate that with further training and switching roles between dogs and humans dogs probably could reciprocate the human but they do not provide and explicit theoretical link. For example, dogs could be focusing in some other aspect of the experimental situation which could overshadow the role of the helper, thus making the actions of the helper more salient could improve dogs performance. Furthermore, the discriminations between unknown humans could be demanding for dogs, thus increasing the difference between helper and un-helper could also improve dogs’ performance or the testing could be done with familiar humans. These aspects are related to the factors that could facilitate reciprocity that I mention earlier (familiarity, bonding, repetition of the encounters etc.) and are usually taken into account when discussing pro-social behavior in dogs. L. 885: include “direct” before reciprocity. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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It was a pleasure working with you and I wish you the best of luck for your future research Hope you are keeping safe and well in these difficult times Thanks Simon Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I found all my comments responded and congratulate you for your work. One final comment. In the figures 6 and 9 you represent the number of times the subject press the button while in the analysis and results sections you refered to the proportion fo times dogs press the button. For consistency I would change the figure's y axis ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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