Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 25, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-37111 Knowledge about mother to child transmission of HIV/AIDS, its prevention and associated factors among reproductive-age women in sub-Saharan Africa: Evidence from 33 countries recent Demographic and Health Surveys PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Teshale, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Pande Putu Januraga, M.D., DrPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to provide an input to this manuscript. This is a really interesting study which could fill the gap regarding PMTCT knowledge and its prevention among reproductive age women in SSA. Minor changes to manuscript is recommended as follow: Abstract: Line 31: “conducted from 2008/19 to 2018/19” : is it the correct period? Line 33: “a multilevel analysis”. Please elaborate more on this. Please also include the information regarding potential associated factors included in the analysis. Background: Line 59 “50 percent of the 180,000 new 60 pediatric HIV infections were infected in 2017”. What does this supposed to mean? Line 60 : ‘it is estimated that in the absence of any 61 intervention to prevent MTCT, the risk of transmission ranges from 15-45 percent (5-10 percent 62 during pregnancy, 10-20 percent during childbirth, and 10-20 percent via mixed infant feeding).”.Can you provide a reference for this statement? Line 64 : “Nearly 90 percent of all children and adolescents living with HIV are in Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA).”any reference for this? Line 74: “Although the majority of the population in SSA are lived in rural areas with restricted 75 availability and accessibility of health facilities, most of the studies on knowledge about MTCT of 76 HIV/AIDS and its prevention were conducted among available women, such as those who came 77 to the health facility for their antenatal care follow up”. Can you provide a reference for this? Also , how your study is different compare to references that you have provided on line 200 -202. Methods Line 84: “Demographic and Health Surveys (DHS), which were conducted from 85 2008/19 to 2018/19, was our data source”. I this the correct period? Line 116: “weighting was done to assure the representativeness and non-response rate as well as to get an 117 appropriate statistical estimate (robust standard error)”. Can the authors elaborate more on this? Line 120 : ‘to assess the variability of 120 the outcome between clusters”. What are the clusters? Line 123 : “Deviance was used to verify model fitness, and the best-fit model has been 124 deemed a model with the lowest deviance”. Please mention the results of this analysis in the result section. Results: Line 161: “the random effect model and model fitness/comparison”. The authors did not mention the use of random effect analysis in the method section. If the authors used random effect analysis, what was the cluster being used? Discussion: The discussion section has been really interesting but would have been better if the author also relates the results with the current policy and programs implemented in SSA. What are the overall results telling us about what should be done in general, to address the issues? Reviewer #2: This manuscript evaluates knowledge of PMTCT among more than 350,000 women of reproductive age in 33 countries in SSA using DHS data. The results evaluate “comprehensive knowledge of PMTCT” based on correct responses to all four questions included in the DHS data. Overall, the majority (≥80%) of women responding to the individual questions were correct, yet combined, this was 56% on all 4 questions. While the authors set out to use “recent DHS surveys”, some of the DHS data are fairly old (2008/09) and both knowledge of MTCT and ART regimens and uptake of ART prior to and during pregnancy (Option B+) has significantly changed compared to DHS data since 2014/15 or more recently. I would recommend the authors consider including only those countries with DHS data in the past 5-6 years to better represent recent knowledge and prevention of MTCT. This may reduce the number of countries included in the analysis, but will better reflect current knowledge, which is important. • Lines 57-63 state that “most pregnant women are unwilling to participate in the program,...” and focuses on transmission risk during breastfeeding among women not on ART. I would restate this to reflect that in the era of Option B+ a larger number of women living with HIV (WLHIV) are on ART and while more than 70% of WLHIV are on ART in pregnancy in most SSA countries, there are still gaps to improve uptake and adherence of ART. Also important to include the importance of viral suppression and timing of ART initiation in the perinatal period as it relates to MTCT risk. Lastly, make it clear that the transmission risk during breastfeeding is among women not on ART. • In the discussion, it would be helpful to incorporate results from studies that have tried the strategies to reduce MTCT and raise awareness to add to the statements of what should be done. For instance, adding to lines 211-213, in many countries in SSA there are targeted strategies to support younger women (adolescents) to increase awareness of HIV transmission and reduce MTCT and support ART adherence and viral suppression. Moreover, lines 225-227 regarding mass media, what have studies using mass media shown in terms of increasing awareness of HIV in the community? These data would strengthen the discussion in alignment with your results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-37111R1 Knowledge about mother to child transmission of HIV/AIDS, its prevention and associated factors among reproductive-age women in sub-Saharan Africa: Evidence from 33 countries recent Demographic and Health Surveys PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Teshale, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Pande Putu Januraga, M.D., DrPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting the revised version of the manuscript with responses to the reviewers. I believe that the authors have responded to the reviewers' comments appropriately. However, I still have minor comments that need to be responded to before a final decision. Editor comments: Line 57, for some readers, particularly in non-generalized epidemics context, the option B+ may be difficult to understand; please provide an explanation for the term. Line 72-74 is only a one-sentence paragraph; please integrate the line into the next paragraph. All the best, Pande [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Knowledge about mother to child transmission of HIV/AIDS, its prevention and associated factors among reproductive-age women in sub-Saharan Africa: Evidence from 33 countries recent Demographic and Health Surveys PONE-D-20-37111R2 Dear Dr. Teshale, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pande Putu Januraga, M.D., DrPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-37111R2 Knowledge about mother to child transmission of HIV/AIDS, its prevention and associated factors among reproductive-age women in sub-Saharan Africa: Evidence from 33 countries recent Demographic and Health Surveys Dear Dr. Teshale: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pande Putu Januraga Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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