Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 7, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-38471 Intestinal iron absorption is appropriately modulated to match physiological demand for iron in wild-type and iron-loaded Hamp (hepcidin) knockout rats during acute colitis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Collins, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The revised manuscript should address the issues raised by both reviewers regarding structure, organization, inconsistencies and errors. The rationale for generating the rat hepcidin knockout model and the advantages offered by it should be outlined. The data should also be discussed in the context of relevant recent literature. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, Flores et al. showed that “intestinal iron absorption is appropriately modulated to match physiological demand for iron in wild-type and iron-loaded Hamp (hepcidin) knockout rats during acute colitis”. This manuscript describes for the first time the generation of hepcidin KO rats. Moreover, while hepcidin has been discovered as the key regulator of iron absorption, the authors show that intestinal iron transport can be modulated during acute intestinal inflammation independently of changes in liver hepcidin expression or deletion of hepcidin. Overall the manuscript is supported by many experiments with appropriate controls and statistical analyses. Figures are mostly clear and experimental methods well described. - If this is the first description of a hepcidin KO in rats (?), it should be put forward as well as the advantages of this model. What is the rationale behind the choice of using rats rather than mice, given that Hepcidin KO mice are available ? - The authors showed that, during acute colitis, hepatic iron stores were mobilized and iron absorption concurrently suppressed in the hepcidin KO mice and conclude that “regulatory mechanisms may not involve hepcidin”. However, in a model of hepcidin deficiency (inducible hepc KO model, use of hepcidin inhibitors, ..) with no elevated hepatic iron storage (closer to the clinical reality) , hepatic iron stores would not have been mobilized and the impact on iron absorption may have been different. Could the authors comment on that ? - The manuscript could be reorganized to increase the clarity. It is useful to have data from WT and KO on the same graphs and it could be incorporated in the main manuscript . A scheme or a table recapitulating the differences between males and females could be useful. - When is radioactive iron given to mice (day 5 ? ). - Existing literature is not properly taken into account, especially the recent article by Bessman et al., Science (2020), showing, that, similarly to the findings of the authors : In conditions of severe DSS exposure , WT and Hepcidin KO mice present similar inflammation in the acute phase (day 1 to Day 6) . This result should be presented in the manuscript and discussed properly. Minor points : - Fig.2A-B. Same magnification should be used - Typo line 80, page 4 : Chron - Paragraph “intestinal iron absorption decreases in male HampKO rats but is unchanged in females. “ is related to figure 7 and not figure 6 : lines 419-421 pages 19. Reviewer #2: The authors sought to investigate the impact of localized intestinal inflammation on iron homeostasis, using WT and Hamp KO rat models. They found that acute gut inflammation had distinct effects on iron homeostasis that depend on the sex, genotype, and phenotype of the experimental rats. Iron absorption was modulated independently of Hamp transcription by an unknown mechanism. Major comments : The authors need to thoughtfully review the manuscript regarding the figures and their legends (both figure legends and graph legends), and their numbering. Several figures are missing or mislabeled. Minor comments: 1. Please add reference(s) for the statement in lines 87-90. 2. The statement in the abstract (lines 48-51; sex and genotype) seems to be inconsistent with the statement at the end of the Introduction section (lines 100-103). 3. Section M&M – please do not use the abbreviation “SD rats” in line 130, since you already use SD for Standard Deviation. 4. M&M – line 205 – please specify which tissues and organs. 5. Results, Line 219-220 and line 345 – should refer to all Figure S1, that is “Fig. S1-A-D”? 6. Results, Line 240, your t-test symbols are inconsistent. Please specify t tests used. 7. Results, legend Fig 1, Line 247, please check P value and stars for consistency with the other graphs in the figure – should be three stars for p<0.001? 8. Results, Legend to Figure 2, Line 252-257 - inconsistent labeling and legend – Is it A, B, C, D, E, H? C and D missing from the Figure? 9. Line 324-326, please justify the KO line mutation choice. 10. Line 330, figure S7, reference to male in figure’s legend is missing (present in graph legend) 11. Line 333-336, please check reference to figures S8 and S9 - should you include also S7? 12. Line 345, Figure 2C D are missing 13. Line 415, figure S18 is missing from the manuscript 14. Line 417 and 419-421, do you mean figure 7 (not figure 6)? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-38471R1 Intestinal iron absorption is appropriately modulated to match physiological demand for iron in wild-type and iron-loaded Hamp (hepcidin) knockout rats during acute colitis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Collins, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Both reviewers agree that the revised manuscript is improved and addresses all critical issues. Before final acceptance, we invite you to correct typos identified by reviewer 2 and submit a revised version. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Kostas Pantopoulos, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have adequately answered my questions or argued the lack of changes. Reviewer #2: The quality of the manuscript has significantly improved. However, some minor issues are still present (typo errors). Figure 13 - labeling of the figure should be corrected to macth the text and respect the order (A-B-C-D). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Intestinal iron absorption is appropriately modulated to match physiological demand for iron in wild-type and iron-loaded Hamp (hepcidin) knockout rats during acute colitis PONE-D-20-38471R2 Dear Dr. Collins, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kostas Pantopoulos, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-38471R2 Intestinal iron absorption is appropriately modulated to match physiological demand for iron in wild-type and iron-loaded Hamp (hepcidin) knockout rats during acute colitis Dear Dr. Collins: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kostas Pantopoulos Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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