Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03939 The drug development pipeline for glioblastoma - a cross sectional assessment of the FDA Orphan Drug Product designation database PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Johann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The essential points that require addressing are as follows: Provide a Supplementary Table summarizing drug trials in both pediatric and adult GBM use for analysis, including all vaccines in the same cellular product/virus category, and renaming that category appropriately (see reviewers 1 & 4 remarks pertaining to Figure 4A, below). Correct all errors and clarify all points (including captions) raised by each reviewer in Table and Figures. Revise the main conclusion that the number of orphan drugs being developed is escalating as per reviewer 3's comment on Figure 1, which shows a peak in 2016 and a downward trend since. There were no significant conflicts between reviewers. Addressing all other points raised by them is therefore also strongly recommended. I believe that your manuscript represents an informative summary of the US orphan drug development program for glioblastoma. If appropriately revised, it will be particularly useful for researchers working on new drug development, as well as for clinicians treating patients afflicted with this devastating tumor. Please submit your revised manuscript by April 30, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors relay information obtained from a searchable FDA orphan drug database of compounds approved or being investigated for the treatment of glioblastoma brain tumor. The authors identified four compounds approved for use in treatment or diagnosis or glioblastoma. 162 additional compounds had an orphan drug designation not FDA approved for glioblastoma. The authors also found a steady increase of orphan drug designations over time from 2016. Mention is made of the main categories of investigated compounds for glioblastoma. The manuscript would benefit from more in-depth analysis of the promising compounds and mechanisms of action to understand the main directions that investigators are taking in search of a more successful treatment approach to glioblastoma. . Reviewer #2: This article provides an informative summary of the status of FDA orphan drug designations GBM. However, there are many errors both grammatical and content that need to be addressed before publication. Please clarify whether reporting for GBM only or high-grade glioma. Provide Supplementary Table summarizing drug trials in both pediatric and adult GBM use for analysis, and list designated categories (cytostatic, antibody, cellular/virus, targeted therapy, other) Suggest including all vaccines in the same category, peptide and dendritic cell. It would seem most appropriate to include in the cellular/virus category and to rename appropriately. Table 1: There are many errors in this table, including 1) Content errors, 2) misspellings “ame”, “copound”. Consider editing “Target Structure” to “Description”. Also, it is not clear what year of designation refers to. Is this the year approved by the FDA or year of orphan drug designation? Please clarify and check all dates. Further, there are 5 approved drugs for GBM (not 4): 5-aminolevulinic, bevacizumab, temozolomide, lomustine and carmustine. - 5-aminolevulinic: better described as an “intraoperative optical imaging agent” vs “diagnostic” or “fluorescent dye”. Also, it received ODD by the FDA in , and FDA approval in 2017. It is not clear what specific regulatory event is being listed as 2002. - Bevacizumab: This is an anti-VEGF antibody not a radioconjugate small molecule. Also, bev was approved by the FDA in 2009 so again it is not clear the regulatory event being listed as 2014. - Prolifeprosan 20 with carmustine (GLIADEL) is an implant to deliver the approved drug carmustine. This needs to be clarified. - Temozolomide: check year of designation date. Overuse of “:”. In most contexts it would be more appropriate to replace the “:” and instead start a new sentence. If the authors choose to use a “:” to join 2 related sentences, then the second sentence should not be capitalized. Review should be carefully proof-read. Reviewer #3: The authors present a cross sectional assessment of the US orphan drug development program with regards to glioblastoma. This original research provides a helpful overview of the evolving treatment landscape for GBM, even while highlighting the relative paucity of approved therapies thus far. The statistical analysis in this article is largely descriptive and not problematic. However, the authors' main conclusion that the number of orphan drugs being developed is escalating is not supported by Figure 1, which shows a peak in 2016 and a downward trend since. (2020 results could be affected by COVID-19, but there isn't a clear explanation for 2017-2019.) This doesn't invalidate the analysis, but it should modify the conclusion. Other comments: - The official WHO term is now "glioblastoma" not glioblastoma multiforme. - Clinical outcomes for glioblastoma HAVE improved, just not much. - Table 1 is not accurate. Bevacizumab is the angiogenesis inhibitor, BCNU wafers are not. - Might be worth noting in the discussion that of these approved therapies, usage of 5-ALA and BCNU wafers is not universal, thus further highlighting the need for more progress. - Characterizing cilengitide as "well known" and other drugs as "less well-known" seems somewhat arbitrary and akin to a personal opinion. - "Cannaboids" is misspelled. - "Temozolomide" is misspelled. - I don't think it's accurate to "assume" that CAR T-cells or dendritic cell vaccines will ultimately be approved for GBM. There is no evidence to support this at this time. - Might be worth discussing that although bevacizumab is still FDA-approved for recurrent GBM, there was considerable discussion about pulling this approval when phase 3 trials demonstrated the absence of a strong survival benefit. - The GSK-J4 example doesn't seem to fit this article, as it is not a orphan designated drug. Reviewer #4: This manuscript gives a comprehensive overview of the landscape of designated and approved orphan drugs to treat glioblastoma multiforme. The information provided is useful for researchers who work on developing new drugs for GBM or clinicians interested in approved drugs and recent trends. However, the paper has several flaws that need to be corrected (see below). The conclusion that the rate of designated (but not yet approved) drugs per year has steadily increased is not supported by figures 1 and 2, which show a rapid rise in new designated drugs starting about 10 years ago, reaching a maximum in 2016 and then declining to the level of the beginning of the decade. The authors should discuss this trend and potential reasons for the reversal in the Discussion section. A similar review, entitled "Orphan drugs in glioblastoma multiforme: a review," was published by Lassen et al. in 2014 (https://doi.org/10.2147/ODRR.S46018). The authors should reference that paper and make it clear that their review adds new information. Table 1 has many errors, including typos (ame, copound) and wrong drug information under Target structure and Year of Designation. Please correct these errors. The caption of Figure 1 should be "Barplot shows the number of new orphan drug designations for the indication glioblastoma per year. Years without a new designation are not shown. The vertical axis label of Figure 1 should be "Number of new drugs per year." Make the same changes to FIgure 2. In Figure 3A, it seems that the Lymphoma category does not have a bar. In Figure 3A and B, the authors included non-oncological, rare diseases such as Thalassemia and SCD (Sickle Cell Disease). They should carefully check each category and remove all non-oncological classifications. In Figure 4 A, I suggest replacing 'Cellular product/Virus' with 'Cellular/Viral Immunotherapy' for clarity. In Figure 4 A, the individual plots are 'dot plots' not 'boxplots'; no need to capitalize that phrase. In the Abbreviations table, the entries PNH Paroxysmal nightly hemoglobinuria and SCD Sickle cell disease should be removed because they are rare genetic diseases; also see comment about Figure 3 A and B above. In the Abbreviations table, replace 'Vasoendothelial growth factor' with 'Vascular endothelial growth factor'. In the Abbreviations table, add VEGFR - Vascular endothelial growth factor receptor. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The drug development pipeline for glioblastoma - a cross sectional assessment of the FDA Orphan Drug Product designation database PONE-D-21-03939R1 Dear Dr. Johann, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Please consider addressing the reviewer's suggestion in your final submission. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: 1. Consider rephrasing abstract and/or Table 1 to be consistent with listing either 4 vs 5 approved therapies for GBM. 2. Consider editing introduction to include more than one example…. “that elaborate combination possibilities between classical therapeutic backbones (i.e., radiotherapy and chemotherapy) and novel,…” 3. It seems more appropriate to replace “genetic lesion” with “genetic mutation” in the context used by the authors. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #4: No |
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PONE-D-21-03939R1 "The drug development pipeline for glioblastoma - a cross sectional assessment of the FDA Orphan Drug Product designation database" Dear Dr. Johann: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Christopher Wheeler Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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