Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 26, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-33583 Significance of descriptive symptoms and signs and clinical parameters as predictors of neuropathic cancer pain PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Baek et al. aims to identify new predictors of NCP in Korean population of cancer patients by using the DN4. Although authors identified some signs and symptoms associated with NCP, the main objective and output are not enough empathised leaving in the reader a feeling of non-understanding the relevance of the results. Overall, this is an interesting attempt, but there are some points to address: 1) Line 72: authors mentioned that the prevalence of NCP is 20-30% in cancer patients, worldwide? In Korea? Please specify. 2) Line 81: according to authors, few studies have reported how patients described the influence of their symptoms, however, no reference is provided. I would appreciate to see the references. 3) Patients aged >20 years are included in the present study. However, results only show the comparison between <65 and > 65. Could authors explain the reason for this selection? Have the authors performed any previous analysis to define this age categories? 4) In order to facilitate the comprehensive interpretation of the results, I would appreciate the authors to mention which statistical method has been used for each analysis in the results section, including figures and tables, as it is only mentioned in “Statistical analysis”. 5) Concerning the Figure 1: please consider that P values less than 0.001 are summarized with three asterisks (***) not two (**). There is not Title nor footnotes in Figure 1. 6) Please add a reference in line 203 that confirms that the presence of comorbidities is higher in the elderly. 7) Reference 9 in line 206 does not correspond to the sentence as it mentions the results of the current manuscript. Please check. 8) In the discussion, authors explain that the longer duration and higher intensity of the treatment received in the younger patients could explain the results. However, there is no information about the treatment dose or the treatment duration in the sample analysed. Therefore, I would recommend showing this information in a table or to elaborate another explanation for the result found. 9) If, as mentioned in the discussion, DN4 may have limitations when used in patients with severe pain, why authors have decided to use this questionnaire to evaluate their participants if more than 50% presented moderate to severe pain? Are they sure that this is the appropriate tool for this study? Please justify. 10) Has been data provided or deposited to a public repository? If not, more detailed information should be added to the statistics (behind means, medians…). Reviewer #2: Manuscript Number: PONE-D-20-33583 Title: Significance of descriptive symptoms and signs and clinical parameters as predictors of neuropathic cancer pain Summary I appreciate the opportunity to review this interesting report. This is a nationwide cross-sectional study in Korea that have shown predictors of NCP and the identification of symptoms and signs associated with NCP. Major Strengths This is an interesting article that first describe symptoms and signs based on the predictors of NCP, as obtained by the DN4 questionnaire using nationwide data. Major Weakness Please describe more specific sources and methods of selection of participants. (Ex, hospital type, department, visit number…) The authors indicate that the inclusion criteria were cancer pain with VAS ≥ 1. I think the VAS 1 is not suitable. Is there any reason? In my opinion, the diagnosis of NCP is more complex one. Especially in the cancer pain population, in which nociceptive and neuropathic components frequently co-exist. How did the authors differentiate NCP with mixed type pain? In the discussion, page 18, line 266-267, is there any reference? As I know, NCP may occur directly as in tumor-associated neural compression. According to the previous report, surgery is one of predictor of NCP. Please discuss more about the predictor of NCP. Minor Comments According to the STROBE guideline, the title represents “Indicate the study’s design”. Reviewer #3: Authors have presented an analysis of signs and symptoms of cancer pain in a large sample size. The topic is surely interesting and useful for clinicians in order to improve diagnosis of cancer pain. Authors (as they stated in the background) have already published part of the data in a previous paper and some data seem the same. Please control accurately it. The major concern regarding the manuscript is the selection of the patients: it seems that a VAS>1 could lead to wrong results (even though we have no any informations about drugs that patients took). I would suggest to consider only patients with pain more than 3 (as usually considered in literature), eventually stratifying the population in mild (VAS 4-6) and severe (VAS 7-10) pain. This stratification could be more reliable to clinical practice and could be more helpful for a clear analysis of the samples size. I have also some concerns about the statistical analysis and the data presentation. It should be better to evaluate if there are differences in percentages of patients among the same group (NCP and no NCP). As presented, it seems that authors have evaluated differences between NCP and no NCP for the single variable. This analysis could be misunderstanding also considering also the huge heterogeneity of the sample size. Please discuss it Can we have some data about use of analgesic drugs and eventually differences in type of drugs used and pain relief obtained in the two groups?it could be helpful to understand if a better analysis of the signs and symptoms could improve the effectiveness of treatment. Finally it should be necessary to revise English and revise several typos. Reviewer #4: Thanks for opportunity of reviewing this article. This is an interesting study, but there are several limitations with NCP predictor. Method 1.In method section, explanation of study design and definition is lacking. 2.What are the criteria for determining NCP and Non-NCP? The criteria for diagnosis are unclear. 3.P6 L 105 “A VAS score ≥1 was indicative of cancer pain.” Do you have a reference? Is this the standard set by the authors? Are they defined by the authors? Result Table 1 1.Comorbidity is also an important factor in determining cancer pain. For example, the case of patient with severe DM, the sensitivity of pain decreases and pain patterns may be different due to DM neuropathy. Could you add details about Comorbidity? 2.The type of cancer is also an important factor. If you can, add it. 3.The type of cancer is also an important factor. If you can, add it. Cancer patients often use narcotic analgesics, which can also lead to hyperalgesia if prolonged exposure to analgesics. Add the presence or absence of narcotic pain killers. 4.P8 L139, Table 1 The standard for dividing the VAS score is set to 4, do you have any reference? Discussion In the discussion section, the discussion is too long, and the content of the sentence is in conflict. Need to clean up. 1. What is the clinical meaning of this investigation result? 2. P15 199-206, I cannot understand your explanation 3. According to your results, chemotherapy is also a risk factor for NCP. Old age receives less chemotherapy than young age, so why have more NCP in old age? Does cancer pain decrease in young age receiving toxic agent chemotherapy?This section conflicts with your results and needs clarification. In addition, check the reference again. 4. P16 L217-239 Combine in one paragraph. Delete "Failure of identifying NCP leads to unsatisfactory pain management in Asian countries where physician–patient communication tends to be reserved or of short duration"(??) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Significance of descriptive symptoms and signs and clinical parameters as predictors of neuropathic cancer pain PONE-D-20-33583R1 Dear Dr. Shin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ahmed Negida, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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