Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 2, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-24091 External cephalic version in 38 weeks’ gestation – demographics, prognostic factors and success rates: a prospective analysis from a German single center PLOS ONE Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for stating the following in the Competing Interests section: 'I have read the journal's policy and the authors of this manuscript have the following competing interests: F.L. is first vice president of the German Society for Gynaecology and Obstetrics (DGGG), council member of the European Board and College of Obstetrics and Gynaecology (EBCOG) and Executive Board Member und Committee chairman of the International Federation of Gynecology and Obstetrics (FIGO). F.L. and L.J. worked on the first German S3-Guideline for cesarean section published in 2020. A.Z. declares no relevant conflicts of interest.' a. 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PLOS defines a competing interest as anything that interferes with, or could reasonably be perceived as interfering with, the full and objective presentation, peer review, editorial decision-making, or publication of research or non-research articles submitted to one of the journals. Competing interests can be financial or non-financial, professional, or personal. Competing interests can arise in relationship to an organization or another person. Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: title - too long keywords - too many introduction - ECV is mostly performed before 37 GA? LINE 67 - provide reference for most ecv performed before 37 line 68-70 - is redundant ECV not offered line79 - provide reference line 79-81 - more studies to be published??? numerous studies regarding predictors of success. the authors should replace outofdate reference (years 2000-2010) regarding success rate (ezra, ben meir) and replace with more updated reference (31312960, 30941816) a prospective analyses? is this trully prospective or retrospective? approval (Ref:176/18) means 2018? extremely low success rate of ECV -22% should be discussed and explained reults chapter is written badly - please rewrite. tables - ages with 2 decimals? what age does 33.13 represents?? parity and gravidity with decimals? table 2 looks like it was copied from the SPSS sowtware - please provide a better version of presentation of table what does constant mean? vaginal delivery rate of 62% is very low - should be discussed line 275-276 claiming novely - what about 31312960? overall i dont see novelty, maybe unfamiliarity with current literature, therefore a more thorough literature review should be performed in the introduction and discussion and old references (more than 10 years should be discuraged) limited new information, low success rate - thus limiting generalizability Reviewer #2: First of all, this is a very interesting manuscript about management of breech presentation at term. This Care Unit seems to be a very expertise Breech Unit, and provide care about counseling about all possible maneuvers such as ECV, cesarean and vaginal birth. Congratulations for that. However, it is commented on several occasions that this is the first article published about the safety of ECV in 38 weeks of gestation (lines 39, 49, 85, 275). The study fails to address how the findings relate to previous research in this area. The authors should return to publications such as that of Rodgers et al., 2017 (reference number 32 of the manuscript), where the mean gestational age of the ECV was 37 + 5, or in others such as Beuckens et al., 2015 (an observational study of the success and complications of 2546 external cephalic versions in low-risk pregnant women performed by trained midwifes) where 60% were more than 36 weeks; or in other publications like Ainsworth et al. 2017, with ECV even in 40 weeks of gestation. All of these publications are about ECV complications. Also, the complication total rate is 17%. This is higher than 6% in the revision published by Kok et al (2008) or Rodgers et al. (2017) about 5% or 2,5% in Neatherlands by Beuckens et al. (2016). This manuscript can be very interesting and important, but the authors should rewrite their Introduction and Discussion to reference the related literature, because this is not the first publishing data about 38 gw ECVs. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-24091R1 External cephalic version in 38 weeks’ gestation in a specialized German single center PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Authors, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 30th April. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Salvatore Andrea Mastrolia, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: 38. Not clear what is meant by breech birth procedures? 39. There has been a paper published this year that demonstrated that ECV at 38 weeks has equal success rates to ECVs performed at 36, 37, 39 and 40 weeks and is equally safe. 48. ECV at 38 weeks. 49. False claim of first evidence. 131. No mention on the technique of ECV used, i.e., forward or backward flip? 154. fetuses. 160. Success rates appear to be skewed by the higher numbers of nulliparous women. 177. Definition of AFI measurements not mentioned, i.e., abundant is 20, 25, 30 cm? 289. The study published in 2021 reported higher success with higher EFW 290-293. Need to be re-written in a clearer way 318. A fetus cannot be referred to as children 327 – 329. No justification/hypothesis written on to why success was higher in larger fetuses. Reviewer #4: I read with great interest the Manuscript titled “External cephalic version in 38 weeks’ gestation in a specialized German single center ” The topic of this manuscript falls within the scope of PLOS One. I was particularly pleased to review this revised version of the manuscript. In my honest opinion, the past reviewers' concerns have been resolved by the Authors. Now its scientific soundness is interesting enough to attract the readers’ attention. The methodology is accurate, and conclusions are supported by the summarized evidence. However, I believe that the Discussions might benefit from a brief deeping of factors that might or might not improve the ECV successfulness, for example: - Neuraxial analgesia [ PMID 27131581] - Tocolysis [PMID 33421816] - Other prognostic factors [PMID 31369397] ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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External cephalic version at 38 weeks’ gestation in a specialized German single center PONE-D-20-24091R2 Dear Authors, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Salvatore Andrea Mastrolia, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-24091R2 External cephalic version at 38 weeks’ gestation at a specialized German single center Dear Dr. Zielbauer: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Salvatore Andrea Mastrolia Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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