Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 2, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-00065 Awareness of COVID-19 influences on the wellness of Thai health professional students: An ambulatory assessment during the early "new normal" informing policy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Piya-amornphan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have recommended major revisions to your manuscript. Therefore, I invite you to respond to the reviewers comments and revise your manuscript. The comments of the reviewer are included at the end of this letter. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a very interesting article that aimed to assess wellness and the awareness of COVID-19 among Thai health professional students. Abstract. - It is not very clear what is ambulatory assessment. - "The questionnaires achieved 100% compliance among the participants" Please clarify. Introduction - Page 3 and 4 rows 57-58. Please add reference. - Page 4 row 66. It is not clear what authors mean - Rows 70-89 please shorten this part and be more specific. Is very broad and reader is loosing the concept. - Rows 90-97. Sentences are very long. Please split them. - You are presenting the aim of the current article and are putting references (row 100). Don't know why. Please explain. - You are presenting twice the aim of the study. - Introduction part should be more concise and clear. I'm suggesting re-writing this part. Methods - There were no students who declined participation (page 7 rows 126-127). How you are sure about this when the information was sent by Facebook and Line? - Have been used these instruments in the past in Thai? - Did you check validity and reliability of the questionnaires used? - What do you mean with the terms ambulatory assessment. It is not clear. - What is GPAX. Results - Please mention the income also in US dollars - How did yuou assess BMI? - Page 13, row 230 add reference - As Medicine normally is 6 years. Did you have participants from this year? - Rows 242-247 please include them in methods part; Discussion - Please do not repeat numbers from the results part - Which are the limitations of this study. Add a section about strengths and limitations Reviewer #2: This is an interesting topic. Please see my feedback for further improvement. The title of the study does not match with the aims of the study written in the abstract and introduction section. The second aim, i.e. “The impact of COVID 19 awareness on improving health during the situation was also clarified” needs more clarity. How did you assess the improving health of the participants? I suggest you to write the hypothesis of the study for better understanding the study. ‘Wellness’ is one of the important variables in your study. Wellness is a state of complete physical, mental, and social well-being. But you have highlighted only the mental health of the students in the introduction section. Your focus should be shifted to wellness rather than mental health. It is not clear why the authors have written in page 6 lines 97 to 103 as “ The present study aimed to reveal health risk behaviours………characteristics were surveyed” Please read the paragraph and correct it. Method section needs improvement. Write the design of the study. How did you determine the sample size? You have defined, Ambulatory assessment as a method to study people in their daily life, which consists of a wide range of assessments including momentary self-report, observational assessment, and physiological assessment. One of its’ essential features is observational assessment. How did you meet this feature via online mode? You have used a number of questionnaires to assess the wellness of the Thai Health Professionals. However, information regarding the scoring directions and Cronbach reliability coefficient scores have not been given. Also, proper direction is required for the Stroop test. Page 11, lines 202 to 205: In statistical analysis section, you have mentioned Anxiety, social well-being and quality of life as socio-demographic characteristics, whereas it is different in table 1. (There is confusion in bracket, please, correct it) Page 12, line 217: Write programmes in place of curriculum Page 12, line 220: Mention the full form of GPAX while writing first time in the article. Your study also covered year 1 students. Did they get GPAX during the study? You also need to write the full form of other abbreviations such as ‘Walking MET’ (Page 19, line 291). Page 13, lines 230-232: What is the relevant of writing “According to the American College of Sports Medicine (ACSM)’s Guidelines, it indicated that approximately 84% of the students met the conditions for sedentary behaviour” in the result section. Page 15, lines 240 to 247: Description of the questionnaire has already been given in the methodology section. There is no reason to repeat the same in the result section. Page 16, lines 255 to 256: What does ‘moderate ‘ mean in terms of learning preference? It should be reflected in the methodology section. Page 17, line 277-278: What is high-normal anxiety? Either, it should be severe or normal. Page 19, line 294: It should be no significant relationship In order to measure the stress level of the students, you have used Perceived Stress. You have written ‘emotional stress’ in some places, which creates confusion. So, write ‘stress’ in place of ‘emotional stress’. Table 5 need more clarity. You have stated, “All three aspects of COVID-19 awareness including knowledge, practice, and attitude were separated in order to reveal their impacts on mood, anxiety symptoms, social well-being, and quality of life among the Thai health professional students when compared to the effects related to the sociodemographic characteristics, i.e. income and GPAX score.” You have 3 aspect of COVID-19 awareness. However, in table 5 only ‘attitude’ has been reported. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Awareness of COVID-19 influences on the wellness of Thai health professional students: An ambulatory assessment during the early "new normal" informing policy PONE-D-21-00065R1 Dear Dr. Piya-amornphan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Enkeleint A. Mechili Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): All the comments have been addressed accordingly by the authors. The article is ok for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-00065R1 Awareness of COVID-19 influences on the wellness of Thai health professional students: An ambulatory assessment during the early "new normal" informing policy Dear Dr. Piya-amornphan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Enkeleint A. Mechili Guest Editor PLOS ONE |
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