Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-36888 Title: Kinematic characteristics of the tennis serve from the ad and deuce court service positions in elite junior players. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fett, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the comments and suggestions of the two reviewers, I found a serious issue, i.e., your conclusions are not supported by the data. Unless you solve this issue, PLoS ONE cannot publish the work. The problem is as follows. You assume, that the left and right (ad and deuce court) serve represent symmetric tasks, but playing a tennis serve is a highly asymmetric activity, not only biomechanically but also perceptually, because the head with the eyes are aside from the arms, and because the net is not perpendicular to the ball's trajectory. 1. Given the asymmetry of the player, the orientation of the net differs significantly from the player's perspective depending on the side. 2. In a real playing situation, the player also has to be prepared for the return, which might have effects on the optimal orientation of the body. Second, the manuscript confuses "statistically significant results" with "biomechanically relevant factors". This is problematic, because if there are redundant degrees of freedom that do not affect the performance, the significant effects can well be biomechanically meaningless. In addition to the issues raised by the reviewers, these effects need to be discussed and need to be reflected in the conclusions. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to the Author General comments: This investigation aimed to analyze body and ball kinematics of flat serves from both service sides in junior tennis players. The study is well conducted and has a well-structured introduction with a thorough literature background. Procedures are described in high detail. Although as mentioned by the authors results could be affected by the sample size, data from elite junior players is interesting and adds information on the matter. I think this is a relevant article for publication in PLoS One. Material and methods: Subjects: Lines 91-96: I would value more information regarding inclusion/exclusion criteria, especially concerning injury history and lower back pain. As mentioned in literature (Campbell et al., 2013, reference 22 here), players of similar characteristics as those analyzed in this study could show significant differences in some important kinematic variables depending on these issues. Procedures: Lines: 114-115: could this ‘center of the service field’ be considered as a flat serve to the receiver’s body? As mentioned in the discussion section this has certain importance in impact location and most likely other aspects. The whole rationale around the discussion section analyzes this specific laboratory layout. As a suggestion, since serving to different locations can significantly change kinematics, specifying that authors discuss a serve ‘to the body’ should be emphasized throughout the manuscript. Moreover, consider the possibility of including as a limitation or as future recommendation analyzing serves to other locations in other investigations. Line 117; did the players rest between serves or only between sets? Discussion: Lines 246-248: I wouldn’t list differences found as surprising. You hypothesized there would be certain modifications due to changing service sides and players intuitively readjusting position in consequence. Lines 330-332: consider clarifying this common instructional tip is not confirmed, as you say, only as long as initial position respective to the baseline is not modified in either serving side. It could be that the tip is useful as long as initial position changes. I suggest authors include some information around possible explanations to similar serve velocities although certain kinematic differences were found between service sides. As well stated, contributors to velocity production as impact location or torso rotation may vary between positions yet serve velocity remained unaltered when comparing both sides. Reviewer #2: - In this paper, a biomechanical analysis of two serve positions, the deuce (right, D) and the ad court (left, AD) side, is conducted. Although the paper seems to be well structured and written, and I only have several minor comments, my major concern is related to the main goal, hypothesis and practical applications. - Since there are many confusing sentences along the paper, I would recommend a professional review of the paper. - Although the biomechanical analysis of these two serve positions could be interesting in order to extract some practical applications regarding injury prevention programs (i.e., excessive trunk rotation, or problems in the kinetic chain), I don´t see any other key question to answer here. In fact, since there is a great variability in the serve among players, genders, and levels, it seems (at least in my point of view) to establish a general recommendation for these positions. At the end of the day, which one is more efficient under tournament conditions?. Can the authors provide information about this? - For example, since the serve variability is clear, the authors only analyzed services targeting the center of the box. Can you please provide statistics to support this target and not others (i.e., out wide, to the receiver’s body, as you mentioned)?. Introduction - Line 50. Authors mentioned “skill acquisition” from beginner to elite…Can you mention some of those skills?. - Lines 65-68. This is one of the things that confused me a lot. Where these recommendations come from?. If we take the mentioned reference, it would be non-reliable for me. What about ITF recommendations? National Tennis Federations suggestions, etc.? - Line 68. Who assumes that?. - Hypothesis: Can you please give some reference to support your hypothesis?. - Hypothesis 2 is very subjective. Materials and methods - Ethics approval. Please check if this is the right place for it. - Subjects. More information about the maturation status of the players would be needed (i.e., maturation offset). - Lines 102-103. How this procedure was calculated?. It´s not easy to understand this “absorption wall” setting. - Maybe some pics of the setting, as well as marker placement would help the reader to clearly understand the procedures. - When the familiarization was conducted?. How many times the players repeated the experiment, and how was the reliability of the measures analyzed? - Lines 113-114. I presume that this was a subjective feeling, right? Or was it related to the peak serve speed recorded?. If so, when?. - About the serve protocol?. Can you please provide the average number of serves performed?. I assume that there were mistakes and not all the balls were placed exactly where the researches/players wanted. I would like to know the accuracy of the players in percentages. For example, if a player committed a lot of mistakes, a certain level of fatigue could be expected compared to other player who showed 95% of accuracy. - Radar placement is rather high, taking into consideration that the average body height, isn´t it?. - Maybe I´m wrong but the individual foot position and technique is not described (i.e., foot-up or foot-back?). This would definitely affect the results, right?. - Kinematic variables: please see my previous comment. All the players followed the same foot position? (reference 15.) Discussion - Lines 247-251. Since the hypothesis is not really clear for me, these conclusions and suggestions are mainly speculative. In general, I found the discussion as very descriptive (repeating the results again) and speculative. - I´m missing something in the discussion and it´s the relationship between these different techniques and the anthropometrical characteristics of the players. Did you check any relationship between modifications and for example, body height?. Shouldn´t be important in the serve?. - Lines 261-263. This is like an impossible aim for me, since the variability in the serve is huge, and as I previously mentioned, the serve technique will depend on the players´ characteristics. - Line 307: Ok, you mentioned for the fist time, the foot technique. - There is no link between your kinematic data and previous studies analyzing the possible injury-risk implications (i.e., Review of tennis serve motion analysis and the biomechanics of three serve types with implications for injury. Abrams GD, et al. Sports Biomech. 2011; Upper limb joint kinetic analysis during tennis serve: Assessment of competitive level on efficiency and injury risks. Martin C, Bideau B, Ropars M, Delamarche P, Kulpa R. Scand J Med Sci Sports. 2014 Aug;24(4):700-7.). Maybe more information related to this point could be interesting for the reader. Conclusions - As I mentioned earlier, at the end I´m not really sure about the usefulness of these results, since the main goal of the serve (if I´m not wrong) is to generate high speed and being accurate. Regarding these factors, which were the differences between these two positions analyzed?. Moreover, are the differences reported related to an increase in the injury risk of these players?. If so, practical implications would be really interesting. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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