Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 19, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-02000 Effects of Obesity on Risk of Fracture, Bone Mineral Density and Bone Quality in Adults: A systematic Review and Meta-analysis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gagnon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 15 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting the manuscript 'Effects of obesity on risk of fracture ...' for consideration for publication in PLoS ONE. Your manuscript has now been reviewed by 2 experts, and their comments are attached for your perusal. As you will see, both reviewers recognize the importance of your work, but they also raise a number of issues concerning methodology and interpretation. I invite you to comment on their concerns. As an Academic Editor, I have read your manuscript with interest. I also think that your manuscript has merit, but I would like to take care of the following points: 1. I am concerned about inclusiveness of your analysis. I understand that the relationship between BMI and fracture or BMD has been examined by many studies around the world, and some of the studies that I am familiar with were not included in your analysis. For instance, the study by Chan et al (https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24862213/) was not included in your analysis. 2. The BMI threshold for defining 'obesity' is different across countries/populations. How did you account for this differences in your analysis? 3. Your conclusion is not clear at all. Readers (and I) want to now what is the substantive message you want to convey. It appears to me that your data show that obesity was associated with higher bone mass, bone quality, and lower risk of fracture. Please consider rewording your conclusion to be consistent with the data. 4. The title: I consider that the word 'effect' is not quite appropriate for this manuscript, because all studies were either cross-sectional or cohort investigations that can only delineate an association, not effect. Please consider another title. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I congratulate the authors on a well-conducted and timely meta-analysis on the topic of obesity, fractures and bone health. I have few suggestions for improvement but one significant one: there is emerging evidence that obesity, when defined by direct assessments such as body fat measured by DXA, offers little protection for fracture. This suggests that the apparent protective effect of high BMI is explained by higher muscle mass rather than higher fat mass in obese individuals. Is it possible to perform a sensitivity analysis using only studies that defined obesity using measures other than BMI, to explore this potential association? My remaining comments are generally minor: 1. You used a cut-off of 80% of participants aged 18or older to determine whether studies included adults, and a cut-off of 70% of either sex to determine whether a study included men or women. Can you provide some rationale for these cut-offs? 2. The description of the exposure and comparator groups (pages 6-7) is a little confusing regarding which group included overweight participants (i.e.e BMI range of 25-30). From further reading, it appears overweight participants were allocated to the obese group, but it would be useful to the reader to specify this. 3. "Contrary to what was initially planned, only studies in English or French were considered"... (Page 8). Can you explain what was originally planned and why a change was made? 4. "Finally, 121 studies were included in the meta-analysis(20-22, 25, 51-152, 162-166, 168, 170-172, 174, 176-180): 13(153-161, 167, 169, 173, 175) were excluded because data was missing or could not be transformed"... I assume they were also excluuded because data could not be obtained from authors? If so, this should be specified. 5. You discuss T2DM and how that may have influenced your results in the discussion, but it may be worthwhile specifically mentioning cortical porosity given this appeared to be lower in those with obesity but has previously been shown to be increased in T2DM. 6. Paragraph 2 on page 35 essentially repeats the results and then itself is largely repeated on page 38; this could be removed or merged into the later section on BMD and bone microarchitecture. Reviewer #2: Turcotte and colleagues conducted a systematic review and meta-analysis on studies collected from PubMed (MEDLINE), EMBASE, Cochrane Library and Web of Science to investigate association between obesity and fracture risk (overall and by site), BMD, and bone quality parameters. Using random-effect model, they found that, compared with ones without obesity, postmenopausal women with obesity had risks of hip and wrist fracture reduced by 25% and 15%, and ankle fracture risk increased by 60%. In men with obesity, hip fracture risk decreased by 41%. Obesity was also associated with increased BMD, better bone microarchitecture and strength, and generally lower or unchanged circulating bone resorption, formation and osteocyte markers. However, the pooled data was based on the original studies' definitions of obesity, of which the cut-offs of definitions varies between studies. The high heterogeneity among studies and overall very low quality of evidence for most outcomes raised the need for further studies in depth. Although the findings are interesting and meaningful, there are still work to be done: 1. Although documents are provided in somewhere else, it is better to briefly and clearly describe the protocol, especially search strategy, in the text for future readers. 2. It would be better to shorten the methods section, focus on objectives, and mention information in an easy-understanding order. For example, purpose and search strategy first, following by study selection, data extraction and quality assessment, and statistical analyses. 3. In your protocol document registered with PROSPERO, there was no restriction on languages. Why did you exclude studies not in French or English in this study? 4. The key metrics used in data analysis should be defined/explained and with formula if necessary. For instance: kappa static, funnel plot, inverse-variance, and quality of evidence. I2 statistic should be mentioned in bracket after kappa static at the first time for later use. GRADE approach needs to be briefly described, not only cited. 5. Summary measures (Page 12): Choice of meta-analysis method is based on actual value of kappa static. It could be fixed-effects models (homogeneity, kappa ≤50%) or random-effects models (heterogeneity, kappa > 50%). 6. Figure 1: Please include reason for excluding 8,914 records in the screening stage. 7. Page 13: All articles included in or excluded from the research should not be cited in the text. They should be listed in a separate document as a supplementary file. 8. Page 26, 27: Please provide RR, 95% CI, p, and kappa, even there was no association between obesity and risk of fracture in studies combining men and women. 9. Page 27: Several analysis showed low kappa (0%), it would be more appropriate to use fixed-effects model rather than random-effect models. 10. Please provide funnel plot generated in the publication bias assessment to support your points in the result section. 11. Heterogeneity exploration: Please provide results for all outcomes, not only hip BMD. 12. Discussion: Did authors consider the quality of the studies used in pool data? The low evidence of quality in the average results across the studies might be due to their different quality and confounding adjustments. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Association Between Obesity and Risk of Fracture, Bone Mineral Density and Bone Quality in Adults: A systematic Review and Meta-analysis. PONE-D-21-02000R1 Dear Dr. Gagnon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for well addressing all questions. I am satisfied with your response and totally agree that the manuscript is now good enough to publish. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-21-02000R1 Association Between Obesity and Risk of Fracture, Bone Mineral Density and Bone Quality in Adults: A systematic Review and Meta-analysis Dear Dr. Gagnon: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Tuan Van Nguyen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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