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PONE-D-21-03180 Comparison of polypeptides that bind the transferrin receptor for targeting gold nanocarriers. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Male, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all the points raised during the review process. ============================== Three experts have evaluated the paper and agreed that it is of interest for the field, but needs improvements as detailed in the reviews. Among others the methods need to be completed (e.g. statistical analysis) and the discussion need to be modififed based on the suggestions. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 14 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the current manuscript “Comparison of polypeptides that bind the transferrin receptor for targeting gold nanocarriers”, the authors investigated six peptides, Pep-1, Pep-2, Pep-R1, Pep-R2, Pep-10 and Pep-L all have potential for targeting the human and mouse transferrin receptor (TfR). This work compared the rate of endocytosis of these polypeptides after binding to human brain endothelial cells, hCMEC/D3, human microvascular endothelial cells (MVEC) and mouse brain endothelial cells (bEnd.3). The study demonstrated that four peptides, Pep-1, Pep-2, Pep-10 and Pep-L bound to both human and mouse TfRs and were taken up by the cells at different levels. The linear peptide, Pep-L was inhibited by bovine serum albumin, which limits its utility in serum condition. The authors supposed that Pep-1 and Pep-10, with highest levels of endocytosis, appeared to bind near the Tf-binding site on the receptor. Finally, the authors modified Pep-L, which could be attached to gold nanoparticles by a simple exchange reaction and this improved the transcytosis of nanocarriers across the BBB. My findings are the following: 1. Regarding the ”Materials and methods” part, the exact marking of the catalog number of the MVEC (Line 103) is missing, please correct it. 2. The ”Statistical Analysis” point is absent from the methods, authors should complete it. 3. Line 245: ”The nanoparticles were applied to a model of the blood-brain barrier with hCMEC/D3 cells on a collagen gel (27). ” I lack of the description of this BBB model from the ” Materials and methods” part. It would be more understandable if authors add this method to the manuscript. 4. Line 187: ”Pep-1 and Pep-R1 both bound relatively strongly to MVECs…” In Fig. 3, the Pep-1 and Pep-R2 seems to bind strongly to MVECs, please clarify this. 5. It is not clear, why Pep-L is not present in Fig. 3, please explain it? 6. Finally, both the Pep-10 and Pep-L were chemically modified for gold nanoparticles, but only the Pep-L coupled with nanocarriers was tested on the BBB model, please clarify it. In conclusion, the experiments are well designed and the whole study is consistent and easy to follow. The conclusions are moderate. After minor revision, I recommend the acceptance of the manuscript for publication. Reviewer #2: The manuscript by McQuaid et al., analyze the endocytosis of several peptides targeting the transferrin receptor. Most of them have been publish before in peer-reviewed papers or in a local thesis from the authors lab. Two of the peptides have been made in a new version in order to optimize for coupling to gold-particles. The aspect of find and analyze peptide with capability to be transported into the brain (over the BBB) is highly relevant and needed by the society to improve drug delivery. However, the amount of new data is limited and would benefit from being increased before publication. Particular kinetic data and transcytosis data are needed. My comments and suggestions are: The aspect of TfR as a transcytosing receptor is important for this work. It has been questioning by many if Tf actually is transcytosed across the BBB and the data demonstrating transport of Tf is limiting. This is shortly mentioned in line 59-60 and statement is concluded on ref 14. Ref 14 is minor non peer received book chapter and not sufficient as reference for this discussion. In the light of the importance for the observed result this should be more intensely introduced/discussed. Please elaborate on this and find better evidence. Line 39-40 (abstract); The provided data do not demonstrate any evidence of transcytosis as stated. This statement should be removed or demonstrated by a tight model (see also comment below). Figure two is one time point taken from figure 1, just show as a histogram. Not necessary to display in two figures, at most it should be an A and B panel in one figure. Moreover, Fig 3 does not provide much to the paper and is the data form Fig 1 and 2 tested on other cells Why is PEP10-M and Pep-L* not included in figure 1,2,3 and 4? Fif 5 show that it does influence on uptake, and it would be relevant for the data in figure 6 and the discussion. A major lack of the article is the absence of kinetic data. More fluorescence in the cells measured by FACS could be a result of fast/low recycling, detaching from receptor, degradation. Statement of more strong binding (e.g. line 187 and other places) cannot be used here. Only binding data obtained from solid phase binding studies or isothermal titration calorimetry and provide these information’s. Also, the peptide has been ranked according to the rate of endocytosis (mentioned several times in the abstract). Again, I believe that more data regarding recycling possible transcytosis and degradation are needed to make these conclusions. Please convince me or rephrase. What timepoint is used in figure 3 and later figures? And Why is Pep-L not included here? Is it acceptable to use submitted material and Thesis as references? Which are the two cyclic peptide that is referred to in the abstract (Pep-L, Pep-L*, Pep10 or Pep10-M). Pep-L* and Pep10-M should be included in figure 4 Line 215-216: “Pep-L was also partly inhibited by Tf, but…” It seems to me that that higher amount of Tf increase the fluorescence? The “No-addition” of BS and Tf of all peptides should be included in the figure Line 234: “..it was slightly less effective..” With respect to what? Endocytosis I believe should be written. Moreover “slightly” is not the right word to use here, it seems to be 50 %. Please introduce the collagen gel model in the materials and methods. What is beta-Glu? It is not introduced anywhere and why is it used as a control? The author should somehow provide evidence that their model is tight by use of a gold particle labeled with an irrelevant peptide or dextran of similar size. EM images could be relevant here as a supplement. Figure 5 and 6 should also include a comparison of Pep-L and Pep-L* and Pep10 and pep10*. It does not make sense to compare the endocytosis of Pep10/pep10* in fig 5 and then use the L variant for “transcytosis” studies Line 301-302; Transcytosis of TfR antibodies is perhaps not only dependent on affinity. The avidity also seems to be an important issue as demonstrated by several papers from Ryan Watts group and Per-Ola Fresgaard group. Avidity might be a factor an important for nanoparticles and it will be a nice aspect to include in the discussion. Not all the peptides could be inhibited by Tf. Have the authors any idea whether these peptides can bind to other receptors? Pep10 has been published in a local thesis. Are there any evidence that this peptide in fact binds to TfR or is it just an assumption? If there are could some of these data be included in this paper? Reviewer #3: The authors investigated six polypeptides for their endocytosis and transcytosis in human brain endothelial line CMEC/D3 and mouse brain endothelial line B.end3 and the interference of albumin and transferrin on the endocytosis. The authors tagged gold nanoparticles with one of the peptides (the linear peptide) and observed increased uptake by the endothelial cells. The authors concluded that the attachment of TfR-targeting polypeptide significantly increased the rate of endocytosis and transcytosis by the endothelial cells. The experiments were well conducted and the data were well analyzed and presented. The following comments may need to be considered by the authors. 1. For the uptake assays via endocytosis, the authors did not describe how the background noise was subtracted. A control peptide (such as a scrambled peptide) should be included in the experiments to determine the random uptake of the peptide by the endothelial cells in comparison with specific TfR-mediated uptake. 2. Binding of the polypeptides to TfR: the authors did not provide any direct evidence that their polypeptides can physically interact with and bind to TfR although transferrin was shown to inhibit endocytosis of some polypeptides tested. The authors may need to consider performing SPR analysis or cross-link of the polypeptides to TfR or Co-IP with TfR to determine whether their polypeptides indeed physically bind to TfR. 3. Transcytosis assay: It is well known that the in vitro BBB models constituted by CMEC/D3 or B.end3 cell lines are very leaky. The authors did not describe how the collagen gel model was performed and whether there was any control molecule or control peptide to control the permeability and leakage of the model used. 4. A minor point is that the authors said in the manuscript that TfR is specifically expressed in brain endothelial cells. This is not true. A recent paper published in FBCNS analyzed the expression patterns of TfR and other RMT receptors in human and mouse brain vessels and peripheral tissues/vessels. The study found that TfR is also expressed in peripheral tissues and vessels. Thus, it is more accurate to say that TfR is more enriched in brain endothelial cells or expressed at a higher level in brain endothelial cells. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Comparison of polypeptides that bind the transferrin receptor for targeting gold nanocarriers. PONE-D-21-03180R1 Dear Dr. Male, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have adequately addressed my comments raised in a previous round of review and I feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: The manuscript would have benefitted from more kinetic experiments and perhaps some visual imaging demonstration uptake. But the authors have addressed the comments and I have no further comments. Reviewer #3: Thanks for the revisions. The questions have been addressed. I am fine with the revised manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Wandong Zhang |
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