Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 8, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-00753 A microbotanical and microwear perspective to plant processing activities and foodways at Neolithic Çatalhöyük. PLOS ONE Dear Dr Carlos Gabriel Santiago-Marrero, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have appended below the detailed comments of all three reviewers, who have recommended acceptance of your paper subject to revisions. I am requesting that you implement all changes and edits as described by the reviewers (and where this may not be possible, to provide a detailed rebuttal and/or justification for why this is the case). I wish to draw your attention particularly to the points raised by Reviewer 2 regarding the methodology and reporting of the results of use-wear analysis, and the issues identified by Reviewer 2 vis a vis the representativeness of the analysed sample, which (as a bare minimum) should be acknowledged and discussed explicitly in the text. Please submit your revised manuscript by 31st of March 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: This paper is rigorous, thorough and interesting methodologically. It demonstrates how the analysis of micro-botanical proxies provides additional as well as complementary data to the analysis of the macro-botanical assemblage. The results presented here broaden our knowledge of the plants exploited at Catalhoyuk, particularly through the starch analysis. It would have been interesting if you had expanded on ethnographic examples of how the rhizomes and bulbs of Iridaceae and Liliaceae are usually processed and also of their use for medicinal purposes. You touch upon this but it is extremely interesting and so I think worthy of further discussion. For example, I know that in Chinese and Tibetan medicine, Iridaceae is used for its medicinal properties and is supposed to have an antibacterial effect (it is used against TB for example). Are there similar accounts of the use of Iridaceae in medicine in the Near East that could be relevant to this situation? I think including additional discussion on this topic would provide an additional dimension to the paper while specific detail on how these plants are processed would be useful in thinking of how the grinding stones were used. On another note just a couple of edits: Table 3 ‘smoot’ should presumably read ‘smooth’ Table 4 need to specify what R represents Reviewer #2: This concise and very interesting article tackles the question of the function of the ground stone implements uncovered at the Neolithic site of Çatalhöyük. Although the collection has been previously presented in various papers, the question of tool function was mainly indirectly addressed so far, through morpho-typological analysis, using ethnographic analogies and/or spatial distribution. Thus, previous interpretations often posited grinding and pounding implements as a good proxy for plant processing and/or placed an emphasis on the multi-functional character of the tools. I believe that one of the great interests of the article is to go beyond such generalizations and to provide a direct, multi-approach investigation of ground stone tool function. The article presents in detail phytoliths and starch types extracted from the surface of a sample of tools. This is later compared with the results of a use-wear analysis, which are more briefly discussed. In the conclusion, the authors emphasize that their results provide additional evidence for a great diversity of plants being exploited at the site. The contribution of wild plants is also underlined, among which geophyte species and panicoid grasses which were seldom documented so far. Although these conclusions are well supported by the data presented, it is nevertheless based the analysis of a very limited sample of tools. In general, I believe that the authors should provide more information on their research and clarify various points so the significance and limits of the results presented can be more clearly assessed by the readers. Suggestions are provided bellow: - One of the main points not addressed here is sample size. Use-wear and residue analyses are very time-consuming, still the fact that the study focuses on only 8 out of more than 2000 artifacts (yet less if we count only on grinding and pounding implements) should be more clearly acknowledged, discussed and taken into account in the discussion; - Along the same line, the sampling strategy should be presented in more detail. From the description of the tools, it does not seem that the best-preserved artifacts were selected which is puzzling, especially because the methods employed encompass use-wear analysis. - While the procedure, reference collection, limits in interpretation are well presented for phytoliths and starch, less details are provided for use-wear approach. More information about the reference collection used, some photographs of the experimental tools would be appreciated. - Concerning the results of phytoliths and starch analysis: Were sediment samples only examined for starch? Is this because tool contamination was not found to be an issue for phytoliths? It is intriguing and noteworthy that sediment samples were very poor in starch while in situ plant processing is suggested for 2 of the buildings sampled here, I believe this should be discussed. It is my understanding that damages on starch are mainly attributed here to post-depositional processes, but this should be more clearly stated. The question of gelatinization and the fact that it may occur during post-depositional burning is very interesting. Are the authors referring here to the same type of starch grain damages than the ones ascribed in a few papers to beer production, or are those rather described as ‘full gelatinization’ which they do not found in Çatalhöyük ground stone tool sample? It would be useful to make this point clearer. Phytoliths modifications are not discussed while this could also have contributed to explore plant processing, the authors should specify this and maybe explain why. - Regarding the results of the use-wear analysis: Given the state of alteration mentioned for some of the tools, an assessment on use-wear preservation should be provided. In several research, criteria have been suggested to differentiate various types of plants or processing for instance greasy/versus non greasy plants, cereals/legumes, dehusking/grinding (see Adams, Dubreuil, Hamon for example), yet here the authors are identifying ‘plant processing’. Why does the analysis remain at such a general level and do not further assess the properties of the matter processed? It may be due to the compressed versions of the images, I have but it is difficult to see any micropolish in Fig10 e and f. In addition, given the variability observed in use-wear associated with the processing of various types of plant, the concept of ‘plant micropolish’ is problematic (as there are different types of micropolish associated with plant processing). Furthermore, stone on stone contact has been reported to occur during grinding (see for instance Dubreuil 2004) so its development can be concomitant to other type of wear. Fig 10 B (and in the text as well) mention the processing of ‘ woody’ material, does the authors mean abrasion or grinding? It seems that the use-wear would fit with those associated with a use as an abrader but if the authors mean grinding, could they provide more explanation about the type of woody matter and for what purpose? Finally, it seems that part of the tool life-history is described in the section presenting the artifacts, with no or minimal supporting information regarding how those conclusions were reached, while in fact this life-history reconstruction should be part of the use-wear analysis. - Overall, the article is well illustrated. One table with synthetic presentation of the residues and use-wear results for each stone is missing, so both approaches could really be integrated. Providing more illustration of use-wear, of the experimental collection and surfaces of the tool at low magnifications would also strengthen the interpretation suggested. Finally, I would suggest including a few figures combining the various faces of the tool, use-wear and residues found on the same object. Reviewer #3: This is a very clearly written and exciting paper that reports on the first integrated phytolith, starch and use-wear results from ground stone implements at Catalhoyuk. The results are explained with admirable clarity and with full reference to the relevant literature. I have only one, relatively minor, comment. Regarding the Panicoid grasses and C4 isotope discussion, the macrobotanical assemblage does contain some other C4 grasses (Aeluropus, Crypsis, Sporobolus) that were also observed in intact sheep/goat pellets, and so likely contribute to both the caprine C4 signal and the human C4 signal. This does not exclude that other, Panicoid grasses also contribute to the human C4 signal, but it should be made clear in the text that there are other C4 taxa that likely contributed in any case. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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