Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-32171 Effect of mupirocin for Staphylococcus aureus decolonization on the microbiome of the nose and throat in community and nursing home dwelling adults PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Roghmann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been assessed by two reviewers; their comments are available below. The reviewers have raised some concerns about the study which need attention in a revision. The reviewers request clarification on the definition of carriage employed and note that information should be provided on how DNA detection results correspond to culture results. The reviewers also raise concerns about the approach to the statistical analyses and recommend a re-analysis using different statistical methodology. Could you please revise the manuscript to carefully address the concerns raised by the reviewers? We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 29 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper presents the genomic analysis of an interventional before and after trial of decolonisation with mupirocin in adults from the community and nursing homes. This is a follow up report and the study was earlier reported with culture results, showing sustained decrease in S. aureus by culture, but no increase in GNR colonisation. Using quantification of total and S. aureus DNA, as well as microbiome analysis by 16s rDNA sequencing, the authors establish that a sustained effect on S. aureus abundance is specifically shown in a group of 33 adults for up to 8 weeks after topical mupirocin. The topic is an important one; unintended consequences of decolonisation must be weighed against the possible protective effects. Introduction provides a clear rationale and context for the study, and includes a tested hypothesis (that decrease in staphylococci and streptococci, with a reciprocal increase in the abundance of Enterobacteriaceae would be seen following decolonisation). There are some aspects of the methods I would like to see more clearly explained, but overall the data presented support their conclusions. I would suggest minor revisions to clarify these. Major comments - Colonisation was determined by two visits over 4 weeks. As there is evidence of frequent loss and gain events in S. aureus carriage (especially in younger people), I think some more detail on what definition of carriage was applied is needed. In particular, what number of sites over how many visits had to yield S. aureus to qualify as a carrier. The risk with using a single positive swab as evidence of carriage is that transient carriage is frequently observed, and the subsequent decrease in S. aureus carriage may reflect natural fluctuations, rather than the effect of topical antibiotics. This would explain the lack of sustained effect on other Gram positive organisms seen with mupirocin. - The remaineder of inclusion and exclusion criteria are well presented. The exclusion criteria are sensible and not overly restrictive. Intervention was 5 days of bd nasal mupirocin, administered by subjects or the staff for NH patients, which appears reliable even if not directly observed by study staff. A convenience sampling strategy and sample size were employed. - The Microbiological methods are clearly stated - Genomics included appropriate negative controls in each extraction - The metagenomics methods were reasonably clear to me (though I am not a metagenomics expert), and consideration has been given to the issues of bias introduction by PCR amplification, and includes consideration of a pre-specified, biologically based hypothesis. - It is not clear to me why while S. aureus, S. epidermidis and Enterobacteriacae in nose and throat were examined, Streptococcaeceae were not examined in the nose. While naturally more abundant in the throat, these can certainly from part of the nasal microbiome (https://openres.ersjournals.com/content/4/4/00066-2018) . The exclusion should be explained. Results - Baseline characteristics are clearly presented, a flow diagram of recruitment and analysis is presented. It is notable that nearly half the community participants did not have S. aureus cultured from nose prior to treatment. I would like to see details of how S. aureus DNA detection correspond with culture results. The patients have been stratified by relative abundance of DNA (relative to this small cohort), but if culture detection is a better explanation than this parameter, this should be presented. - Relative abundance of S. aureus DNA was decreased following mupirocin in nose but not throat; note that the nasal abundance is only just statistically significant by a nominal alpha (eg 0.05); I would suggest some quantitative presentation of the results to allow reader to determine if they think this decrease is quantitatively significant. - Other interesting results include: An increase in total increase in bacterial load in the throat at 8 weeks (more than 3-fold, and statistically significant) after mupirocin; An increase in diversity indices at 1 week in the nose, only, and only for high SA abundance No significant sustained disruption of the communities as measured by uniFrac distance - Differences in bacterial community structures at week 0 and 1 that were not sustained over time. It is notable these differences were significant in the group as a whole, and in the low abundance stratum, but not the high abundance stratum. This is rather the opposite of what I might expect given that indices of diversity within samples were only significant in the high S. aureus group. While the authors comment this may be due to smaller group sizes, they do not explore other interpretations, and I would like to see comment on how these findings can be integrated, or whether one or both findings may be chance observations. Discussion - Overall, the discussion presents a balanced synthesis of the results and is clearly written. - Absolute and relative abundance of S. aureus declines in the nose after mupirocin - The unexpected finding of increased bacterial abundance after mupirocin is explored and possible explanations proposed; appropriately the authors retain some uncertainty about the weight of this finding. - In Line 337-338 the authors state “There was a sustained, although not statistically significant, disruption in the nose of those participants with a high relative abundance of S. aureus”. Looking at 5A, and the overlapping confidence intervals of the UniFrac distance, and the larger (but still not significant) disruption seen in the low abundance group, this data does not strongly support this statement, and I suggest some moderation of the findings here. Minor comments - The abbreviation OTU (first used line 148) is not defined in the manuscript Reviewer #2: Thirty-two adults with staphylococcus aureas colonization were included in the study. Nose and throat specimens were collected for quantitative PCR and bacterial profiling over a 12-week period. All participants received intranasal mupirocin treatment. The conclusions are unclear. Major revision: Statistical methods: A mixed linear model testing for changes over time would be superior to testing for differences by repeatedly applying Wilcoxon rank sum tests. The model offers flexibility for testing several factors simultaneously. Additionally, the model can adjust for variables that were significantly different between nursing home patients and community patients as indicated in Table 1. Minor revision: Table 1: Indicate the statistical testing methods used to calculate the p-values. ********** 6. 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