Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 21, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-40085 Effect of exercise training on heart rate variability in type 2 diabetes mellitus patients: A systematic review and meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Navel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer comments: Thank you for giving the opportunity to review this article. Please edit the entire manuscript for English grammar and syntax for readability. Abstract 1. Conclusion of the review should be more self-explanatory. 2. Include its clinical significance on physicians, patients and researchers. Introduction 1. The introduction part is too short and didn’t mention about important key points. 2. Mention in detail about the relation between cardiac autonomic neuropathy, type of exercise and HRV. 3. Define the clinical significance of this study in related to researchers, clinicians and patients. Methods 4. The data bases searched are much limited in this review. 5. The selection criteria should be more specific (inclusion and exclusion). 6. Mention the kappa score of data extracted reviewers. 7. How come including both randomized and non-randomized controlled trial will give quality reports? Results 8. Include the risk of bias analysis. 9. Mention the data are analyzed by fixed or random analysis method. Discussion 10. Explain in detail and its mechanism, how the outcome variables are helpful to change this condition. 11. Conclusion – how come the authors came to the conclusion of changing of sympathetic and parasympathetic activity in T2DM patients? 12. Refine the conclusion according to the objective of your study. 13. Follow author guidelines for the tables. Reviewer #2: ABSTRACT you should add more details that make your review more clear (types , quality of selected articles, of ) Provide us with Systematic review registration number if you registered in (https://www.crd.york.ac.uk/PROSPERO/#searchadvanced) Web site I think you did not register (let me know the reason ) In abstract study eligibility criteria (the time range of article included in your review ) in inclusion criteria (you should add the types of studies selected and divided according to types of exercise ,design ,or something like it will make more accuracy of your results ) quality of study selection measurement (it should be added ect ,PEDRO ) your study used score of sign (why ?) time of selected studies (what’s the optimal timing of your research ) (page no 2 )in abstract (Method: PubMed, Cochrane, Embase, and ScienceDirect databases were searched for studies reporting HRV parameters in T2DM patients before and after exercise training, until September 20th 2020) (page no 8) in 3.2 Study designs and objectives (Included studies were published from 2003 to 2019 and conducted in various geographic locations) 2.4 Statistical considerations (page 6 an 7) In this section it should rewritten again to be more clear 3 Results An initial search produced 6641 possible articles The end 21 article Did you use any soft ware when you select these 21 articles ? Results of individual studies, for all outcomes considered (benefits or harms) 3.3 Inclusion and exclusion criteria of included studies This title should be (Study characteristics) This part need rewrite to be more clear The question is All selected studies had measured these all subtitle (Aerobic capacity, Blood lipid levels, Blood pressure, BMI, Metabolic control) If yes Please rearrange this paragraph and make it in table or add the names of authors in the paragraph If not (give reasons) Reviewer #3: Good piece of work and very good effort from the authors in collecting the data. However, there are some certain points need to be corrected or explained before considering this manuscript for publication. Introduction: There should be a paragraph explaining the HRV giving what time domain include and what frequency domain include. Also there are many methods to assess the cardiac autonomic function, why did you specify it only to HRV? The authors mentioned that studies in HRV in T2DM are scarce, give an explanation and an example to those studies. Study designs and objectives: the 21 included studies. please explain which one of them used frequency domain or time domain Inclusion and exclusion criteria section: it was stated "In most studies, sedentary behavior or low level of physical activity was necessary" why it was necessary, please give full explanation Metabolic control section: "the mean HbA1c in T2DM patients following exercise training was 7.5 %" The percentage here after 7.5 has no meaning. Aerobic capacity section: Please identify if VO2 max was measured or Vo2 peak, as in some area of the manuscript Vo2 peak was mentioned. Considering the age of the participants, I doubt that Vo2 max was measured, but please check. Duration of measures: The validity of HRV less than 2 min is questioned, therefor, I am concerned how recording of HRV of 1 min was included. Look for the task force of the European Society of Cardiology and the North American Society of Pacing and Electrophysiology. The recomendation for short recording are only valid and specified for frequency domain analysis Other metaregressions section: Please report the p value as well as the unit of measurement whether it is ms or normailzed unit. Also I suggest adding creating a table where the meaning of LF and HF can be easily tracked. For example does LF measures purely sympathetic. Also when improvement in LF is mentioned, does that indicate a decrease or increase? In the first paragraph of the discussion, define what is HRV improvement? Which parameter in HRV represent the improvement in sympathovagal balance "We also showed that exercise improved less HRV in T2DM patients reporting the use of metformin" This statement is not clear. please clarify. Also I suggest instead of using decreased HRV, poor HRV. "Few effects on lipid level profile have been demonstrated and it remains unclear to what extent changes in blood lipids contribute to the cardiovascular benefits of exercise" This statement also need clarification. Overall, there should be pragragraph indicating the effect of different positions while measuring HRV. Also The effect of different medication especially beta blockers on HRV. In the conclusion: it is mentioned endurance, and high intensity interval, please clarify what is the difference? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Ahmad Osailan [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-40085R1 Effect of exercise training on heart rate variability in type 2 diabetes mellitus patients: A systematic review and meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Navel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 26 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfacrily answered all the comments raised by me and can be published in presnt format. Reviewer #2: thanks alot for your fast and perfect replay for all comments of the reviewers and thank you for your idea Reviewer #3: The common unit for HbA1c reported in research is mmol/mol. If the data extracted from the literature is in %, then it is fine. In the aerobic section: VO2max/VO2peak are not the same when written in this way it implies that they are when they are not. Please make sure to report the studies used VO2 peak and those used VO2 max and report whether they were extracted via direct measure or estimation. Finally, the introduction part, I suggest dividing your paragraphs instead of having all the information in one go. For example, in the intro, the manuscript introduce DM and how it can lead to comorbidities and CAN. Then a second pragraph should follow how CAN can be measured. Then how exercise / lifestyle modification contribute to the HRV in dm. This will help the reader to comprehend the flow of information provided in the intro. ********** 7. 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PONE-D-20-40085R2 Effect of exercise training on heart rate variability in type 2 diabetes mellitus patients: A systematic review and meta-analysis Dear Dr. Navel: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Walid Kamal Abdelbasset Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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