Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-00965 Temporal and spatial relationship between gluteal muscle Surface EMG activity and the vertical component of the ground reaction force during walking PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Anders, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Overall, reviewers have some concerns on the methodology (e.g., data analysis) and the lack of explanation on the clinical problem (in the introduction and discussion sections). Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors presented a study relating hip surface electromyography measures to the vertical component of ground reaction forces during walking. As the manuscript currently stands, I do not believe it sufficiently expands upon our current knowledge of the role of the gluteal muscles during gait. Specifically, I do not think that the authors sufficiently set up the introduction and discussion to clearly explain the clinical problem, nor what the novelty of the study is and what it currently adds to the literature. Furthermore, I do not this the statistical analysis, in its current state, appropriately accounts for the time series element of human locomotion, and that the data has been over sampled in the paired t-test analysis and may lead to inappropriate interpretations of the findings. Please see specific comments below, thank you for your time. Abstract: Need to explain more in depth as to what P2, p4, p5, and p7 are referring to in the manuscript, as it is currently unclear. Introduction: as it stands, the introduction does not paint a very clear picture as to what the study aims to do, other than re-capping the actions of the gluteal muscles and discussing their function during gait. I think there could be more explanation as to what the clinical question is aiming to address specifically that is currently unknown, and what the value of this information would be to the audience to support your question. Additionally, the study's purpose statement as it stands remains fairly vague and does not get into the nuanced relationships that you were able to assess with the number of emg electrodes and subsequent assessments. This section requires specific attention and more on the manuscript's intended impact. Line 62: Unclear what part iii "subisdence" means. This recurs throughout the paper. Line 155: was there a GRF threshold for determining heel contact? Statistical Analysis: This statistical approach is not the most appropriate means to compare time-series data across the gait cycle. Recent literature advocates utilizing statistical parametric mapping t-test analyses which account for the multiple observations over the time series waveform without data reduction, which is a current limitation of the analysis presented here. This also avoids over-sampling with the separate t-tests. Please see for more explanations and examples: Pataky TC. One-dimensional statistical parametric mapping in Python. Comput Methods Biomech Biomed Engin. 2012;15(3):295-301. Pataky TC. Generalized n-dimensional biomechanical field analysis using statistical parametric mapping. J Biomech. 2010;43(10):1976-1982. doi:10.1016/j.jbiomech.2010.03.008. De Ridder R, Willems T, Vanrenterghem J, Robinson M, Pataky T, Roosen P. Gait kinematics of subjects with ankle instability using a multisegmented foot model. Med Sci Sports Exerc. 2013;45(11):2129-2136. doi:10.1249/MSS.0b013e31829991a2. The same SPM approach can similarly be done for SPM-ANOVAs. Discussion: It should be mentioned in the discussion about common innervation of the gluteal muscles that is driving concerted motion, and subsequent physiological coupling as identified in the surface level EMG. Line 267: Can you clarify which specific fibers you were over for your analysis for a more thorough interpretation of the findings? Line 276: Need to acknowledge contributing factors of other surrounding musculature throughout the entire lower extremity responsible for controlling loading response during gait. Line 297: Other than this statement, there was no discussion on the contributions of the TFL, and why this was included as the "glute complex" when arguably gluteus minimus, gluteus medius, and gluteus maximus consitute the gluteal complex. Although the TFL is part of the hip, the TFL is more anterolaterally located and has more responsibility for aiding in hip flexion that the other muscles measured. Please delve more into this concept in the discussion. Line 329: Need to address the limitations of not measuring the gluteus minimus, as well as acknowledging the older age range of the participants that may have fed into the electromechanical delay elements you identified in your study. Reviewer #2: The current study explores the spatial and temporal relationship between gluteal muscle function and ground reaction forces during stance phase of walking. Thus, a further clarification on specific muscle firing patterns is introduced, which is very interesting for the general movement science community. However, there are some minor comments need to be addressed before consideration for publication. Lines 115-116: How the speeds are in good agreement with published data? Please rephrase. Lines 117-121: By “EMG file” you mean the EMG signal? Although you mention that the time window was manually defined, it seems that there is already a method to detect the heelstrikes, mentioned in line 153 (with pressure sensors). Why did you have different methods for detecting heelstrikes? Please elaborate. Table 2: This table is most confusing. First, it misses a cross reference in the text. Second, could you please elaborate on the magnitudes calculated for GRFs? For example, the relative magnitudes of GRFy in the normal speed seem very high, and also there isn’t supposed to be any units for relative values. Also, the relative amplitudes for all GRFs have to be 100 for the slow speed (like GRFz), since this is the speed you normalize to, right? Reviewer #3: 1. Summary of the research This paper analyzes spatial and temporal relationships between muscle activities in gluteal regions and the vertical component of the GRF during gait cycles. The study was performed on older subjects (mean age about 60 years) with three different individual (slow, normal and fast) walking speeds and surface EMG (SEMG) pads were used. In particular, the occurrence of the respective maximal value concerning the load response (here denoted as F1 peak) is compared to the respective peak of the vertical GRF as only the F1 peak is clearly identifiable throughout all measurements. The results demonstrate the impact on amplitude and time with increasing walking speed and conclude that the F1 peak of the SEMG data proceeds from dorsal to ventral. Also, the highest overall correlation between SEMG data and the vertical GRF can be found in the tensor fasciae latae muscle (TFL). This study contains some interesting insights on SEMG data and their correlation with a specific set of muscles. The paper is also well structured and overall well written. This reviewer has some minor comments: 2. Examples and evidence Minor issues 1. (Abstract) The locations of P1-P8 as well as the F1 peak, denoting the load response, were used before their definition. This reviewer suggests removing/referencing the placement identifier Pi (in the abstract, as it does not contain any relevant information at this point) and replacing the F1 peak by a paraphrase to avoid confusion. 2. Line 69: Please explain the importance of analyzing the GRF and include clinical applications. 3. Line 71: What are the anterior parts of the gluteal muscle unit? Are the deeper located psoas major and iliacus also contained (as this rewiever assumes that these muscles also contribute to the swing phase)? 4. Line 115: Please clarify which type of motion tracking system was used. (Optical marker based tracking, inertial tracking, etc.?) 5. Lines 134 - 406: The authors use “Bonferroni correction” and “Bonferroni procedure” (or “Bonferroni-Holm”, respectively). If it describes the same procedure (in particular, the two outside the brackets), this reviewer suggests being more consistent regarding this. 6. (Discussion) This reviewer suggests adding some possible clinical applications the authors have in mind. Reviewer #4: I appreciate the opportunity to review this study, which aimed to analyze the temporal relationship between surface EMG of the gluteal region and the corresponding ground reaction force, based on the premise that optimized temporal and spatial activation of the gluteal intermuscular functional unit is essential for steady gait and minimized joint loading. To address this issue, the authors analyzed vertical ground reaction force and surface EMG (gluteal region) in healthy subjects during three different self-paced walking speeds (slow, normal and fast). The study is relevant and deals with an interesting topic, but there are some aspects that need to be clarified to be suitable for publication. I would like to highlight two major issues that could influence the interpretation and validity of the results: the way that steady walking conditions were identified and the lack of information about data variability and confidence intervals. Steady walking condition is a central issue of the study. However, it was visually identified by one single person. I don’t understand the reason, since the authors have a motion tracking system, used to obtain walking speed. I suggest using the motion tracking system to calculate the acceleration to identify the steady walking condition or, if this is not possible, to present some measure of error / reproducibility of the visual identification. Since the authors are working with the averaged cycles, it is very important to identify steady walking with accuracy. The authors affirm that “The current study provides normative data in a healthy older population, which may now be used for future investigations concerning age-related influences, improved functional diagnostics, and the monitoring of therapeutic and rehabilitative efforts.” (page 21, lines 311-313). However, only the average curves are presented, with no information on the variability of these measures. In my view, although the average curve has identified some pattern, knowing the variability is as important as knowing the average value. Standard deviations are shown in figure 2 only for the peaks and are quite high. This makes it difficult to believe in the relevance of the differences shown in the amplitudes between the different speeds, for example. I suggest presenting the standard deviation of the curves as well, the confidence interval and the effect size of the differences found. Just saying that p < 0.05 is not enough to fully understand the results. Minor issues 1. Page 12 line 113: I did not understand the reason for citation 16 in the results of fast speed 2. Page 12 line 115: please, explain in more detail how the walking speeds were calculated (Mean speed? Or averaged instantaneous speed? Considered the speed of the center of mass or another point?) 3. Page 13: Table 2 should be in the results session 4. Page 14: I suggest including an image of the placement of the electrodes. Readers cannot be forced to use another publication to access this information. 5. Page 14: Clarify whether the force platforms, EMG and pressure sensors were synchronized. 6. Page 17 line 217: “…, the SEMG F1 peak occurred earlier with increasing speed (Fig. 1A)”. This is remarkable for the TFL, but much less evident for Gmed and Gmax, which show a very small difference, raising doubts about its relevance. I suggest that the authors add something about this in the text. 7. The differences indicated by colored bars are nor clear. You can understand in which part of the cycle there was a difference, but you cannot understand who is different from who. Reviewer #5: Overall Summary Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper, which investigated the temporal and spatial relationship of SEMG of the gluteal muscles with vGRF in 54 older adults at three different walking speeds. The authors present an interesting manuscript on an understudied topic. It was good to read, and the general focus of the manuscript is clear. The methods used are appropriate to answer the research question posed, and the limitations of the study are adequately reported and addressed. However, the lack of a clear conclusion in the main body of the manuscript lets down what is otherwise a well-written study. Overall, this seems a good piece of experimental work that has the potential, with some clarifications, to help understand some mechanisms underlying the control of walking gait. I only have a few specific comments. Methods I would recommend the term ‘participants’ as opposed to ‘subjects’ throughout when referring to human research volunteers. Line 199-200: “Also, the relative changes of the F1 peak after normalization to the slow walking speed were analyzed” – how? Presumably using the same method described in lines 196-199? Please clarify. Line 203-204: Do you mean to say here that the majority of statistical analysis (i.e. all the results presented in your figures) was performed on the left side only? This took a few reads – please consider rewording. Discussion/Conclusions The discussion tails off somewhat with no clear concluding statement. I would suggest adding a conclusion to summarise the key study findings, implications and further work after the limitations section. Figures Fig. 2 seems to be missing the legend denoting colour of slow/ normal/ fast walking speed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-21-00965R1 Temporal and spatial relationship between gluteal muscle Surface EMG activity and the vertical component of the ground reaction force during walking PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Anders, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This manuscript has been greatly improved. There is one comment from Reviewer 4 that requires the authors to address. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for addressing all previous comments from myself and from the other reviewers. The manuscript now has a more sound rationale as to the contribution to the literature, and I appreciate the authors addressing the previous concern with the statistical parametric mapping suggestion, with the Bonferroni correction to account for Type 1 errors. Reviewer #4: The paper has improved, but there are still some points to clarify. The aim of the study was to analyze the temporal relationship between spatially resolved surface EMG of the gluteal region and the corresponding ground reaction force. However, according to the response of the authors to my question about the synchronization of the methods, both systems (force plates and EMG system) worked independently of each other. They affirm in the limitations that there is a systematic detection error between the two detection methods of heel contact - maximally 1.0 to 0.5 ms for the slow to fast walking speeds - but data are not shown. How was this systematic error assessed? If the event correspondent to heel contact in the EMG signal was determined by the pressure sensor, were these systems (EMG and pressure sensors) synchronized? I am still not convinced about the accuracy of the method used to identify the steady walking condition since, although the authors have explained how they controlled the selection of the strides for analysis, no information about the errors of this method has been provided. This should be mentioned as a limitation of the study. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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