Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-03824 Genome-wide association mapping reveals race specific SNP markers associated with anthracnose resistance in carioca common beans PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Almeida, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: Dear Authors, Based on the reviewers' reports I have received, I decided that your manuscript may be acceptable for publication in PLOS ONE pending a major revision. Please see the comments form the reviewers below and make sure that all of them are addressed in your revision. I look forward to receiving it. Thank you. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 13 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In general, the manuscript is poorly written with many grammatical errors and repetition of some phrases throughout the manuscript. The authors are strongly encouraged to re-write/thoroughly edit the manuscript. I have listed some specific examples below: Abbreviations Define abbreviations upon first appearance in the text. L20 In the present study, using a carioca diversity panel (CDP) and a carioca segregating population (AM population), both genotyped using high-throughput genotyping technologies, we employ multiple interval mapping (MIM) and genome-wide association studies (GWAS) for resistance to the main ANT physiological races present in the country. Did you use MIM-Gene or any other software? The sentence is too long. L21 “study, using a carioca diversity panel (CDP, N=?) (state the number of lines in this panel) and a carioca segregating population (AM population)” Define abbreviations upon first appearance in the text (AM). L22 “genotyped using high-throughput genotyping technologies,” Please name the genotyping technology used in your study. L22 we employ multiple interval mapping (MIM) and genome-wide association studies (GWAS) for resistance to the main ANT physiological races present in the country. “Multiple interval mapping (MIM) and genome-wide association studies (GWAS) were used as mapping tools for the resistance genes to the major ANT……. L24 In general, 14 SNPs “Define the abbreviations upon first appearance” and loci (Name the loci) associated with multiple races were also identified. L27 “known to be related to plant immunity were identified in the confidence interval (please clarify which confidence interval (CI) you are referring to, i.e., is it on Pv 04. Rephrase the sentence. L27 Through discriminant analysis of principal components (DAPC), cultivar sources with high potential for durable anthracnose resistance were recommended. Do you mean that you used DAPC to identify cultivars with high anthracnose resistance? L29 The MIM confirmed the presence of the Co-1 4 29 locus in the AND-277 30 cultivar “remove “but showed that the locus” which revealed that it was the only one associated with resistance to ANT race 65. L31 This is the first study to “delete point out” and insert “identify” new resistance loci in the AND-277 cultivar. L33 The new SNPs identified, especially those associated with more than one race, “remove -presented” present great potential for use in {Remove-the process of” marker-assisted (remove- selection) and early selection of inbred lines. Introduction L47 “the largest producer (remove “s “) and consumer (remove “s “) of beans in the world, L49 The estimated production of “the last “list the year when this data was collected/reported) common bean crop in Brazil L52 “of approximately 35% in relation to the varieties of the period)” which period? Be specific. “the new variety quickly came to” Name the variety and rephrase the sentence. L53 “The (remove this-cultivars of the) carioca commercial group “add –cultivars” are characterized by cream-colored grain with brown stripes and high yield “add yields) (9) and ( and “they “belong to the L67 “races 65, 73, and 81 as those of most frequent occurrence in 68 Brazil “replace with “as some of the most frequent occurring races in Brazil. L69 The development of cultivars with “replace lasting, with durable” resistance ……….. L70 “ensuring the “replace grower greater economic yield” with “higher yields” and less environmental contamination. (16).” L73 Delete “Up to this time, (~ ) “ What does this symbol stands for, the symbol should be described the first time it is used. “Insert “About “ 25 loci with multiple alleles of…….” both of” replace with “from both” Andean and Mesoamerican origin L75 “Remove “These” and replace with “The” loci of Mesoamerican origin “Delete “are” and insert “include” Co L78 Pv11 “Add, respectively” (20,21,30–32,22–29). The “Co” loci “delete “of “and replace with “originating from “Andean origin. L88 reported many “remove “cultivar sources of “Add ANT resistance sources from mainly cultivars of Andean origin (40,42,45,46,52–55) “delete;”, and also some of Mesoamerican origin, L90 “delete” “they belonged” add “belonging to the black or special bean commercial classes. L91 Replace “Obtain” with developing L92 Delete” For that reason”, “Delete tend to” i.e., Breeding programs routinely exploit only the elite germplasm “delete “of the variety”, which results in a narrow genetic base. L93 Delete “The difficulty is even greater when it is necessary to Investigate” and replace with “It is difficult to use Andean accessions as a source of resistance (why?). Delete “For that reason”, “delete the” identification of loci associated with ANT resistance in carioca bean is extremely important “delete “with the goal of achieving” add” in development/breeding of elite genotypes with resistance to multiple races. L98 resistance and (delete so, add) recommendation of these cultivars, “delete, that are resistant to the main ANT races” in Brazil (delete- “alleles favorable” and “add”) will lead to genetic improvement of the common bean (delete crop). L99 Delete “For that purpose.” L101 “Using high-throughput genotyping technologies”, name which genotyping technologies? L103 Why use the two parents? Was there any unique trait etc.? Materials and Methods L108 Delete “the efforts of” add “genotypes from the main genetic breeding. L109 The sentence is too long (L108-L111) Put a full-stop after 11 different institutions. These vary from the first….. L127 The Am population was not is L140 Plot (delete was composed) consisted of one row with five plants L142 Delete of each, add per L144 rephrase remove “remaining”, The seeds were transplanted and grown in the green house for nine days. Indicate the green house conditions i.e., humidity and temperature. L150 replace intensity with severity, replace “generated by the infection of the disease” with resulting from inoculation with ANT races” L153 Delete cultivar (used as a resistant check) L154 Delete cultivar L156 Rephrase, Analysis of variance was used on all phenotypic data. L157 Delete, all and add, three races evaluated was done. L178 which software was used for CIM? L182 Replace “Starting from with Using the QRL model identified in CIM, replace “sought” with identified L184 What does conditional significance mean? Both models (complete and reduced) what does this mean/difference L207 Replace “best cultivars” with resistant cultivars vs susceptible cultivars (not worst) L221 How did you measure the accuracy of the trials L294 The LOD score for each QRL is below the threshold of LOD= 3.0 and they seem to explain less than 10% of phenotypic variation indicating they are minor ones. How many environments and years was this replicated? L295 Name the C. lindemuthianum races used. The table should be stand alone/self explanatory L312 A total of 16 resistance candidate genes were identified for the range of both SNPs, with two encoding protein kinases and the remaining R genes. This is not clear, clarify. L346 which were most promising, delete “as sources of genetic resistance to ANT”. In addition to”, L347 Beside being resistant to the three ANT races, “delete” “and having been grouped in the resistance cluster (i.e., favorable alleles)”, all of them are commercial ….. L359 identification of genotypes “holding” rephrase L372 “programs tend to prefer to perform” replace with tend to do crosses among elite carioca cultivars L378 may be sustained by both data sets, which ones? Reviewer #2: Reviewer comments for “Genome-wide association mapping reveals race specific SNP markers associated with anthracnose resistance in carioca common beans.” General Comments The introduction is very informative but leaves room for questions that are not addressed and/or clarified until the discussion. It may be beneficial to sufficiently address the topic of Andean vs. Mesoamerican gene pools in the introduction and then relate it to this particular study within the discussion section or hold off to address it in detail in the discussion session. Currently it is difficult to follow divided between the two sections. Minor comments and suggestions - First sentence and second sentence, line 16 - 18 o Flip the order of the first and second sentence for clarity and re-organize wording of first sentence. o Suggestion: � “Brazil is the largest consumer of dry edible beans in the world, 70% of consumption is of the carioca variety. (Introduce the impacts of anthracnose on these bean crops, what does it do?) The most effective strategy to overcome anthracnose (ANT), a disease caused by the fungus Colletotrichum Lindemuthianum, is the development of resistant cultivars.” - Line 20 o Omit “In the present study” - Line 46 o Omit “In this scenario” - Line 49 o It is unclear what sentence means, “estimated production of the last common bean crop in Brazil…”. Was this the harvest of a particular year? - Line 51 o It is a bit unclear what is meant by the use of the word “superiority” in the context of this sentence. - Line 55-56 o The abstract would benefit from adding the sentence, “Although the variety has high yield…” - Line 58 and 60 o Redundant to include “high degree of pathogenicity” twice in back to back sentences - Line 61 o In scientific literature referring to anthracnose race identification, common wording I have seen is “susceptible” and “resistant” as opposed to “compatible” and “incompatible”. It may be good to stick to the re-occurring terminology. o (Perhaps also beneficial to refer to Pastor- Corrales here in this explanation of race identification) - Line 98 o Grammar: “and so recommend cultivars” - Line 131 o The isolate numbers are mentioned but it is not clear what these represent. Where are these isolates from? Is this referring to a numbering system in Table S1? - Line 133 o It is unclear what is meant by they were chosen “due to their considerable significance for improvement of the variety”. - Line 133-137 and 137-138 o Repeated sentences - Line 177 o Did you mean fixed linear regression model? - Line 226, Fig 1 o Is there a particular reason/significance to using a sum of scores bar chart was utilized as opposed to visualizing the three race scores separately? - Line 271 o Further analysis or explanation of Fig. 2d and its significance to your study would be beneficial. - Line 316 o Should this be Fig.4? - Line 344 o Could you further explain here how you determined the cultivars that were most likely sources of genetic resistance to ANT? How did Figure 5 help you draw these conclusions? - Line 386 o Which chromosome is SNP ss715646017 on? It would be helpful to stay consistent and and add (Pv__) for all SNPs in this section. - Line 412 o Is there any more information available about which disease resistance mechanisms these are? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Valerio Hoyos-Villegas [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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