Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 4, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-27888 How early is too early? Challenges in ART initiation and engaging in HIV care under Treat All in Rwanda – a qualitative study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ross, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers presented a number of concerns regarding the methodology and presentation of the study. They require a number of revisions and/or clarifications about the inclusion criteria and methods of data collection used. They also presented suggestions for your discussion section. Their comments can be viewed in full, below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 17 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This topic is relevant and important for the Fast-Track strategy to end the AIDS epidemic by 2030. Test and Treat has been widely adopted throughout sub-Saharan Africa, whereby all HIV-positive individuals initiate antiretroviral therapy (ART) immediately upon diagnosis and continue for life. Feeling healthy may exacerbate barriers to ART initiation. Strategies to reach healthy clients are needed. Hence, this study and similar studies can provide the necessary insight about the appropriate strategies to reach healthy clients. Setting and participants 1. Inclusion criteria were: 1) ≥18 years; 2) living with HIV; 3) 110 receiving/had received care from study health centers. For how long have they received care from the study centers? Duration on ART? 1 month, 2months, 12 months?? 2. What was the exclusion criteria? 3. Participants were compensated 8,000 Rwandan francs ($8 USD). Compensation for what? Is compensation for their time and contribution? Was compensation given as an incentive to overcome barriers? The reason(s) for compensation should be explicit. Data Collection 1. The authors should briefly describe their relationship with participants: The relationship and extent of interaction between the researchers and their participants can influence participants’ responses. For transparency, the authors should identify and briefly state their assumptions and personal interests in the research topic. 2. Interview guides were iteratively refined to refined to clarify. (Please delete repeated words) 3. Was the interview guide pilot tested in this population? If No, why was it not pilot tested? 4. Data saturation was not considered in this study. Why was data saturation not considered during data collection? 5. Were field notes made during and/or after the interviews/focus group? If yes, were they reflected in the results section? 6. During the interviews, was anyone else present besides the participants and researchers? The authors should clarify. Data analysis and validation 1. Three investigators (CI, FU, JG) conducted a focus group with 8 study participants. How were these 8 participants selected? Discussion 1. Our findings also add to the emerging literature suggesting that emphasizing the social benefits of HIV treatment such as…………. Reviewer #2: This paper describes patient challenges and perspectives related to “treat all” policies in Rwanda. The findings of the paper are not necessarily novel. The shock of HIV diagnosis, anxiety about lifelong therapy, and anticipated stigma are all well established across multiple studies. However, this is a well written paper that makes a succinct argument for both the benefits and drawbacks of test-and-treat policies from patient perspectives. As such, I feel it makes a contribution to the literature. INTRODUCTION 1. Consider the term “Treat All” vs. other terms (e.g., “test and treat”, “universal test and treat”, “rapid start”). 2. See the special issue in Global Public Health 16(2), which looks at the health system issue of “test and treat”. These papers may help to strengthen your introduction. METHODS 1. Were individuals eligible if they had initiated ART under PMTCT guidelines? RESULTS 1. Additional details are needed in describing the sample. Did all participants get diagnosed during the “Treat All” period? How many of the women had initiated ART under PMTCT? How long had participants been diagnosed? How much time elapsed for participants between HIV diagnosis and initiation of ART? 2. Define “missed > appointment”. 3. Delete “All interviews were conducted in Kinyarwanda”. (previously stated in methods) 4. Change “Traumatization by HIV diagnosis” to “Trauma of HIV diagnosis” 5. Lines 181-184 describe a participant who got diagnosed and then avoided care for 2 months before starting ART. As mentioned above, the “time elapsed” needs to be described for all participants. 6. Lines 203-206 describes a participant who reported severe side effects. Is your impression that the reported side effects were truly a result of the medication, or psycho-somatic symptoms of the anxiety of a new diagnosis? I feel like that may deserve some exploration in the discussion, as this might be another potential drawback of a rapid start model, and an area for additional counseling. 7. The word “contaminated” is often used in quotes. Consider the Kinyarwanda translation and whether the word “infected” would be a better translation. DISCUSSION 1. The call for “trauma-informed care” related to the traumatic experience of an HIV diagnosis deserves more consideration. A trauma informed approach is an holistic approach that recognizes individuals’ broader life histories and how historical and on-going traumas impacts individuals’ health and engagement with the health system. In calling for trauma-informed care, this needs to go beyond the acknowledgement of the HIV diagnosis as a traumatic event. I would advise looking at the literature on diagnoses of other life-threatening illness (e.g., cancer) to see whether a trauma-informed care approach has been used specifically to process the traumatic event of a new diagnosis, and/or what other strategies exist to help individuals move beyond the initial shock and anxiety related to a new diagnosis. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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