Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 12, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-18039 Strengthening health systems to improve the value of Tuberculosis diagnostics in South Africa: a cost and cost-effectiveness analysis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Foster, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors seek to evaluate where the bottleneck is when efforts are put to improve health outcome for TB community. Walking through the journey from TB diagnostics to timely and effective treatment, the authors identified that improving decision making for TB patients who received negative results from the first-round diagnostic tests. This study has its merits in terms of significance for TB community. Please address the following comments of this reviewer: 1. The introduction contains ambiguity. For instance, in Page 11 Line 20-21, you cited a reference (Reference 10) and stated that Xpert implementation is cost- and effect-neutral. However, in that reference, the conclusion was proper ineffective implementation of Xpert was the limiting factor to improve outcome. The statement in the current manuscript could cause confusion whether Xpert technology itself is not effective or there lacks infrastructure for full utilization of this technology. 2. If the false-negative rate of Xpert is not significant, or the portion of patients with both TB and HIV is not significant, how do you justify your conclusion. In addition, It would be helpful to your conclusion if diagnostic capability of Xpert were briefly introduced to exclude this as a variable in your model. 3. Please provide a clear definition for cost-effectiveness. 4. Please fix all language issues throughout the manuscript. Reviewer #2: Manuscript Review: PONE-D-20-18039 Strengthening health systems to improve the value of Tuberculosis diagnostics in South Africa: a cost and cost-effectiveness analysis Nicola Foster, Lucy Cunnama, Kerrigan McCarthy, Lebogang Ramma, Mariana Siapka, Edina Sinanovic, Gavin Churchyard, Katherine Fielding, Alison D Grant, Susan Cleary Key Results: In the manuscript the authors attempt to determine the cost effectiveness of implementing further investments that can complement the use of Xpert-MTB-RIF testing in South Africa by building a mathematical model and incorporating variables. The model was used to identify which investment variable would increase cost effectiveness and improve Tuberculosis diagnostics to alleviate disease burden. In addition to monetary values, the authors also included deaths averted and disability-adjusted-life-years (DALYs) in their analysis. After their analysis, the authors found that investing in several different aspects of tuberculosis care is more cost effective than a single investment. Data showed that in symptomatic patients, costs were only marginally reduced by improving loss to follow-up and a greater good can be achieved by improving access to further testing. Overall, the authors suggest that an investment in the strengthening of the healthcare system’s tuberculosis diagnostics may be an important place to concentrate funds and not just investments in detection. Validity: Based on the methodology used in this study, I find the manuscript to be valid. Originality and Significance: I find the data presented in this study to be original and significant. Although what the authors suggest will be difficult to do and will face a lot of red tape, in theory, it is good data to have available. Data and Methodology: This manuscript presented a straightforward data analysis based on data collected through analysis of a tuberculosis cohort in South Africa with a 13% positive rate. The methodology presented is commonly used and appropriate. Appropriate us of Statistics: Appropriate statistics were used throughout the study. Proper statistics were conducted, and variables were adjusted for when needed. Conclusions: Based on the statistics presented in the study, the conclusions appear to be valid and reliable. Suggested Improvements: I did not find much improvement needed with the manuscript as a whole. The only issue was the sections where there was an error in the references. For example, page 20 lines 15 and 19. These need to be addressed. References: The references are valid. Clarity and context: The abstract, introduction and conclusions are clear, concise and appropriate. Scope of expertise: This manuscript is within the scope of my expertise. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-20-18039R1 Strengthening health systems to improve the value of Tuberculosis diagnostics in South Africa: a cost and cost-effectiveness analysis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Foster, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Frederick Quinn Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: The authors present a model of data from the XTEND study to look at the impact of various inputs into the tuberculosis program on the effect of Xpert on TB outcomes. The authors conclude that Xpert remains fairly neutral with respect to its impact. I question the focus on outcomes like mortality, as opposed to program outcomes which would include transmission. The model is already highly complex, but transmission seems like it would be an important consideration in this analysis. If mortality is relatively low, as it is for HIV negative patients, we won't see much of an effect. The authors state that improving diagnostic testing for patients with negative Xpert results would have an impact, reflecting higher mortality in HIV positive patients. However, it wasn't clear that results were quite sensitive to HIV rates in the population. I also question complete lack of exploration of MDRTB rates and outcomes, and very low treatment rates, as Xpert should impact management of those cases. There are aspects of this analysis that would be very difficult to quantify, like resources that would support physician decision making. We don't have an idea of any downstream effects of the intervention, which limits the impact of this study. Reviewer #4: The study is fascinating and concerns a typical example of the importance of implementation science, or translational science. In this case, it has been shown in several studies that Xpert is more sensitive and specific than the microscope in diagnosing tuberculosis. A more specific and sensitive tool allows identifying more cases and starting treatment earlier, with a health benefit and also an economic benefit. This is suggested, for example, in the study conducted by Orlando et al. (Orlando S, Triulzi I, Ciccacci F, et al. . Delayed diagnosis and treatment of tuberculosis in HIV + patients in Mozambique: A cost-effectiveness analysis of screening protocols based on four symptom screening, smear microscopy, urine LAM test and Xpert MTB / RIF. PLoS One. 2018; 13 (7): e0200523 .) However, this evidence derived from trials or simulations is not confirmed in a pragmatic trial, that explore the use of the apparently best technology in the real world. The authors rightly hypothesize that the problem does not lie in the instrument (Xpert) but in its use by physicians and its ineffective inclusion within the diagnostic-therapeutic path. Therefore it is exciting to evaluate how an additional investment in these aspects can modify the effectiveness and cost-effectiveness of the most advanced technology compared to the status-quo (the microscope). However, although the problem is very clear, in the course of the analysis, the fundamental steps concerning the issue in question are not clear, at least to the reader. It is said that the question is relational and studies in the field of sociology are mentioned, such as reference 23. In this case, it would have been necessary to approach the problem from a sociological point of view. Therefore a qualitative analysis that analyzed in-depth the barriers to correct use of Xpert would be recommended. Instead, the issue is addressed from an economic point of view, assuming that the ineffective use of technology depends on some lack of investment. At this point, it would have been necessary to describe better what these investments are and what is their cost is. In the text, you never find this description nor an analysis of the costs of the 3 investments. Table 2 briefly describes the investments but does not explain in detail how these investments generate additional costs, what additional resources they need, and the cost of these resources. In practice, all cost analysis is deferred to other studies cited, especially Foster 2015 and Vassall 2017. But if this is the fundamental point of this analysis, and this aspect should be reported also in this study. Also from the point of view of effectiveness, it is not clear the mechanism through which these investments increase effectiveness, or rather allow to avert DALYs. Presumably through a reduction in mortality linked to a earlier identification of positive subjects, and a quicker start of treatment. However these passages are not reported in the methodology and in the discussion, where I expected them to be the most important aspect to discuss, together to what was said above about costs. In essence, the mathematical model is a bit of a black box in which a higher cost generate a health benefit, but it is not clear, at least if we stick to the text, how these costs and benefits are generated. I suggest making these aspects clear in the text and not only in the tables. Also, cost analysis should be described more in detail, and possibly discuss how other studies have estimated the cost of these interventions (if any). Figures are not explained in the text. For example, figure 1, is not clear how it fits in the discourse and how to interpret it. Finally, the conversion rate in USD should consider Power Purchasing Parity for cost generated in South Africa, such as costs incurred by patients. In the table 3, all alternatives are compared with the base case scenario (Microscopy), but I would have reached them in order of increased effectiveness. In this way, if I'm not wrong, some alternative will be excluded becuse they are dominated by others with lower cost and higher effectiveness. I could be wrong about this, but with this presentation of results is not possible for the reader to clearly identify dominated or extendedly dominated alternatives. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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