Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-04044 Association between serum uric acid and left ventricular hypertrophy/left ventricular diastolic dysfunction in patients with chronic kidney disease PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please not that reviewer #1 raised a very important point. Thus, the definition of left-ventricular diastolic dysfunction is obviously crucial for this paper and should follow the current recommendations. Both reviewers indicated that previous research addressed the aim of this study already. This does not mean that it is not interesting but the authors need to put their work better into perspective and need to better address previous studies in relation to their own work. This should include proper discussion about the new aspects of their own work. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: MAJOR CONCERN Despite the authors have mentioned the analysis of the left atrial volume to classify the left ventricular diastolic function (Line 108), I was not able to find these results in the text. This is a cardinal data, recommended by the American Society of Echocardiography Guidelines for the Evaluation of Left Ventricular diastolic Function (Nagueh SF et al. J Am Soc Echocardiogr 2016;29:277-314). The authors need to show these results and to include them in the uni and multivariate analysis. There are studies showing that high levels of serum uric acid are associated with higher left atrial volumes (Sung,KT et al. Association of serum uric acid level and gout with cardiac structure, function and sex differences from large scale asymptomatic Asians. PLOSOne.2020; 15(7):e0236173; Pan KL et al. The effects of gout on left atrial volume remodelling: a prospective echocardiographic study. Rheumatology.2014 May;53(5):867-74). The left atrial volume is a predictor of cardiovascular events (Mancusi C et al. Left atrial dilatation: A target organ damage in young to middle-age hypertensive patients. The Campania Salute Network. Int J Cardiol. 2018;265:299-233) and it would be important to investigate and show the correlation between this parameter and serum uric acid levels in this group of patients. MINOR CONCERNS Material and Methods There is a need to define, even if briefly, the stages of Chronic Kidney Disease (CKD). Line 105: According to the American Society of Echocardiography Recommendations for the Evaluation of Left ventricular Diastolic Function Guidelines (Nagueh SF et al. J Am Soc Echocardiogr 2016;29:277-314) the correct is e´, instead of E´. Lines 106-108: “The E/E' ratio was calculated and used for the estimation of LV filling pressure. The severity of diastolic dysfunction was assessed using the E' values and E/E' ratios [13]. According to guideline of the American Society of Echocardiography [14]”. It seems more appropriate to rewritten as follows: “The E/e' ratio was calculated and used for the estimation of LV filling pressure. The severity of diastolic dysfunction was assessed using the e' values and E/e' ratio, [13] according to the American Society of Echocardiography Guidelines for the Evaluation of Left Ventricular diastolic Function. [14]” Lines 108-110: ”According to guideline of the American Society of Echocardiography [14], E', left atrium volume, E/A, deceleration time of E, and E/E' was used to categorize diastolic dysfunction into normal function, or grades 1, 2, or 3 diastolic dysfunction.” It seems more suitable to rewritten as follows: “...was used to categorize diastolic function into normal or grades 1, 2,or 3....” Lines 233-234: “Notably, combination of SUA, SBP, and intact PTH) exhibited AUC of 0.836 (95% CI: 0.812–0.860), which was significant higher than that of SUA alone (0.836 vs. 0.803, P < 0.00” There is no parenthesis after PTH. ...which was significantly higher than... Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, this is a very nice work with more than 1000 patients. The association of uric acid with LVH or LVDD is unclear and for sure research has to be done. It is confused if LVH and diastolic dysfunction come only from the increased SBP and the renal failure, but the statistical analysis you provide gives strong support for the role of UA. I would like to ask why you didn't exclude CAD patients as well as it is established that many of these patients will also have diastolic dysfunction at baseline? Also, did you try to match your subgroups according to SBP which showed significant correlation with LVH and LVDD in multi-variable analysis? Finally, in tables 1 & 2 the p values refer to the overall comparison between the subgroups? The use of M-Mode for LV mass assessment seems a bit outdated but we can accept it as it in the ASE guidelines. Language is proper In pubmed there are a lot of publications for the role of SUA in LVH and LVDD. Is the content of your manuscript so strong to add valuable data in the literature? It is important that you have included so many patients and even if there are a lot similiar publications yours may add experience in this field and raise our awareness for research. Thank you for your submission. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: konstantinos Papadopoulos [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-04044R1 Association between serum uric acid and left ventricular hypertrophy/left ventricular diastolic dysfunction in patients with chronic kidney disease PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 29 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Hans-Peter Brunner-La Rocca, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Thank you for resubmitting your study addressing the recommendations/suggestions made in the former review. I consider that all the issues asked by me were properly answered, except for the following: Line 246: “... CI: 0.812–0.860), which was significant higher than that of SUA alone (0.836 vs. 0.803, P < 0.001).” The correct is “....significantly higher than....” Congratulations and my best regards Reviewer #2: Thank you for answering all the comments and queries. Thank you for this nice manuscript. I have no further comments ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Konstantinos Papadopoulos [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Association between serum uric acid and left ventricular hypertrophy/left ventricular diastolic dysfunction in patients with chronic kidney disease PONE-D-21-04044R2 Dear Dr. Lee, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hans-Peter Brunner-La Rocca, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-04044R2 Association between serum uric acid and left ventricular hypertrophy/left ventricular diastolic dysfunction in patients with chronic kidney disease Dear Dr. Lee: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Hans-Peter Brunner-La Rocca Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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