Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 4, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-27867 Circulating levels of angiogenic factors and their association with preeclampsia among pregnant women at Mulago National Referral Hospital in Uganda PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nakimuli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In your Methods section, please ensure you have also stated whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians of the minors included in the study or whether the research ethics committee or IRB specifically waived the need for their consent. 4. Please provide a sample size and power calculation in the Methods, or discuss the reasons for not performing one before study initiation. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: THE STUDY HAS BEEN CONDUCTED WELL TO ANALYSE THE FACT THAT THESE ANGIO MARKERS ARE RAISED IN PE . THe predictability is not assessed due to the fact that the inclusion criteria has been a 20 weeks of gestation . so the narration about this issue is out of context and needs to be modified . establishment of the fact that angiogenic markers are deranged in comparison to matched normal population is a good study . What you can do is look at the levels quantitatively and identify those one who have a count of 85 or more and compare them to find out whether they hada severe disease . this way rather than for prediction you can also understand its value in risk stratification whihc is clinically of great value . If you are interested you can request the gynecs in your institution to connect to me at girijawagh@gmail.com about a gestosis score validation may be can be done in-the same population through a different study with new ethics approval . Reviewer #2: This is a case control study that reflects the association of maternal circulating levels of VEGF, PlGF, sFlt1 and the sFlt1/PlGF ratio with PE, and compare their distribution both in normal healthy pregnancies as well as those with PE and to determine their predictive power of the disease among women in a Ugandan population. , The uniqueness of the study is employing different methodological approaches such as Luminex assay ,heat map, trained logistical regression model at 10 fold cross validation obtain high accurate predictive values of the angiogenic factors across different GA including validation. However the demographic as well as the clinical characteristics may needed further inclusion of variables which could give meaningful interpretation of the result such as Race, BMI, IVF, smoking history singleton or multiparity and mentioning exclusion number of total patients during analysis and thereby upgrading the tables Moreover the definition of Preeclampsia needs to be stated clearly ; There are copple of sites where reference may needed such as lines 313,324,345 Finally the manuscript needs to be written more concisely- for example methods section containing study population or study design/preparation could be merged and shortened in one paragraph ; Also too much info on VEGF would not matters given that sflt1/plgf ratio itself has a good predictive value and gives similar result as other studies. Reviewer #3: General Comments The authors conducted a study assessing the predictive ability of angiogenic factors for pre-eclampsia. While this is an important area, this has been explored in several studies including in sub-Saharan countries (PMID: 28137987; PMID: 29523269); not referenced by the authors. Therefore, a clear justification of why this study was conducted and what it adds to the literature is needed, but not adequately provided. In general, the introduction is too long with a lot of basic information. Consider revising and focusing more on the focus of the study objective. Specific comments: Line 87- 89: The authors state that BP and urine measurements are not specific to pre-eclampsia, therefore warranting assessment of angiogenic factors. I don’t agree with this statement as angiogenic factors are not specific to pre-eclampsia only. Please revise or justify reasoning more. Table 1: Add the total number of cases and controls to the top rows The authors stated that they matched 106 each in cases and controls but some category numbers do not add up to this in the table e.g. gestational age. Why bother grouping age into 43-47 when only person falls under this category? The authors present adjusted ORs in Table 5 but do not state anywhere the variables that were adjusted. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Prof .Girija Wagh ,MD FICOG Reviewer #2: Yes: saira salahuddin Reviewer #3: Yes: Ugochinyere Vivian Ukah [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-27867R1 Circulating levels of angiogenic factors and their association with preeclampsia among pregnant women at Mulago national referral hospital in Uganda PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nakimuli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Antonio Simone Laganà, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I appreciate the efforts of the authors in making the changes, as recommended by the reviewers. Nevertheless, two reviewers still have some concerns: for this reason, I invite the authors to perform these minor changes and resubmit the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: THE SENTENCES NUMBERED FORM 205 TO 213 NEED CLARITY AS THEY ARE VITAL TO UNDERSTAND .PLEASE WRITE THE CORRECT INFORMATION AS THE SENTENCE FOR BOTH CASES AND CONTROLS ARE THE SAME TOO MUCH TECHNICALITY ABOUT THE ASSAYS CAN EB CONSOLIDATED ELABORATION ABOUT TRANSLATION IN CLINICAL PRACTIE IS IMPORTANT TO MAKE THIS STUDY USEFUL Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Table 5 - Why did the authors not include other variables in the model adjustment such as maternal age at pregnancy? Also add a footnote with the adjusted variables under the table 5. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Girija Wagh Reviewer #2: Yes: saira salahuddin Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Circulating levels of angiogenic factors and their association with preeclampsia among pregnant women at Mulago national referral hospital in Uganda PONE-D-20-27867R2 Dear Dr. Nakimuli, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Antonio Simone Laganà, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Authors performed the required corrections. I am pleased to accept this paper for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-27867R2 Circulating levels of angiogenic factors and their association with preeclampsia among pregnant women at Mulago national referral hospital in Uganda Dear Dr. Nakimuli: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Antonio Simone Laganà Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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