Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-16268 A comparative analysis of important public clinical trial registries, and a proposal for an interim ideal one PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Saberwal, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall this is a useful and very timely piece of work which, as the authors say, could trigger further work on registry assessment and a wider debate on how trial registries can both improve the features they offer and become more consistent. In general it is well written and well referenced, and is supported by a comprehensive set of detailed data as supplementary files. The authors acknowledge the limitations of their study and include a useful set of suggestions for an 'ideal registry' as an aspiration to work towards. I have some reservations about some aspects of the paper, however, which I think detract from its overall quality – but which I hope can be easily rectified: 1) I found the organisation of some of the material confused. In particular the very short methods section provides little detail about the 17 features selected as the basis of assessment, how and why they were selected, and by whom, and how decisions on weighting were made, and why 3 were not assessed. Later on, in table 2b and as a large part of the 'Discussion of specific features…' in Box 1, much of this material is covered, but I think it would have been simpler and more logical to bring these explanations together as part of an expanded methods section. Box 1 is embedded in the discussion but its content seems largely a justification of the scorecard's construction. The result is that the reader has to work harder than they should to understand how and why the scoring system was constructed. 2) Similarly I think the results section could be better organised. Why not simply go through the results for each of the 14 areas assessed, noting at that point the median and the range of scores, techniques and difficulties in assessment, and possible caveats around the scores obtained? The current section provides useful tables and a brief summary, but much of the text is simply restating what was accessed. Would a simple pie chart be a useful way of summarising the total numbers data in table 1, to show the proportion of total registry entries included in each? 3) A minor point, but there 10 superscript references in Table 1, presumably to some explanatory notes about the data point presented, but I could not find any explanation for them, either in the main text or the supplementary material. They should either be removed or (better) the explanatory notes should be provided. 4) I thought the discussion was a little timid. The work was done in early 2020, in the context of a pandemic that has dramatically underscored the need for good quality, consistent and easily available information from trial registries, partly to be able to track the numbers, types and results of trials relating to COVID-19, partly because public health decisions require a network of data sources at a global level and registries should be a key part of this. That point might have been worth including – improving trial registry systems has become more urgent! 5) Similarly, although there is a general sentiment expressed that registries should improve, there were no concrete suggestions as to how this might be achieved or who needs to be involved, e.g. by greater collaboration between registries, perhaps orchestrated by the WHO, or by using the influence of funders and publishers to re-iterate the need for greater consistency. Are some of the aspects that were assessed easier to improve than others? If so how could they be progressed? Should there be a web page with a regularly updated 'score card' for the trial registries? I appreciate this was an initial survey but I think it might have been useful to venture, if only briefly, into this area in the discussion. 6) Another issue largely missing from the discussion: the authors mention that registries have many different types of users – researchers, clinicians, members of the public, data scientists, etc. I wonder if this should therefore lead to different scoring systems – perhaps with different weightings and / or items – for each of those major user groups. Those could provide additional insight into the strengths and weakness of different repositories, and thus more clearly identify areas of improvement, but could also be consolidated into an overall score if desired. For example, although the authors state their assumption is that most users would not have the technical expertise to use APIs, and / or scraping and crawling systems to retrieve data, the integration of trial registries with other data systems, and thus the ability to support bulk download by machines, is becoming increasingly important. I would have liked to have seen this aspect more explicitly included in any 'to do list' of possible future assessments, along with considerations of data quality, completeness, and the support for reporting results. 7) There is a minor but distracting typo in the first paragraph of the Results section (5,72,901) Having listed all of the points above I would re-iterate that overall I think the paper is useful and should be published. The points are offered as suggestions for possible improvement. Reviewer #2: The concept is interesting but needs to be re-written. The paper should first start with a good explanation of the origins of the ISCTR. For example, "following the Ministerial Summit on Health Research that took place in Mexico City, Mexico, in November 2004, participants called for the WHO to facilitate the establishment of: "a network of international clinical trials registers to ensure a single point of access and the unambiguous identification of trials". https://www.who.int/ictrp/about/en/ The authors need to be more complete in explaining the WHO registry network including primary vs partner registries as well as data providers; the differences of each. Then as it relates to registries what kind of papers have been published; findings; some of this is introduced at a high level in the discussion section which belongs in the introduction. The authors are not clear in their terminology (for example, versions vs features). There is reference to WHO's 24-field Trial Registration Data Set vs 17 features vs 14 features selected by the authors; there is reference to the 9 standards; hence it is not clear how these "concepts" inter-relate (24 vs 17 vs 9; data set vs standards) and why the authors selected 14 features (which is perhaps more attributes than features). How does WHO refer to author defined "features". The score card is hard to follow; the scoring is not understandable (for example, "for features with multiple variants, the score ranges from 1 to 5" is not clear and then how scores were calculated: as in the case of chCTR for advanced search fields TRDS a score of 17 was assigned). The meaning of the scorecard is not clear; the interpretation of the findings are inconsistent and leaves the reader bewildered. Please see specific comments in the attached word document. The topic is interesting but the paper needs to be rewritten and the concept of a scorecard has to be rethought to ensure it has logical relevance to the reader, that the scoring is understandable and can be interpreted thereby leading to actionable insights. The paper has to be placed in context of other relevant studies completed to date. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-16268R1 A comparative analysis of important public clinical trial registries, and a proposal for an interim ideal one PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Saberwal, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. After the last review I recruited a 3rd reviewer for their opinion on the paper. Overall, the view is that this is an interesting and relevant paper. As one reviewer commented, this paper starts the conversation rather than ending it. One reviewer also pointed out that having a unified registry is vey important in this era of Covid-19. I think that it would be worth discussing the importance of this work with respect to the Covid-19 epidemic. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is now far better organised and much easier to follow, and provides a very useful comparison of trial registries, at least in the dimensions described, and a good discussion of some of the issues involved. One error in the edit (line 302) can be easily corrected. Reviewer #2: Stopped reviewing content after a few pages; the content is too general, not descriptive enough; too many generalities are stated. The author needs to reconsider writing a laser-focused paper where the reader is taken step by step from purpose to approach to findings in a coherent, focused, understandable and 'supported by facts' approach. Reviewer #3: A) Summary: This paper is a good starting point and should lead to a wider discussion on how clinical trial registries can be enhanced to offer more comprehensive and standardized features. B) The document is well written, technically sound and the data provided in the supplementary files supports the conclusions. While the suggestions for an ideal clinical trial registry are very helpful, they are just a starting point for further debate within the clinical trial community. Interestingly in the era of Covid, the need for clinical trial registries that can be used for global clinical trials was not discussed. C) While the discussion was good overall, the manuscript did lack detailed input from the different types of users as to the strengths and weaknesses of each of the registries reviewed. Such input would help identify the areas for improvement including how future registries need to support the wide range of individual users technical skills. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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