Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-37478 High prevalence of unawareness of HCV infection status among both anti-HCV seronegative and seropositive people living with human immunodeficiency virus in Taiwan PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please note that the Academic Editor is Reviewer #2, and provided significant input to help clarify issues in the manuscript. The paper has many strengths and addressing these will significantly strengthen th paper. Please have the English reviewed again before resubmission. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by April 15th. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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It addressed an very important issue - the first step in the HCV cascade of care. Please note that the I as Academic Editor conducted the second review. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Hepatitis C elimination is a global public health task. This research has addressed one important issue in this challenging program. Some comments/recommendations for the authors: 1. When describe the time period, “<2008” might be better changed into “before 2008”. 1.1 In the manuscript, “The participants were categorized into three distinct periods based on the date of 127 HIV diagnosis: before 2008 (period 1), 2008–2013 (period 2), and 2014–2020 (period 3).” – it meant the first confirmed diagnosis of HIV? The earliest date of diagnosis in the study hospitals? Patients do not overlap in the 3 periods. Please clearly describe if possible. 1.2 It seems the authors separate the 3 groups of HIV patients to imply different cohorts might have different (unawareness) of HCV. However, the title of Figure 2 may have misleading wordings. Recommend using more precise wordings. 2 Page 13, Column 3, Line 5 – “360 ()80.4” should be corrected. 3 Page 13, Column 3, Line 6 – “21 (4,7)” should be corrected. 4 Page 15, First line – “Unawareness of HCV infection status…” is not applicable (necessary) for analysis. 5 Page 39, First line – the answer for that is “Yes” not “Blood”. Reviewer #2: Editor's Comments This is an interesting paper that has some strengths, including the overall study question, the target population and the setting. Taiwan has a significant burden of HCV. With current DAA treatments which offer cure over 90% of those treated, awareness of infection is the first step to getting people engaged in that beneficial care. There are numerous weaknesses and editorial issues that the authors need to address before this is suitable for publication. There do remain many areas for English grammar and syntax improvement as well. Below I list these, including both major and minor issues, by paper section. ABSTRACT 1. Line 11-12. Please clarify if unawareness was that the participant incorrectly identified being anti-HCV negative if they were truly anti-HCV positive and if they identified as anti-HCV positive but were truly anti-HCV negative. This will need to be made clear later in the manuscript as well. 2. Line 17: I think it would be more appropriate to use the term Men who have sex with men (MSM) rather than homosexual. This should also be changed throughout other parts of the manuscript as well. 3. Line 17: Pleas change the term 'injection drug users" to "people who inject drugs" (PWID) here and throughout the manuscript. 4. Line 10: less hearing of HCV before. I think what is meant is that few had previously heard of HCV infection prior to the research. If this is correct, please change it. (This is an English issue) INTRODUCTION 1. Lines29-30: The term "Elimination" should probably be replaced. HCV Elimination is used as a term in public health referring to population level control.No one has achieved elimination from a public health perspective. I think that authors mean to say that treatment with DAAs results in cure in 90% or more of patients (i.e. it is true that virus is eliminated in the patients body). I suggest reframing this about cure (more patient centered). If the authors want - they can note that treatment with DAAs 'can lead to elimination of HCV viremia and cure. 2. Line 33: this statement should include a reference/citation regarding reinfections among people who use drugs, (were highest incidence is) 3. line 35: change "among' to "to" 4. Line 43: regarding "41% in Germany" - this reference is very dated and this may have changed since 2014 when DAAs became available. Please update. 5. Line 46: Please change intravenous drug users (IDUs) to People who inject drugs (PWID) here and throughout the manuscript. 6. Line 45-46 - regarding change in behavior with awareness of HCV status - not all research shows that this happens. Consider these: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/25814695/ https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0376871609002294?via%3Dihub 7. Line 51: The only references cited for this statement are with respect to sexual transmission. Please add references regarding parenteral transmission, which is FAR more common than sexual transmission. 8. Line 52: This reference is with respect to India, what what you cite is true. However HIV is highly stigmatized there. Strengthen this statement with some data from a different area/region. 9. Line 53: add: "especially marginalized groups, which may contribute to a significantly decreased..." 10. Lines 54-55 - i think caution should be used when prioritizing one population over another. This has the effect of putting value on one population over another. It may be enough to state that this is a high priority population and cite guidelines for treatment of HCV in PLWH from Infectious Disease Society, and or other clinical groups. You can consider deleting the word 'more' and 'than in the general population' in this line. 11. Line 58-59 I think this sentence is too strong and a little off the mark: awareness of serostatus would facilitate the next step in continuum of care - linking to a provider and potentially treatment, which are all necessary steps to elimination. 12. Line 70. Please describe the Domains. MATERIALS AND METHODS 1. Line 80: in the last sentence that says Southern Taiwan has a high prevalence of HCV infection, please add: 'relative to -----where and how much--. This will give the reader more perspective. 2. Linnes 84-85: please clarify what the difference is between "perceived risk of HCV infection, and assessment of the risk of HCV infections". (after reading the survey and the results the latter is about 'potential exposures to HCV". I do recommend using this language about exposures vs. risk elsewhere in the manuscript. 3. Lines 96-97 - Again, I think the authors should consider changing the language for the last group to "assessment of potential exposures to HCV". 4. Lines 127-128: please state why these time periods were selected. 5. Lines 120-131: This English is a little awkward. Consider changing to: 'correctly identifying as anti-HCV positive', and UoHCV as 'incorrectly identifying as anti-HCV negative" 6. Line 131: change high risk behaviors to high risk exposures (it is less judgmental). 7. Line 134: what does 'status' refer to? the HCV status of sexual partners? Please clarify. 8. Line 142: again, what are the Domains - please describe these. 9. Line 152: Please omit the word univariate and use the word bivariate when describing analyses comparing two variables. (univariate describes one variable). 10: Line 153Clarify what statistic was used to assess bivariate associations (it is not clear why use binary backwards logistic regression?? ). this sentence should probably read: Binary logistic Binary regression was used to assess associations and calculate odds ratios in bivariate analyses between surveyed factors and UoHCV... in . 11. Line 163: Consider editing this to: To determine HCV-related knowledge and domain scores of knowledge independently associated with UoHCV, we used a multilinear regressions model with backward strategy. Also, please clarify why Backward approach was used. RESULTS 1. Lines 176-177: State what the subgroups are in the text. 2. Table 2: please change the word 'univariable' to Bivariate in the title and in the Table. 3. Lines 245-247 - the domains noted here should be moved to methods. It is find to reiterate them here as well. 4. Table 4. Please Name the Domains, not just the number. in the table heading. Can you convert the Betas and 95% CI to adjusted odds ratios. DISCUSSION 1. Line 276: Be very sure of this... it may be the first in a study of HIV positive people (but its not the first study to assess discordance in HCV status and knowledge of status.) 2. Lines 282-283: what does this mean (need for customized strategies). This sentence is too broad - customized to who? or should messages be broadened to other groups. Be more specific . 3. Line 285 and elsewhere: change IDU to PWID. 4. Line 290: delete 'prevalent among" and change to "increasingly detected" 5. Line 291 and elsewhere: change homosexuals to MSM. 6. Line 294: delete medical, and replace with injection 7. Line 295: delete "or sharing of unsterile equipment" as it is redundant with the above. 8. Line 302: add "HIV positive" before the word 'individuals' 9. Line 306: Add "newly available DAAs" to this sentence. 10. Lines 316-318: Reframe this sentence. There is risk of reinfection among people treated with HCV who have ongoing exposures. Limiting these is needed to maintain elimination progress. 11. Line 320 - others researchers have not seen behavior change: (i) https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0376871609002294?via%3Dihub (ii) https://jech.bmj.com/content/69/8/745 But note that these studies were not conducted in PLWH 12. Line 336: When you say 'further research' be more engaged. Like what research is needed. 13. Lines 337-339: This is a very old reference. Many attitudes have changed. Does stigma remain high in Taiwan? Perhaps local reference might be better here to better frame what is needed in Taiwan. 14. Lines 341-342: delete part of the sentence that says: ..."particularly among individuals... before 2008" 15. Line 343: When saying additional study, should be conducted - like what ? besides condom use? 16. Line 354-355". What is the medical guideline for HCV testing in HIV positive people in Taiwan? this would be good information to share and make the point that the HCV testing rate is low in this high risk group. 17. Lines 357-358" The sentence states there is a negative association: please interpret this for our readers. What does this mean? 18. Several places -where Tables are referred to in the Discussion. I think you do not have to tell the reader to go back to the tables and can delete those. 19. Line 376: please make sure to state the population a the end of the sentence ".. in PLWH". 20: Line 388: Good job on the limitations. I suggest deleting the words "was unavoidable" from this sentence though. 21. Line 394 change this sentence to read: ".. findings may not be generalizable to all PLWH populations. [i feel that in many places the authors lose sight that this is all done in PLWH - so discussion points need to emphasize that]. CONCLUSION 1. Line 399" say why the 'era of DAA's is important (eg., the high cure rates and potential to impact population prevalence or lead to elimination...?) 2. Line 405: Delete the end of the sentence starting with 'should' and change to "may be more effective if targeted to PLWH by HCV serostastus. (stay with your data and your population'. (the word personalized is awkward) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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High prevalence of unawareness of HCV infection status among both HCV-seronegative and seropositive people living with human immunodeficiency virus in Taiwan PONE-D-20-37478R1 Dear Dr. Lu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kimberly Page, PhD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thanks to the authors for their considerate and responsive revisions. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-37478R1 High prevalence of unawareness of HCV infection status among both HCV-seronegative and seropositive people living with human immunodeficiency virus in Taiwan Dear Dr. Lu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kimberly Page Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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