Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-33968 Profiling targeted driver mutations with PD-L1 expression in non-small cell lung cancer reveals associations with EGFR mutations and vascular invasion PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 21 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors aimed to compare the PCR testing and immunohistochemistry (IHC) of PD-L1 in the present study and showed a significant association between them. In addition, they also presented the association among driver gene mutation, tumor pathological feature, and PD-L1 expression. I suggest minor revisions in this paper. Comments Introduction � Authors hypothesized the association between EGFR mutation and pathological features based on the fact that those with EGFR mutant NSCLC show a longer survival than EGFR wild type NSCLC. However, longer survival in EGFR mutant NSCLC is contributed by treatment with EGFR-TKI rather than EGFR gene mutation itself. Thus, I would like authors to reconsider whether the above logic is appropriate, although it has been shown that EGFR mutant NSCLC was less vascular invasion. Furthermore, the previous study of reference number 12 investigated the association between post progression survival and overall survival in patients with EGFR mutant NSCLC, did not compare the survival between patients with EGFR wild type and mutant NSCLC. So, it seems to be inappropriate to cite this paper in this context. Methods � Please describe who evaluated IHC findings. � Please describe the reason for using two statistical software. Results � The correlation coefficient between the result of PD-L1 PCR testing and IHC is relatively low. Is it possible to create ROC curve and calculate the sensitivity and specificity of a PCR testing for IHC? � I can’t understand how the “expected” was calculated in table 2. Can authors simply show the number and percentage of patients in each category? Discussion � Authors demonstrated that EGFR mutations are associated with the absence of PD-L1 in the present study. Because many previous authors have reported the association between them, I would like authors to discuss citing meta-analysis by Zhang M et al. (SCienTifiC Reports | 7: 10255 | DOI: 10.1038 / s41598-017-10925-7) and Li D et al. (Eur J Surg Oncol. 2017 Jul; 43 (7): 1372-1379. Doi: 10.1016 / j.ejso. 2017.02.008.) Reviewer #2: Alwithenani et al. present their manuscript "Profiling targeted driver mutations with PD-L1 expression in non-small cell lung cancer reveals associations with EGFR mutations and vascular invasion" describing the relationship between mutation status and clinical characteristics, PLD1 expression and clinical characteristics, and PDL1 IHC vs qPCR. The strength of the study is the large cohort from which the authors are able to draw a number of conclusions. I believe the title does not accurately reflect the data as PDL1 expression was found to correlate with no EGFR mutation, further as there was no extensive analysis done on vascular invasion, I do not feel this is appropriate for the title. The title should reflect the relationship between mutation status, clinical characteristics IHC, and qPCR. Overall the manuscript is of interest, however, the study is very similar to a study by Tsimateyeu et al (Science Reports 2020) which should be referenced here in. In addition, additional detail should be provided for the methodology used. Major and minor comments are listed below: Major comments 1. Please explain why signal intensity was not included for the IHC staining analysis. 2. Please reference previous reports using a 1% IHC cutoff 3. There seems to be some discrepancy between the statistical analyses described in the methods section and the methods described below the tables (ie Agretzi z-test table 2, Pearsons Table 3). 4. Please expand on "significant associations between mutations and lymph-vascular invasion and tumor grade could indicate a poor or good prognostic status" this should be able to be determined based on the data 5. The results do not always appropriately reflect the type of test used, please be very specific if you are comparing 2 variables (ie mutation yes or no) or multiple (ie Stage 1-4). 6. It would be helpful to see analysis of IHC positivity as a continuous variable when compared to clinical characteristics allowing it. 7. Why are all discussed driver mutations not included in Table 2? 8. The data in Figure 1 is interesting, although the authors state statistical significance for the EGFR mutations and not the Kras mutations, the differences on the graphs appear the opposite. Can the author further clarify how the analyses for these data were performed`. 9. How were "immune cells" selected, were they sorted? Also, the authors mention a 50% cutoff but it is not clear what this references. It is ahrd to understand how they examined PDL1 mRNA in immune cells if there was not sorting/selecting. Minor Comments 1. The manuscript should be checked throughout for clarity and lack of repetition (ie. in the intro it reads " Tumor cells with high levels of PLD1 have noticeably higher PDL1 expression in comparison to adjacent lung parenchyma" 2. It isn't clear if the mutation sequencing was done for diagnostic purposes or by the researchers, similarly, why were there 2 panels used for EGFR 3. In pt characteristics in the methods, please specify precisely which mutations have been studies instead of "these driver mutations" were all driver mutations considered or just select ones. 4. Should be clear describing the results in the abstract (ie, increase PDL1 positivity was assoc wt EGFR instead of what is written). 5. For table 2, it would be helpful to describe in the results where the "expected"data came from 6. Please be consistent with the table headers (ie "N" vs "n" vs "no") 7. Please explain all variable in Table 6 in the txt as opposed to "and others" 8. The authors should further discuss how they see these analysis contributing to pt diagnosis or treatment. Is it really more feasible to do PCR than IHC, etc? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-33968R1 Profiling non-small cell lung cancer reveals that PD-L1 is associated with wild type EGFR and vascular invasion, and immunohistochemistry quantification of PD-L1 correlates weakly with RT-qPCR PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 14 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Srikumar Chellappan Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The authors have addressed all the issues raised in the original review. One minor change has been suggested by one reviewer; please make this change and highlight it. A decision can be made at the editorial level once this change is made. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have appropriately replied to review comments. However, in discussion, authors described as below; "Indeed, two meta-analysis studies have reported lack of associations between PD-L1 presence and EGFR mutations in lung cancer patients [33, 34]." The reference number 34 reported that there were the association between PD-L1 expression and EGFR mutation status, so the above description is thought to be inappropriate. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Profiling non-small cell lung cancer reveals that PD-L1 is associated with wild type EGFR and vascular invasion, and immunohistochemistry quantification of PD-L1 correlates weakly with RT-qPCR PONE-D-20-33968R2 Dear Dr. Xu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Srikumar Chellappan Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-33968R2 Profiling non-small cell lung cancer reveals that PD-L1 is associated with wild type EGFR and vascular invasion, and immunohistochemistry quantification of PD-L1 correlates weakly with RT-qPCR Dear Dr. Xu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Srikumar Chellappan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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