Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 10, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-28596 Increased expression of Netrin-4 is associated with allodynia in a trigeminal neuropathic pain model rats by infraorbital nerve injury PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yamashita, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Your manuscript has been assessed by the reviewers. Although it is of interest, we are unable to consider it for publication in its current form. The reviewers have raised several points which we believe would improve the manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 20 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Honjo et al. report the contribution of Netrin-4 to mechanical hypersensitivity in a rat model of trigeminal neuropathic pain. This study is interesting, but I have a few issues that should be addressed. Major comments 1. The role of Netrin-4 was investigated using its antibody. The authors previously demonstrated its role in neuropathic pain using Netrin-4-mutant rats. Why do they use the mutant rats in this study? If Netrin-4-mutant rats exhibit reduction of behavioral hypersensitivity after infraorbital nerve injury, the authors’ conclusion of this study would be strengthened. 2. Phosphorylated-ERK has been reported to be seen primarily in glial cells (not neurons) 14 days after nerve injury (PMID: 15733640). These cells are crucial for neuronal sensitization associated with neuropathic pain (PMID: 19741123). Did the authors detect p-ERK in astrocytes or microglia in the Vc after nerve injury? 3. Netrin-4 expression is also increased in the contralateral side at day 14 (Figure 4). However, pain threshold in the contralateral side at that time was normal (Figure 1). These data imply that Netrin-4 is not sufficient to mechanical hypersensitivity. On the other hand, the authors previously reported that intrathecal administration of Netrin-4 to normal rats induces mechanical hypersensitivity. How do the authors reconcile the discrepancy? This should be discussed. Minor comment 1. (Line 258-260) The authors might mistakenly cite Refs #30 and 31 (these papers do not use a spinal cord injury model). Reviewer #2: The authors of this work have shown that the expression of Netrin-4 is increased in the Vc 14 days after ligation of infraorbital nerve, and thereby activation of Netrin-4/Unc5B signaling axis are responsible for the development of neuropathic pain after ION-CCI. Each result may not be novel, but the hypotheses of this study have been theoretically tested and discussed, and the manuscript is well-written. However, in the current format, the clarity of these findings should not be enough. There are several points that the authors should further address to their excellent manuscript. Major Comment 1. Throughout the manuscript, there seems to be a lack of explanation of the Netrin-4/Unc5B signaling axis in the Vc region that are activated after ION-CCI. For example, it is unclear how Netrin-4 is up-regulated in the VC region after nerve injury. It is also difficult to understand how the authors conclude that Netrin-4 is upregulated in interneurons IN THE VC region. Furthermore, it would also be necessary to mention through what signaling pathway ERK is activated after Netrin-4 binds to Unc5B. 2. The authors argued that Netrin-4 may participate in the sensitization process leading to neuropathic pain. Of course, their study using anti-Netrin-4 antibody highlight pro-nociceptive roles of Netrin-4. However, based on the series of there findings, it is not sufficient to conclude that netrin-4 is involved in central sensitization. For example, their conclusions would be reinforced by showing the time course of changes in netrin-4 expression after ION-CCI. 3. In order to conclude the nociceptive roles of Netrin-4 in the Vc, I strongly recommend not only to experiment with neutralizing Netrin-4 antibody, but also to investigate whether the administration of recombinant Netrin-4 protein mimics pain behaviors and activation of ERK in the Vc. 4. My major concern with their data is that complete lack of staining images in the figures. For example, in figure 3, immunohistochemical images of contralateral side and images in the netrin-4 neutralizing antibody treatment group are absolutely necessary. Similarly, staining images of contralateral and ipsilateral side on day 0 and 14 MUST be included in figure 4. 5. Although the authors have proposed a role for netrin-4 in the development of pain, netrin-4-positive cells appear to be a few in the Vc even after ION-CCI. This discrepancy needs to be explained in the manuscript. Minor Comment 1. P.11, line 215: Is the sentence "we performed quantitative mRNA analysis by RT-PCR." correct? 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