Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 26, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-40610 Dynamic arm movements attenuate perceptual distortion of visual vertical induced during prolonged whole-body tilt PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tani, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have received comments from two knowledgeable Reviewers. Both have requested significant changes but, in my judgment, the changes are tractable. I believe that a solid revision will significantly enhance the value of your contribution. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Restrained subjects were passively tilted to a fixed angle in the coronal plane. The subject’s task was to adjust a display (a line) to align with the “gravitational vertical”. These subjective reports were made before and after arm movements, and after the completion of passive body tilt. In Experiment 2, passive body tilt was ongoing, and subjects were asked to indicate when they felt their body to be aligned with “gravitational vertical”. The results replicated common findings that the subjective vertical can be influenced by passive body tilt. The main finding was that perceived orientation was influenced by arm movements. The authors claim that “no experimental evidence” exists relating active body movement to perception of “gravitational space”. This claim seems odd, given that the authors have cited the work of Bringoux, who studied exactly this topic. In addition, other studies have examined the role of active movement on perception of orientation, in general, and the vertical in particular. Perhaps the closest, with respect to the present study, is the work of Fouque et al. (1999), in which active arm movements were related to whole body tilt in the perception of orientation. In revising, I think the authors should explain how their hypotheses, design, results, and interpretation differ from Fouque et al. In addition, please revise to indicate that the present study provides information only about perception during passive tilt, as contrasted with studies in which body tilt has been actively controlled (e.g., Panic et al., 2015; Riccio et al., 1992). It would be specially helpful, in the Discussion, to consider how future research might help us understand relations between perceived orientation during passive versus active tilt. Achieved orientation can differ from subjective orientation; moreover, outside the laboratory, conscious awareness of orientation is uncommon, whereas (successful) control of orientation is nearly continuous. It is widely assumed that the body is controlled relative to the direction of gravity, but this view is not universal. In fact, it has come under sustained criticism, mainly because body movement is not constrained directly (or solely) by the gravitational vector but, rather, by the sum of gravitational and inertial forces—the gravitoinertial force vector (e.g., Stoffregen & Riccio, 1988). In the present experiments, the gravitational and gravitorinertial force vectors were the same, and so the results cannot tell us whether participants were responding to one or the other. This limitation of the design should be noted in the Discussion. Similarly, clinical data from stroke patients do not permit the scientist to know which vector is detected. The Introduction should be revised to state explicitly the hypotheses that were tested in the study. What testable predictions did the authors make? Similarly, the Discussion should be revised to re-state the predictions indicating, in each case, whether each prediction was (or was not) confirmed. The pattern of confirmed (vs. not confirmed) predictions should structure data interpretation. Please revise so that the Results of Experiment 1 are presented before the Method of Experiment 2. That is, completely present Experiment 1, and then completely present Experiment 2. Fouque, F., Bardy, B. G., Stoffregen, T. A., & Bootsma, R. B. (1999). Intermodal perception of orientation during goal-directed action. Ecological Psychology, 11, 45-79. Panic, H., Panic, A. S., DiZio, P. & Lackner, J. R. (2015). Direction of balance and perception of the upright are perceptually dissociable. Journal of Neurophysiology, 113, 3600-3609. Riccio, G. E., Martin, E. J., & Stoffregen, T. A. (1992). The role of balance dynamics in the active perception of orientation. Journal of Experimental Psychology: Human Perception & Performance, 18, 624-644. Stoffregen, T. A., & Riccio, G. E. (1988). An ecological theory of orientation and the vestibular system. Psychological Review, 95, 3-14. Reviewer #2: This interesting paper investigates dynamic arm movements as a new variable in the long search for the sensory determinants of the subjective vertical. The 'During Tilt' portion of Experiment 1 first re-demonstrates the known ability of prolonged tilt to bias the subjective visual vertical (SVV) towards the tilt, and then shows (as a new finding) that a series of dynamic arm movements during the tilt reduces this bias. The 'Post Tilt' portion of Experiment 1 shows that this bias reduction does not occur if the SVV is estimated after the participant is moved to a different tilt angle. This may be due to the timing between the prolonged tilt and the SVV estimation (as mentioned by the authors) but could also be due to the new tilt angle 'overwriting' the participant's sense of orientation. Experiment 2 shows that a subjective postural vertical estimation is not affected by the dynamic arm movements in the same manner as the SVV estimation is. The sample sizes are on the small side, as noted by the authors themselves, but the data analysis appears to be well done. I recommend some revisions as follows: Lines 46-92 The introduction is not as thorough as I would expect in an otherwise well-written paper. Many of the references are grouped together with somewhat superficial descriptions, such as in Lines 49-51. There are very few references from the past 10 years, despite considerable recent research from several labs on the use of dynamic and movement cues on balance. The paper would benefit from a more substantive introduction, which could then be used to deepen the discussion of the results. Lines 104-106 Was there a reason not to secure the participants’ arms by some mechanism that could be loosened/removed at the same time as the display frame was rotated to the left? If the arms were left unsecured then they will necessarily be pulled to the side by gravity when in a static roll, and this would provide an extra, potentially confounding sensory cue. This may have been a reason why the no-movement and static conditions did not significantly differ (Fig 4). Lines 142-165, Lines 242-253 The term ‘trial’ appears to be used for two different types of event: a single instance of the participant setting the white line for SVV (as in line 148), as well as a set of ‘tilt, SVV, task, SVV’ (as in line 153). The explanation of the procedure would be clarified if two different terms were used. Line 159 What was the rationale for selecting to test at 4 degrees left, 0 degrees, and 4 degrees right? Would a larger tilt be expected to produce a larger effect? Lines 160-162 It was not clear to me why the 'Post Tilt' experimental procedure ends with moving the participant to 16 degrees right and then to the start position. These tilts happen after the SVV estimations are made, so are they necessary? If they are necessary for the 'Post Tilt' procedure, why are they not done at the end of the 'During Tilt' procedure? Lines 378-382 The lack of effect of dynamic arm movements on SVV estimation in the 4 degree Right position for the ‘Post Tilt’ procedure is explained as a result of a small sample size. This may be true, but it may also represent an effect of always using a prolonged left tilt at the start of the experiment. What would happen if the initial tilt was to the right instead? Figure 1: This figure appears to be added to show how the display rotates in yaw away from the participant. I found it confusing at first, because I was expecting an image showing the roll rotation used in the experiment. Perhaps the figure could be updated to show both of these features. Figure 3: Why is the SVV angle for the control in the +4 RSD group so different from the controls in the +4 LSD and 0 degrees groups? 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