Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-24564 Burden of dengue illness in Mexican people aged 6 months to 50 years old: results from a prospective, cohort study conducted in the Zapopan community PLOS ONE Dear Dr. de Boer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses point by point raised by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: First i would like to thank the authors for this really magnificent work conducted as overall it is well done 1/ the title should be changed from zapopan community ---> Jalisco state since we included other municipality other than zapopan 2/ I would appreciate if the authors mention some statistics about dengue in those <6 months worldwide or in Mexico then justify why that population was not included here 3/ For method please report the exact date of beginning and finishing the study and also precise exact duration was it 2 years of 27 months (some parts written 2 years other 27 months) 4/ The participants recruitment seems some kind of biased (selection bias) as they are people who go frequently to hospitals (contact with doctor nurse..) and are mostly from same households ( families recruited each other ) --> Flyers process not elaborated , please precise the percentage of participants recruited by each promoter, by flyers, by other families , where no other procedure possible (radio, TV announcement maybe...) ---> the selection bias should be mentioned in limitations 5/ The Socio-demographic information, medical and vaccination histories , physical exam ---> how were they done , any standardized method or guideline like a questionnaire maybe ? if so please provide a copy of it as supplementary material 6/ Weekly surveillance contact by telephone or in person are two different methods with very different results as in person is more reliable else there is risk of response bias --> give percentage of those followed by telephone and those by in person and how was that performed any standard questionnaire for that ? ---> mention response bias in limitations of the study 7/ The unscheduled visits apart from the 18 suspected cases SDC , what were the reasons for the other unscheduled cases ?(10 visits) 8/ The death case what was the age and the cause of death ? 9/ The confirmed cases or suspected : were all of them followed by in person visits or by telephone ? 10/ Early presenter and late presenter , this classification was not used in the results or the table for fever , so when was the fever reported for the different cases ? when did they report to the hospital ? ----> a timeline is appreciated *else what are their clinical history (any chronic disease explaining their susceptibility to the disease) , their ages ? 11/ Were cases aware of the mosquito contact ? where did the contact happen ? the regions of the cases ? 12/ Serious adverse events SAE how were there defined ? any list of it ? how were they collected ? questionnaire ? physical exam ? 13/ Please include in the results that ''no severe cases' were reported'' and that ''all patients conditions did progress well with no complications'' 14/ Please include in the method part a reference to STORBE checklist as justify the choice Reviewer #2: I would like to give some suggestions for this paper. -Throughout the paper: the paper should be consistent about the follow-up time (2 years or 27 months?). Also, there was no information on primary and secondary infections. ABSTRACT - Conclusion: use a more specific word instead of “the surveillance approach.” INTRODUCTION -Paragraph 2: the paper should mention previous dengue outbreaks/epidemics. METHODS -The paper may mention the rationale of why the age range 6 months to 50 years was selected. -The authors should describe how to identify suspected cases, such as mentioning the symptoms associated. -Can the authors explain why the IgM test was not done? RESULTS -Clinical presentations: the authors should write more for this section. Many data from Table 1 should have been pointed out in this section, especially for the categories that had 0%. DISCUSSION -The first sentence of the Discussion should have the statistic for the incidence in 2019. -Line 279 - 280: the paper should give the specific statistic (the incidence of DENV-1 compared to the others, how many percent increased of DENV-2 in 2019). Are there any reasons why the incidence dramatically increased in 2019? -The paper should give a statistic about the population in Zapopan or neighboring municipalities (the living areas of participants) and discuss how their experimental results can represent the whole population. -Line 286: I think the authors should explain more how their surveillance approach can help the development of vaccines. -Are there any surveillance approaches prior to this study? If no, the authors should say that this is the first surveillance approach in the country and explain the significance of their study. If yes, the authors should compare their approach with previous strategies and explain the novelty/effectiveness of their approach. TYPOS/GRAMMARS -Write the full name of the test (such as reverse-transcriptase quantitative polymerase chain reaction) only the first time the word appears in the paper. -Pay attention to format the name of genes (italic, lower-case for genes in the virus?) -Some sentences need to be revised. The authors may need people who use English fluently to help improve the manuscript. -The word “Though” at the beginning of the sentences should be replaced by “However” Reviewer #3: The study is well conducted, fits the journal scope, and has a clear scientific message. However, I’d like to suggest these comments to increase the clarity of some points in the study: 1- Title: the authors in their paper described the disease incidence and not burden, which is completely different. I recommend replacing the word “Burden” with “Incidence” in the title. For more information about "Disease burden" concept, authors can search on WHO or CDC websites in addition to reading some articles discussing this concept. 2- Abstract: the sentence “The 13 remaining suspected cases were not confirmed” may mislead the readers that the study conductors didn’t perform RT-qPCR or NS1 assays for these 13 participants. So, it better to state clearly that their results were negative by these assays. 3- Introduction: it covers a good background for the topic, is well written, and the aim was described clearly. However, the section about vaccination [line 107 to line 115 on page 6 of 23] is clearly out of the topic and I think it should be removed. 4- Methods: it’s organized and clear. But additional clarification for these points should be added: - Is there a justification for choosing this age range? I mean why not people older than 50. - This sentence “Seven consecutive calendar days with body temperature <38.0°C, in the absence of antipyretic medication, were required to differentiate two episodes of SDC” should be supported with a reference or guideline. - The first paragraph of statistical methods [line 203 to line 207 on pages 9 and 10 of 23] is confusing and should be re-written. 5- Results: in table 2, the results of serostatus were presented for only 247 out of 250 enrolled participants (the results of three participants were missed). As the blood samples were taken at the enrollment visit from all participants, the cause of missing for these three samples should be described in the results section. 6- ِAbout data sharing policy: you clearly stated that the data will be available for research proposals approved by an independent review committee if they submit proposals to (www.clinicalstudydatarequest.com) website, however, you didn't provide a clear ID/URL for your data in this website's database which is obligatory according to the journal policy. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-24564R1 Incidence of dengue illness in Mexican people aged 6 months to 50 years old: results from a prospective, cohort study conducted in the Jalisco state PLOS ONE Dear Dr. de Boer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== PPlease modify the manuscript with the grammar suggestions provided by the reviewers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 17 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Below are some suggestions about grammars to help improve this manuscript -Throughout the paper, the author should write either “the state of Jalisco” or simply “Jalisco” instead of “Jalisco state” -Suggested title: “Incidence of dengue illness in Mexican people aged 6 months to 50 years old: a prospective cohort study conducted in Jalisco” -Line 41: no space between the number 19.4 and % -Line 46: “cases were tested negative by these assay” -Line 49: delete the word “conduct” -Line 70: “Worldwide, the global incidence of dengue” -Line 85-88: these three sentences are all simple sentences and should be reworded and/or combined together -Line 112-113: the phrase “using serotype-specific polymerase chain reaction (PCR) and anti-dengue immunoglobulin G (DENV IgG) assays” is not relevant to the previous clause in the sentence. The author may consider deleting that phrase. -Line 124: replace the word “vaccinees” by “vaccinated people” or “vaccinated individuals” -Line 146: 14th, 2016 and September 14th, 2018. -Line 177: replace the word “take” by “measure” -Line 219: the author may consider changing the phrase “As an alternative to the combined test was not available” to “Due to the unavailability of the combined test” -Line 270: no comma between “(69.4%)” and “and Guadalajara” -Line 271: should have a comma between “Tlajomulco” and “and Chapala” -Line 272: should not begin a sentence by a number -Line 355: “dengue in Jalisco, in an area where” -Line 364: the author can consider adding a subheader called “Limitations” -Line 380: change the word “successful” to “effective” Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: There is an issue that the authors need to clarify between lines 135 abd 147. Other than that, my comments are minor. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Nacir Dhouibi Reviewer #2: Yes: Anh Phuc Nguyet Nguyen Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Incidence of dengue illness in Mexican people aged 6 months to 50 years old: a prospective cohort study conducted in Jalisco PONE-D-20-24564R2 Dear Dr. de Boer, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Humberto Lanz-Mendoza Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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