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PONE-D-20-24718 Impact of 13-valent pneumococcal conjugate vaccine in Cameroon on laboratory-confirmed pneumococcal meningitis and purulent meningitis among children ˂ 5 years, 2011 - 2018 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. John Njuma Libwea Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 09.12.20. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Impact of 13-valent pneumococcal conjugate vaccine in Cameroon on laboratory-confirmed pneumococcal meningitis and purulent meningitis among children < 5 years, 2011-2018 The authors conducted a retrospective observational study in patients aged< 5 yrs hospitalized for clinically suspected meningitis (CSBM,) admitted to hospitals in Yaoundè, capitol city of Cameroon, from August 2011 to December 2018. They declared aim of this study was to describe the impact of PCV13 on serotype distribution among laboratory confirmed pneumococcal meningitis cases over this period of time. General comment The authors report well known published information on pneumococcal meningitis from neighboring countries of the African meningitis belt, before and after the introduction of PCV-13. However, their article presents many shortcomings in data collection, description of laboratory testing, statistical analyses and results. Major comments • The study evaluated children born before the introduction of PCV-13 and does not specify which children had been vaccinated with PCV-13 and which one had received PCV-7. Authors declare that in Cameroon, since 2012, uptake for the third dose of PCV-13has been over 80%. However, in their study it is not emphasized that only 9.7% of children had a vaccination history. This approach offers a fundamental bias for evaluating objectively the effect of a correct immunization program on the epidemiology of meningitis. • The authors mentioned that microbiological identification was obtained through bacterial culture, antigen testing and PCR. Unfortunately, incomplete information on the number of test performed and their sensitivity was not reported. Methods • Please provide some information regarding the study site (size of hospitals, type of hospitals (primary/secondary/tertiary care, pediatric care, for what population they are a referral center, etc..) • The authors assert to have evaluated the “epidemiology” of pneumococcal meningitis during periods of PCV13 implementation in Cameroon. However, data are available only for 103 patients. Did the authors calculate the power of the study and a sample size? The missing data may affect the generalizability of results. Results • The data about purulent meningitis is not clear. The authors defined purulent meningitis as “suspected meningitis with a CSF white blood cell (WBC) count � 20 per mm3”. In the results the percentage of EEP and LPP is calculated on a total of 3131 purulent meningitis (1486 + 1645) but in Table 1b only 266 cases meet the criteria. Can the authors explain better the eligibility criteria and the selection of study participants? • It would be better, if possible, that authors provide characteristics of the 103 study participants (e.g., demographic, age, …) • It is appropriate to summarize asymmetrical distribution (as data in table 1a, table 1 b, table 3, table 4) by giving the median and percentile range (for example, 25th and 75th percentiles, giving the mean and standard deviation for continuous variable and to indicate the missing data for each variable. • Table 1 b: the title describes the “characteristics aged 2-59 months evaluated for suspected meningitis”. In the table the number of suspected meningitis is 3026. • Table 3: the title quotes a total of 105 participants (N = 105), actual total of results is 103. • Reference 13 is not appropriate at the point of the discussion. Discussion • It is recommended to discuss in more detail the limitations of the study, taking into account sources of potential bias or shortcomings (study size, confounders, etc) and provide a conservative overall interpretation of data. • Authors may compare the study being presented with other studies in the literature in terms of validity, generalizability, and precision. Despite the laudable effort of the AA in collecting data, the study has not the power to add significant evidence on Pneumococcal meningitis trends in the contest of PCV-13 and to support a change in the vaccination schedule and in the understanding of Pneumococcal Meningitis epidemiology in Cameroon due the above expressed limits. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-24718R1 Impact of 13-valent pneumococcal conjugate vaccine on laboratory-confirmed pneumococcal meningitis and purulent meningitis among children ˂ 5 years in Cameroon, 2011 - 2018 PLOS ONE Dear Dr.John Njuma Libwea, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Silvia Ricci Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: There are three main issues that must be clarified by the authors: 1. The samples studied and their distribution by year must be clear. It is impossible to know how many CSF samples of those obtained were studied each year, by what technique and their results. How many samples were from Yaounde or from outside each year of the study. This must be clearly depicted in Table 2. 2. Microbiological methods must be clearly described: what media were used for culture; what identification techniques were used, what antigen, what real-time PCR… 3. How is it possible that “since 2012, uptake for the third dose of DTwP/PCV13 in Cameroon has been over 80%[16]” and in the study only 9.3% of the total number enrolled had a documented PCV13 vaccination history (5.5% with 3 doses)? Without clearly describing these issues it is impossible to know the representativeness of the sample and consequently, the value of the results obtained. Other comments: 1. “We retrospectively analyzed laboratory-based surveillance data from August 2011 to December 2018.” However Fig 1. represents data from 2011 to 2019. What happened in 2019? There were no cases of pneumococcal meningitis? It would be desirable to have the incidence data of pneumococcal meningitis of both periods studied, to see if the introduction of vaccine has represented a decrease in the incidence of meningitis or not. 2.The study population included children aged from 2 to 59 months during the period (August 2011 to December 2018)… Please, remove “(August 2011 to December 2018)” as it is already said 12 lines after. 3. If this is a retrospectively laboratory-based surveillance study, how were signed informed consents obtained from the parents/caretakers? 4. The authors stated that “3-dose schedule (6, 10 and 14 weeks of age; 3+0) without any catch-up doses for older children” and later that “However, only children in the 2 to 11month old age bracket are eligible to receive free vaccination in the country.” These two sentences are somehow contradictory; for instance, is a child of 6 months of age (24 weeks old) vaccinated or not? 5. Please, spell out Mother and Child Hospital (MCH) the first time it appears in the text 6. Identification of S. pneumoniae from CSF either by culture, …. Culture is not an identification technique. How were S. pneumoniae identified after cultured? Optochin test? Bili-solubility test? 7. Serotyping. The authors must include the serotyping real-time PCR used or at least a reference for the real-time PCR used for serotyping. How are serogroup 6 isolates identified? 6A/6B? 6A? What happens with serogroups 6C and 6D? 8. “Purulent meningitis was defined as suspected meningitis with a CSF white blood cell (WBC) count ≥20 per mm3.” However, in reference 18 of the WHO they make the following definition: Leukocytosis (> 100 cells/mm3); Leukocytosis (10-100 cells/ mm3) AND either an elevated protein (>100 mg/dl) or decreased glucose (< 40 mg/dl). 9. What antigen (trade mark) was used for pneumococcal detection? Could all antigen positive CSF be typed by real-time PCR? 10. During the early years of SURVAC only culture or antigen positive specimens were sent… Please, define “early years” (2011 to 2014?) 11. Analyses were conducted with SPSS version 25.0. Please, include the developing corporation of this sofware. 12. “(Fig 1. Profile of Purulent meningitis (WBC counts in CSF) in 2-59 months old children hospitalized in Yaounde: 2011 - 2018. Note: [PCV13= 13-valent pneumococcal conjugate vaccine; CSF = Cerebrospinalfluid; WBC = White blood cell])” I suggest to delete all the text after Fig. 1 and place it in the space corresponding to figure legends and include the “Note” as a footnote of the figure. What is the meaning of IBD (secondary vertical axe?) Please, write the figure of cases among hospitalized patients (secondary axe) with two figures an the symbol %. Add to the legend what does the blue line mean. 13. Tables 1a and 1b. There are a lot of cases with missing clinical information, at least more than 50%: 1629 diagnosis unknown, 1617 undocumented outcome at discharged, 2840 vaccine status unknown… How representative is the study herein presented? 14. To which dates correspond the sub-set of CSF specimens (N=765) subsequently tested using either microbiological culture, antigen detection and/or polymerase chain reaction (PCR)? EPP or LPP? It is impossible to know the representativeness of the data if just 765/3131 cases (less than 25%) were studied unless they were homogenously distributed through the years of the study. How many cases was form Yaounde and how many from outside (Table 4)? How many were studied each year (or at least each period) from within/outside Yaounde? It is very strange that there were 103 cases of S. pneumoniae meningitis and only 5 cases of N. meningitidis meningitis. 15. “During the early years of SURVAC only culture or antigen positive specimens were sent to the WHO/RRL, but later all suspected isolates were shipped (Table 2).” However in Table 2 in 20111 there are 3 PCR positive pneumococcal cases and only 1 by culture, and in 2013 there were 26 positive by PCR and only 13 by culture and 3 by antigen detection. 16. The distribution of cases in Table 2 seems somehow heterogeneous (range 47-662 cases). Have the authors any explanation for this situation? Please comment in the results or in the discussion. 17. “The WHO/RRL in The Gambia did not use Quellung but rather PCR for serotyping, which in some cases did not distinguish individual serotypes (for example, 18A/18B/18C/18F).” However, in Table 3 serotype 18C is distinguished from other serogroup 18 serotypes. Also, serotype 6A/6B appear together but serotype 6A also appears alone. 18. “Of the 103 children with pneumococcal meningitis evaluated for serotype, a vaccine serotype was present in 62% (31/50) of cases in the EPE versus 35.8% (19/53) in the LPE (Table 3).” Please, include the statistic p-value for this comparison. 19. “Table 4. Comparison of some baseline/serotype characteristics between the 'early and late post-PCV13 impact…” I suggest retitling the Table as “Table 4. Comparison of some epidemiological characteristics and serotype distribution between the 'early and late post-PCV13 impact…” And replace “PCV13 Serotype status” with “PCV13 serotypes” 20. “Serotypespecific distribution differed between the EPE and LPE, respectively; 6A/6B (24%), 5 (6%) and 6A (6%) versus 14 (13.2%), 3 (7.6%), 4 (5.6%) and 18C (5.6%) (Table 4).” I would said that this distribution is depicted in Table 3 (but don’t forget to include a reference to Table 4). Besides, are these differences statistical significant? Again it is very strange to see the distribution of serogroup 6 isolates: 6A/6B and 6A alone… Does this mean that 6A/6B isolates are in fact serotype 6B isolates? 21. “Despite these gains, we did not see changes in the proportion of CSF samples with purulence in our study.” The presence of purulence can be due to multiple pathogens, not only to S. pneumoniae. 22. “This may reflect trends in serotype-specific pneumococcal circulation related to confounding factors such as time since vaccination, varying population immunity, changes in antibiotic use patterns, or phenotypic shifts in organism invasiveness.” This sentence is quite speculative if not supported by an appropriate reference. 23. “However, as outlined in Table 2, because PCR was used for pathogen identification and serotyping, we used the total number of confirmed S. pneumoniae result as obtained by the PCR technique that has generally been used for molecular characterization [11,12,22].” The number of CSF sent and studied to the WHO/RRL each year must be clearly described, for instance in Table 2. It is not very understandable why purulent CSF negative for pneumococcal infection were not studied by PCR to detect N. meningitidis or H. influenzae and other pathogens in the WHO/RRL center. 24.” Furthermore, in our study pathogen identification was not done routinely in a systematic fashion, which limited our ability to account appropriately for the sensitivity of each diagnostic method.” If pathogen identification was not done routinely, how can authors be sure that the decrease in VST or the increase in some VST is not due to a bias in the number of pathogen identified in each time-period? 25 “By contrast, in Cameroon during the early years of the surveillance programme, only sentinel surveillance was performed.” What does this sentence mean? What kind of surveillance was done in the late years? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-24718R2 Impact of 13-valent pneumococcal conjugate vaccine on laboratory-confirmed pneumococcal meningitis and purulent meningitis among children ˂ 5 years in Cameroon, 2011 - 2018 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. John Njuma Libwea, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: All questions raised by this reviewer have been properly answered and I actually appreciate the effort made by the authors in improving the text with the new comments introduced. I only have 3 minor comments: 1. Abstract. “…EPE were 6A/6B (24%), 5 (6%) and 6A (6%),…” As not all serogroup 6 could be typed to the serotype level, I suggest (only for the abstract) to add 6A + 6A/B serotypes, what should make a 6A/6B (30%) and delete 6A (6%). As both serotypes 6A/6B are included in the PCV13 and many molecular tests don’t differentiate between them, the reading of the abstract will be easier. In the text, with the explanations given, the results can be left as they are, differentiating between 6A and 6A/6B serotypes. 2. Page 6. “Pneumococci with Ct values ≤32 by qPCR that could not be serotyped/serogrouped under this African scheme were serotyped by conventional multiplex serotyping PCR assays.” Please, add a reference for the conventional multiplex serotyping PCR assays used. 3. Page 15. “We had considered this as a potential source of bias to our findings, but as documented with the prevalence of pneumococcal carriage in the era of conjugate vaccines, our data is consistent with the trends of decrease in some VST accompanied with a simultaneous increase in some NVST.” Please, provide a reference for the prevalence of pneumococcal carriage in the era of conjugate vaccines. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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