Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-23789 Balance dynamics are related to maturation and motor dexterity. Application in young and adult tennis players PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Moreno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The manuscript had two indications for major revisions and one for rejection. I consider that you can address the comments indicated by reviewers. Please pay attention to the method and results section. It is necessary for more details and a clear presentation. Also, please consider all comments even of the reviewer that rejected the manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please state the inclusion and exclusion criteria used during participant recruitment. 6. You indicated that you had ethical approval for your study. In your Methods section, please ensure you have also stated whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians of the minors included in the study or whether the research ethics committee or IRB specifically waived the need for their consent. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: An ability is a genetically trait, thought not to be modifiable by practice. I believe the authors use the word ability when they mean the word skill. Bachman, John (RQ, 1961) shows that there seems not to be a balance ability. The authors should scour the old literature on balance. The observation that DFAv is able to differentiate skilled and less skilled tennis players, by itself does not seem important enough. It is not clear what the underlying mechanisms, or dynamical systems processes are being influenced by DFA, while the historical standard measurements are insensitive. Furthermore serving a tennis ball does not seem to be much of a balance task. Reviewer #2: This paper examined the relationships between balance and motor performance of tennis players of different ages and expertise. They found that balance adaptation, quantified using a detrended fluctuation analysis of the center of pressure, was sensitive enough to detect differences in age for expert players, but the mean of the center of pressure velocity could not. There was no relationship between any balance measures and tennis serve performance. They conclude that sports experience can lead to balance adaptation and that more traditional linear scattering variables of balance are not sensitive enough to reveal subtle changes in balance. Overall, the paper reveals interesting relationships between balance adaptation and tennis experience (combination of age and expertise). The methods lacks some details and the presentation of the results could be more effective and transparent with plots instead of tables. Also, the authors should not infer any directional effects of tennis experience on balance and vice versa in their conclusions. The authors need to avoid directional conclusions about whether tennis experience improves balance adaptation or whether better balance improves tennis. The authors have revealed a relationship between balance adaptation and tennis experience, not a directional effect. Lines 77-78 in the introduction refer to one direction while the conclusions in lines 348-350 are framed in the opposite direction. I think the authors know that they cannot assess directionality as the aims stated in lines 103-108 are phrased in a non-directional manner. -Lines 73-74, "In a bidirectional way, it would also be expected that tennis experience induces balance adaptations. Nevertheless, there is little evidence confirming both assumptions." -Lines 77-78, "no study has assessed the potential influence of balance on tennis performance." -Lines 297-298, "tennis experience seems to induce balance adaptations characterized by a higher ability to perform motor adjustments." -Lines 348-350: "Balance adaptation induced by tennis practice seems to be related with a higher ability to perform postural adjustments." A factor that the authors do not discuss is that players 18+ who are classified as expert are likely also running, cross-training, lifting weights, doing plyometrics, etc, which would also improve balance. Without controlling or accounting for fitness programs that the older expert players are likely doing, the authors should refrain from concluding that it is tennis alone that is leading to the balance adaptation for expert players. This should be added to the limitations and/or discussion. The authors are strongly encouraged to present the results in Table 2 as a figure The authors need to provide scatter plots of the correlated variables so show that the relationship is linear, which is an assumption of Pearson Product-Moment Correlations. The challenging unstable balance task is not described (lines 139-142). What is an “unstable surface?” The participants are standing on a force platform, which is not unstable on its own. How is the COP mean of the velocity magnitude computed? COP is a position variable, not velocity, so the authors must have computed COP velocity. Is there an upper limit on age for the +18 group? Would all subjects be “young,” < 30 years old? What statistical software was used to perform the statistics? The authors are encouraged to consider either writing out MVM as mean of the velocity magnitude and MRE as mean radial error, or perhaps using a simpler term that can be written out compared to using a specific abbreviation? I had to frequently remind myself what these abbreviations meant. DFAv is a more acceptable as it is more commonplace. Line 187 – what is N? Line 206, should it be “(expert and recreational) as the between-subjects’ factors.” Line 233 – does older groups mean U16 and +18? Writing it out would be clearer. Values < 1 are easier to see with 0’s in front of the decimal, ex. 0.12 versus .12. Consider adding zeros before decimals in the tables and text. Table 2, is there a difference between “Expertise effect” in the MRE row and “Expertise level” used in the other rows? Tables 3 & 4, please provide an explanation of bolded values Tables 4 & 5, the DFAv rows seem unnecessary as no values are reported in that row. Please remove. In Table 5, there are no ** so “** p < .01” can be removed. Reviewer #3: I. General Comments: The purpose of this study was to assess the relationship between balance and tennis performance. Specifically, the purposes were: 1) to compare the balance of tennis players of different ages and levels of expertise, and 2) to analyze the relationship between balance and tennis performance (serving speed and accuracy). This subject is relevant to the fields of motor behavior. However, there are some issues which warrant clarification. Specific comments are displayed below. II. Specific Comments: (1) In the Abstract section the authors said that “This study compares different cohorts of tennis players with different expertise levels and different ages to analyze how balance performance and its dynamics can determine sport expertise” (lines 25-28). Was the purpose of the study really that? Based upon the data obtained, is it possible to analyze how balance dynamics determines sport expertise? (2) Different fonts were used in some parts of the manuscript (e.g., lines 48 and 72). (3) The concept of “balance” must be clarified. What do “balance tasks” mean (line 99)? What exactly do the authors mean? Doesn’t every movement performed involve balance? (4) The term “maturation” is used in the title and throughout the manuscript (e.g., lines 101, 275, 336). How was maturation evaluated?! According to Methods section, participants were categorized by age (lines 119-120). Therefore, it seems that the authors refer to age as maturation, thereby inferring age to be the same as maturation. Is this correct? (5) How many trials were performed in the balance protocol? In the Data Analysis section, it is said that “the first 10s of each trial were discarded…” (line 169) but there is no mention about the number of trials. (6) Results revealed no Interaction (Age x Expertise) for service accuracy. So, why did the authors claim that “expert players significantly improved their serve accuracy (MRE) with age, while recreational players did not show significant differences according to age ranges” (lines 225-228). If there was no interaction, the multiple pair comparisons do not matter. (7) When the purpose of the study is mentioned in the Discussion section, the author replaced “levels of expertise” by “levels of dexterity” (lines 258-261). Are these terms (expertise and dexterity) synonyms? (8) Discussion section is not so clear. There is no proper connection among some paragraphs and others are unnecessary. The authors should rewrite this section and provide a coherent, logical framework that actually discuss the relevant literature in terms of its findings and then present a justified conclusion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Howard Zelaznik Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-23789R1 Balance dynamics are related to age and levels of expertise. Application in young and adult tennis players PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Moreno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear authors One reviewer recommended to accept the paper and another one requested some minor revisions. Please addressed the suggestions indicated by the reviewer. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Fabio A. Barbieri, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: I. General Comments: The purpose of this study was to assess the relationship between balance and tennis performance. Specifically, the purposes were: 1) to compare the balance of tennis players of different ages and levels of expertise, and 2) to analyze the relationship between balance and tennis performance (serving speed and accuracy). This subject is relevant to the fields of motor behavior. The modifications improved the quality of the manuscript. However, there are still some issues which warrant clarification. Specific comments are displayed below. II. Specific Comments: (1) Regarding the concept of “balance”, the authors said that “The term balance has been clarified in the introduction section” (Response to Reviewers file). However, there are no differences between the revised Introduction and the previous one in respect to this issue. The authors just replaced “Balance ability” (line 48 – previous version) by “Balance” (line 41 – present version). (2) In this reviewed manuscript the authors mentioned the number of trials performed in the balance protocol. According to authors “Participants performed one trial keeping this position for 60 seconds” (lines 145-146). Is one trial enough to provide reliable measurements of CoP? It’s necessary to justify and include the proper references. (3) Results revealed no Interaction (Age x Expertise) for service accuracy. So, the sentence “…multiple pair comparisons showed that older expert players (+18) significantly displayed better performance in their serve accuracy (MRE) than the youngest expert players (U12), while recreational players did not show significant differences according to age ranges” (lines 225-228) is still statistically unnecessary. If there was no interaction, the multiple pair comparisons do not matter. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Balance dynamics are related to age and levels of expertise. Application in young and adult tennis players PONE-D-20-23789R2 Dear Dr. Moreno, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Fabio A. Barbieri, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: All suggestions made were accepted by the authors. These modifications improved the quality of their manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-20-23789R2 Balance dynamics are related to age and levels of expertise. Application in young and adult tennis players Dear Dr. Moreno: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Fabio A. Barbieri Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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