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PONE-D-21-00370 Face masks reduce emotion-recognition accuracy and perceived closeness PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Grundman: Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have now reportd of two experts in the field (you can find them bvelow). Both of them find interest in your work, but also express several concerns that should be carefully addressed before the MS will meet publoication. I also had a close look at your work. My suggestion would be to discuss possible cultural limitations (see, e.g., previous work of my own section Pavlova et al., 2018). PLease adress all concerns point by poiui in your rebuttal letter to me. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 26 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors tested the hypothesis that face masks affect emotion recognition and social judgments by performing emotion recognition tasks presenting masked vs not masked faces expressing primary emotions, exploring also the role of additional variables such as subject age, age of the human observed, the gender of the subject, etc... The topic of the study is very relevant since it focuses on the consequences of COVID-19 related PPE on social cognition. I found the study technically sound. I report here some concerns to be addressed: 1- INTRODUCTION: I suggest reporting hypotheses at the end of the introduction section. 2- METHOD: I’m not fully convinced about the choice of authors to add three distractors in the response alternatives. My concern is related to the fact that no items represent the “amused/proud/surprised” condition. Also, amused and proud are high order emotion, and they amply differed from the other alternatives. Finally, in a certain sense, amused could be interpreted as a level of happiness, and I’m not convinced that the error of a choice “amused” instead of “happy” and the choice “neutral” instead of “happy” reflect the same type error. 3- RESULTS: In results line 242 to 245 authors report some trends of difference and significant difference, I suggest adding p-values. At line 295 I suggest reporting the ICC (contingency). I found unexpected the significant correlation between mask-as-opportunity and mask-as-threat. How author discuss these results? Reviewer #2: In the context of the present pandemic context, the present paper questions the effect of face masks on emotion-recognition accuracy and social judgments (perceived trustworthiness, likability, and closeness). The study (N=191, Germany) revealed that face masks diminish people’s ability to accurately categorize emotion expression and make target persons appear less close. Exploratory analyses further revealed that face masks buffered the effect of negative emotion expressions on perceptions of trustworthiness, likability, and closeness. The results revealed higher perceptions of closeness for masked but not for unmasked faces, which could represent a valuable information for policymakers. This study examined face masks’ effect on emotional and social inferences. The authors investigated whether the reduction of facial cues due to wearing a face mask undermines emotion-recognition accuracy and perceptions of social important traits such as trustworthiness, likability, and closeness. They specifically explored how the valence of the emotional expression and mask-related social judgments interact. The study is appealing, well conducted and provide important results. The data are appropriately and thoroughly analyzed. The data show that emotion-recognition accuracy declines with masked faces. Furthermore, lower accuracy was found with male (vs. female), old (vs. young) participants, as well as when seeing an old (vs. young) face. The worst case was when older participants were facing masked faces (below 50% of success). However, wearing a face mask did not affect social judgments (excepted closeness). An interesting result is that face mask lowers the effect of negative emotions, with the risk of undermining their social relevance in particular their role in prosocial behaviour. The paper is well written. My only concern is that the study involved more negative (4) than positive (1) emotions, which represent a limit of the study. Hereafter are detailed my main comments. Introduction - The concern of trustworthiness and perceived health of faces wearing face mask has already being the subject of investigation and publication, please refer to Cartaud A, Quesque F, Coello Y (2020) Wearing a face mask against Covid-19 results in a reduction of social distancing. PLoS ONE 15(12): e0243023. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0243023. - L. 111. When stating “Indeed, different studies have linked familiarity, ambiguity, or uncertainty to lower perceptions of trustworthiness, likability, and closeness”, references are required. - Were participants really rewarded 1€ ? - The participants were evaluated on mask-as-threat and mask-as-opportunity associations, preoccupation with COVID-19 and exposure to face masks. Could you provide information about how this was done (even if it is not relevant to the study)? Where the supplementary information can be found is not indicated and not available on the PlosOne website. (This also applies to emotion codes and reliability estimations) Method - Concerning the stimuli in each group, each emotion was presented once in each condition (age (3)*gender(2)*emotion(6)), which is quite low. Is there any reason for selecting this restricted set of stimuli (36 is not much) ? - The use of emotion distractors is a good idea. However, I was wondering whether “happy” and “amused” are not too close from each other. Were they any sign of confounds in the data? Why not having chosen only abstract category such as proud for instance, for which no facial expression is objectively associated? (This also applies to surprise, which is an emotion, unlike proud). - Figure 1. Response items are not visible in frame 2 and 3 is not visible. Could the Figure be improved? - The 3 statements used to evaluate « mask-as-threat » and « mask-as opportunity » associations should be provided in the text. Data analysis - It is not clear why “adding interactions between condition and age as well as between condition and age-of-target improved the fit of the model considerably, χ2262 (4) = 8.42, p = .074” since the statistic is not significant. - It is surprising that the level of emotion recognition remains high with the mask (48.9%), despite the lack of crucial emotional cues. Could this outcome be the consequence that the number of negative emotions (4) was high compared to the number of positive emotions (1), which are known to be detected mostly on the upper part of the face. Discussion - L. 349. The quoted reference (53) does not seem to be the correct one. - it is indicated the “overall accuracy for unmasked as well as masked targets was considerably lower than previous study”. This could be due to the fact that you used also elderly faces in the present study. Can you comment? - The observation that wearing a face mask did not affect social judgments should be discussed in regards to the previous study published by Cartaud, Quesque, & Coello (2020). - The authors suggest that “Face masks may further undermine adherence to social distancing. Because face masks limit facial cues, people may compensate by approaching each other". This has been indeed shown in previous study and should be indicated/discussed (Cartaud, Quesque, & Coello, 2020). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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