Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 17, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-08882 Molecular Dynamics Study on the Effects of Charged Amino Acid Distribution Under low pH Condition to the Unfolding of Hen Egg White Lysozyme and Formation of Beta Strands. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sutthibutpong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 29 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this paper, Zein et al provide molecular dynamics simulations of Hen egg white lysozyme partial denaturation and refolding at high temperature. The protocol they present is a 100-ns simulation at temperature 450 K followed by 200 ns at 333 K. The authors use two protonation states, one where all titrable side chains (including glutamate, aspartate, histidine) are protonated ('pH 2'), and one where glutamates, aspartates and histidines are deprotonated ('pH 7'). They make three replicas of each state and analyze several parameters along the simulations : RMSD, secondary structures and various radii of gyration. The actual content of the paper is small and quite incremental with respect to existing data, both experimental and computational, on lysozyme unfolding and refolding and on amyloidosis. Still the authors make one convincing and interesting observation: That under their protocol protonated lysozyme consistently transitions from alpha-helix- to beta-sheet-containing structures, while there is no beta-sheet formation in the deprotonated form. A shortened paper focusing on this observation would be more suitable for publication. Pages are not numbered so the following refers to the pages of the consolidated pdf, with the introduction starting on page 9. 1) p. 10 'The accuracy of atomistic molecular dynamics (MD) simulations to predict the molecular behavior of proteins under extreme conditions [24,25] has been improved with the continuing development of molecular mechanics forcefield parameters [26,27].' I agree with this, but the authors should at least indicate in the methods which forcefield they used, and if there was a reason (suitability for high temperature ?) for the choice. Similarly p.11 'the SPC216 water model': Was there a reason for this water model ? 2) 'Table 1: All simulations in this study' is not useful. As stated there are just two nearly identical systems simulated in the same way with three replicas each. Please remove. 3) p. 11 'At the pH 2 condition, all histidines, glutamic acids, and aspartic acids were fully protonated. Meanwhile, at pH 7, all the aforementioned amino acids were deprotonated.' Was the C-terminus considered ? 4) p. 14 pH 2 'At this stage, the slight drop of RMSD values denoted the refolding of proteins.' pH7 : 'No significant drop of RMSD was seen when switching the temperature to 333 K, and hence no protein refolding.' a) This is not obvious from the RMSD and analyses provided. The parts about protein refolding are not substantiated and should be removed. b) Generally speaking the results are full of discussion elements and speculations such as these. The manuscript thus can and should be drastically shortened (see below points 8 and 9). 5) p. 15 'The transitions from alpha-helixes, which were the major part of native lysozymes, into beta-strands and random coils were quantified through the Ramachandran plot' There is no quantification given from figures 2 and 3 (Ramachandran plots). Quantifications are given from figures 4 and 5 (DSSP plots) only. All elements given in the Ramachandran part are qualitative, such as : 'The alpha-beta transitions occurred less frequently for the non-protonated proteins at pH7 (Figure 3), in which a large number of amino acid' This part should be shortened, removing particularly interpretations such as 'signified the incomplete refolding process as observed from the conformational snapshots' 6) DSSP plots p. 16 'the percentage of beta-sheet content was found between 9.1% - 19.1% at pH 2 and 0.6% - 3.8% at pH 7,' This is the interesting and substantial result the authors bring and should be the focus of the results section. As it is, it is clear from the DSSP plots that the same residues are not found in the same conformation in different replicas. This should at least be stated in the text. Preferably residues that tend to be incorporated in beta-strands should de identified, in relation to the 'radii of gyration' plots (see below). 7) Radii of gyration That part is the least clear and convincing of the paper. A major problem is that it is not clear which selections statements such as 'negatively-charged amino acids affected by the protonations.' 'positively charged, negatively-charged, and hydrophobic compositions' refer to. a) I take it from Figure 6 and 7 labels ('Negative-protonated' instead of 'Negative') that the same selections (namely asp+glu) are considered at pH 2 and pH 7 ? Please then refer explicitly to these as 'asp+glu', both in the text and the figures. b) What about 'positive' residues ? Are histidine in the 'positive' selection at pH 2 and pH 7 ? Only at pH 2 ? 'Rg of the positively charged group was the highest Rg due to a large number of positive charge residues.' suggests that it is the latter. But then, no meaningful comparison can be made between 'positive' radii of gyration at pH 7 vs pH 2 (different selections). At any rate, please also make explicit descriptions of the 'positive' selection (whether arg+lys or arg+lys+his). c) p. 17 'However, at pH 7 (Figure 6d, 6e and 6f), Rg values of different amino acid groups tended to converge as the simulation progressed.' This is simply false. Only for R1 is it verified, for R0 and R2 'positive' radii stay above others as for pH 2. d) p. 17 'the formation of beta-strands or beta-sheets from backbone parts of hydrophobic amino acids was facilitated by the increased compactness (low Rg) of the hydrophobic clusters' No results are given as to the composition of beta strands (see point 6 above) and whether they tend to be made of hydrophobic residues. Figure 8 is illustrative at best. The second part of the sentence is interpretation. 8) The whole section '4. Discussions' is an extended repetition of results. For instance p. 20 'positively charged residues formed a hydrophilic shell with larger Rg than the averaged Rg' (and as stated this particular point is moot anyway since it is also the case at pH 7 for 2 replicas out of 3). Furthermore, the 'results' section itself is riddled with interpretations. The easiest way to amend this is to remove section '4. Discussions' completely, and change the section '3. Results' into '3. Results and discussion' 9) In this new 'Results and discussion', please avoid speculations and interpretations that are not substantiated by the results themselves. For instance a) p. 20 'The higher amount of Coulombic repulsion at lower pH had driven most of the positively charged sidechain further from the backbone, leaving the backbone to stay at the middle between hydrophobic and hydrophilic shells. The beta-strands were finally formed by nucleation of the ordered backbone part.' No analyses are provided to support this, not even the justification of a visual inspection of the backbone. b) p. 18 'to refold into betastrands at pH 2, while misfolded into alpha-helices and random coils at pH 7' Why speak of 'refolding' into beta-strands and 'misfolding' into alpha-helices for an alpha-helical protein ? 10)Minor: There are many typos throughout the manuscript such as'to observed the effects', 'analyzedanalyzed by the DSSP algorithm'. Please proofread carefully. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Molecular Dynamics Study on the Effects of Charged Amino Acid Distribution Under low pH Condition to the Unfolding of Hen Egg White Lysozyme and Formation of Beta Strands. PONE-D-21-08882R1 Dear Dr. Sutthibutpong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hannes C Schniepp, Dr. sc. nat. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-21-08882R1 Molecular Dynamics Study on the Effects of Charged Amino Acid Distribution Under low pH Condition to the Unfolding of Hen Egg White Lysozyme and Formation of Beta Strands. Dear Dr. Sutthibutpong: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Hannes C Schniepp Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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