Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-36297 Mix and match: patchwork domain evolution of the land plant-specific Ca2+-permeable mechanosensitive channel MCA PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nishii, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This manuscript, and the general appraoch taken, has raised interest in the review team; we encourage you to submit a revision along the lines given further below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 08 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this project the authors explored the evolution of the MCA protein, it’s two domains MCAfunc and PLAC8, and their partner domains across all viridiplantae. They used MCA protein sequences from 55 plant species from various sources in a maximum likelihood phylogenetic analysis of protein domains identified using profile HMMs built using the HMMER program to accomplish this. The authors used their data to explain the origin of MCAfunc, the coupling of MCAfunc and PLAC8, the potential role of duplication in the evolution of the MCA, and briefly to address the role of helper domains in this process. One implication of this study is that MCA may have been fundamental to the evolution of land plants. I was very impressed with the robustness of the methodology in this work. I cannot imagine a better strategy for building phylogenetic trees or identifying protein domains using this data. I was also impressed with the writing: the abstract is a good summary of the work, the introduction frames the problem well and introduces relevant literature, the results are direct and data-centered yet tell an interesting story, and the discussion does a great job of explaining the results in the context of relevant literature. Although I believe this work is important and well-executed there are some issues with the manuscript itself that the authors need to address, which I have detailed below as either major or minor comments: Major comment: 1. Major: In many cases the authors refer to a protein or domain evolving in a particular modern group based on their presence in that group as well as in more derived taxa. This is not appropriate without presenting further evidence. The data suggest that the domain or protein most likely arose in the ancestor of all these taxa, which may or may not be a member of the most ancestral group. If the authors know that the common ancestor was a member of the most ancestral modern taxon that evidence must be provided in the manuscript, otherwise the claim must be made only of the common ancestor and not the most ancestral modern taxon. Examples: A) MCAfunc is said to have appeared first in charophytes rather than the ancestor of all streptophytes (lines 29, 303, 348) B) The coupling between MCAfunc and PLAC8 is said to have occurred once, “possibly in the ancestor of bryophytes” (lines 239-242, 348). This should refer to the shared ancestor of all embryophytes. C) several instances in the figure 5 legend. I recommend the authors look for this throughout the paper in case I missed something. Minor comments: 1. Minor: Some minor grammatical issues were noticed, not enough to be distracting. The authors should edit the full text to identify and resolve as many of these as possible. 2. Minor: The groups “streptophytes” and “chlorophytes” are used extensively here. These terms can be useful, but are sometimes used to mean different things in different manuscripts. Figure 5 provides a visual explanation, but it would be much more helpful if these terms were defined in the introduction to resolve any potential confusion while readers progress through the paper. 3. Minor: Authors use incorrect language when discussing the patterns identified using HMMs referring to them as “HMMs”, when they should be referred to as either “profile HMMs” or “profiles” in brief, not “HMMs”. I double checked this with the HMMER User’s Guide. This issue was noticed on lines 25/26, and 107-114 but may also be present in other places. 4. Minor: I recommend the authors remove the statement about AtMCA1 being expressed in hamster ovary cells on lines 64-66. The contextual difference between plant roots and hamster ovaries are enormous. I therefore found it distracting and I’m not convinced it added to the story, but if the authors disagree this is not something I would insist on. 5. Minor: Authors should expand on the acronym “SMS” on line 134 6. Minor: All figures were low resolution and difficult to read, before publication the authors should replace these with higher resolution versions. Reviewer #2: During this study, the authors examine the domain evolutionary history of the multi-domain plant-specific mechanosensitive channel, MCA. They thoroughly examined the evolution and origin of both MCA domains MCAfunc and PLAC8, via extensive phylogenetic analysis, and determined that the coupling of both domains occurred via a single event. They reveal that the MCA channel has a complex evolutionary history, however show that at least one full copy of the protein is present in streptophytes, suggesting function of the channel is highly important. The findings presented show an impressive example of how domains can combine, resulting in new protein function and opens up avenues for further studies determining the role of MCA proteins in land plant evolution. Overall, the study is detailed covering a wide range of plant species and performing extensive analysis to track the evolutionary history of MCA domains. The introduction and discussion sections are clearly written, leading the reader through the logic of the study and are accessible to a wide audience. However, the presentation of the results text is not as clearly written or easy to follow and should be amended prior to publication. As it stands, this section is not accessible to a wider audience. The results section text lacks suitable explanation and does not provide a narrative leading the reader through the figures. For example the results text starts “In total, 217 proteins possessing…”, without prior explanation (aside from a brief mention in the introduction) as to which species were investigated or the tools by which the search was conducted. In general, this lack of description continues throughout the results text. The authors are recommended to edit the text so that each results section starts by introducing the reasoning behind obtaining the results in the upcoming figure and the brief method by how the results were obtained. The following section should lead from the one before in the text, rather than be stand alone. Additionally, the presentation of Table 1 as it stands is unclear as the domain contribution types are not mentioned at all until the description of Figure 3. The authors should add a description of these earlier in the text with the presentation of the table, or consider separating this information to a second table which follows Figure 3. Finally, Appendix S18 is referred significantly within the text and is useful to look at – the authors could consider including this as a main Figure to avoid the reader having to filter through the Supplementary Information. Additional minor edits/suggestions: - COMPLEMENTING is spelled incorrectly on line 24 of the abstract - There is an extremely long sentence between lines 62-68 of the Introduction which should be separated into several sentences. - In Line 106 of the Methods the authors should define HMM - Table 1 legend title is vague and is not stand alone- suggest the authors refine this so it is more descriptive - Suggest adding a column with species in Table 1. - In line 200, the authors should define ML - Suggest that the authors add the species to the description of Fig3 in lines 253-266. For example K. nitens (charophyte). - Appendix S18 is referred to quite a lot within the text and is useful to look at – should this be included as a Figure in its own right to avoid the reader having to filter through the Supplementary Information? - The resolution of S6 Appendix should be improved if possible- it is difficult to see the residue numbers - S9 S15 Appendices- only mnemonics are used. Would recommend providing the full names in the legend as well. - S16 and S17 Appendices- would suggest the authors list the domain partners on the right of the heatmap as in Figures 1 and 2, rather than at the bottom as they are small and hard to see. Reviewer #3: In the manuscript “Mix and match: patchwork domain evolution of the land plant-specific Ca2+-permeable mechanosensitive channel MCA” the authors present an investigation of the MCA Ca2+ permeable mechanosensitive ion channel using proteomics and bioinformatics. Their data suggests that the MCA protein is composed of many different portions. This work found that the MCA region of a MCA protein is localized to the N-terminus and is ~170 amino acids. Comments In lines 188-198 you discuss the Table 1 and mention the different classes of the proteomes, can you include the different classes of the genomes in the table? You utilize a completed and partial proteome for Marchantia polymorpha as two distinct proteomes, while there is a substantial information to be gained from comparing two different experimental conditions. Are the genes identified in the partial proteome the same as the genes identified in the more complete proteome? Unless there are significant differences between the two proteomes can you eliminate the partial from the data set. If there are substantial differences that are not accounted by the completeness of the proteome then please clarify this in the manuscript. -As multiple proteomes are incomplete, can you provide the completeness of the proteomes within the manuscript, perhaps in table 1? -You could remove any incomplete proteomes from the analysis as it is difficult to speculate as if a protein is not present in the data set or not present in the wild type cell. If the MCA domain is ~420 amino acids (line 71), can you speculate the role of the Type II as they appear to be smaller than the required amount. In the conclusion can you speculate the role of these proteins and how these are similar or different than the AtMCA1 and AtMCA2 (or other known functional proteins) In general many of the supplemental figures and figures are blurry and have made some of the interpretation difficult. Many of them required significant magnification in order to see the content. Below you can find some specific suggestions Figure 1: the clade designations are difficult to see, can you move them to the left on the figure or highlight the regions using specific colors to make it easier to follow? Figure 3: As the genes are arranged by species it is unclear if all of the Type Ib are the same, should they be the same? Is there a difference between the two genes from P. patens? Are the known MCAs, AtMCA1 and AtMCA2, shown in this graphic? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-36297R1 Mix and match: patchwork domain evolution of the land plant-specific Ca2+-permeable mechanosensitive channel MCA PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nishii, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We request to take on the two remaining issues - a re-worded statement in the Abstract, and better-quality figures (they still appear blurry). Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Many thanks for all your work in improving the manuscripts. All reviewers praise the efforts; just two minor issues remain. They can be fixed quite rapidly I hope. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript is fundamentally an excellent paper, and it is obvious that the authors have made a strong effort to respond to my comments in the first review response. With two small exceptions I believe it is ready to be accepted for publication at PLOS One. These exceptions are both issues that I mentioned in the first review and will be described in detail below. 1) All figures are still “fuzzy” and difficult to read. I am not sure what the solution is, but I encourage the authors to seek advice and try something new in order to improve their resolution. 2) I identified an issue in my previous review where the evolution of a new domain was attributed to the current most ancestral taxon as opposed to the ancestor of that taxon as well as more derived groups. This was fixed completely in all cases but one. On lines 28-30 in the abstract a claim is still made that the MCAfunc domain first appeared in charophytes, whereas the data suggests it first appeared in the common ancestor of streptophytes. One potential solution would be to change this sentence to, “We identified The MCAfunc domain in all streptophytes including charophytes; based on our Maximum Likelihood (ML) analyses, this suggests the MCAfunc domain evolved early in the history of streptophytes” Reviewer #2: The authors have suitably addressed all previous comments. Changes to the text and presentations of Tables make for much easier reading. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Mix and match: patchwork domain evolution of the land plant-specific Ca2+-permeable mechanosensitive channel MCA PONE-D-20-36297R2 Dear Dr. Nishii, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Berthold Heinze Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): My apologies from the side of the review team for the confusion with figure quality! It is a bit unfortunate that they came out blurry in the process that produced the PDF for review. The originals are acceptable, of course. So, I am happy to accept this manuscript, which introduces an important new thought - we hope it will receive the attention it deserves. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-36297R2 Mix and match: patchwork domain evolution of the land plant-specific Ca2+-permeable mechanosensitive channel MCA Dear Dr. Nishii: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Berthold Heinze Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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