Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 24, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-37005 Non-invasive adapted N-95 mask sampling captures variation in viral particles expelled by COVID-19 patients: Implications in understanding SARS-CoV2 transmission PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mistry, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address all of the comments by the two reviewers, in particular by presenting more data on duration and type of vocal activities before resubmission. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Many thanks for this interesting study. I would however, raise a few points 1) How was the sample size calculated? 2) Line 73-75 Please include the following reference: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32629023/ 3) Line 110, 118: Please write the full form of "lab" 4) How was the duration for which the patient needed to wear the mask was standardised? 5) The authors could kindly give the details of the gelatine membrane used for the study. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, Sriraman et al. describes the use of a modified N-95 masks with a gelatin membrane, and recovered SARS-CoV-2 RNA in exhaled breath from about 40% of patients with mild/moderate COVID-19. They concluded that their results suggest there is variation in the emission of SARS-CoV-2 virus which may explain the heterogeneity in transmission risk between individuals. The manuscript was clear overall. I have one major query: in lines 104-107 it described that various vocal tasks were performed during the 30 minutes of collection. Was only one vocal task performed for each sampling (apparently it was not, judging from the median sampling score of 6-8 in Table 1?), and how did the sample collector assign which vocal task to be performed (e.g. by randomisation)? This has significant impact on the interpretation and conclusions of the results shown, as the heterogeneity in viral load between individuals demonstrated may due to difference in the vocal tasks assigned. Please add a description of the number of participants assigned to each group in the Results section, and also provide a supplementary figure on the viral load stratified by different groups of vocal tasks (could be more than 3 groups as various intensity of each vocal tasks i.e. talking/coughing/breathing were assigned). The assignment of sampling score for each activity also seemed arbitrary, for example low talking, intermittent coughing and shallow breathing all shared the same weight of 1, although it would be expected low talking and intermittent coughing (in addition to breathing while in between talking/coughing) would shed more virus than shallow breathing. Please find other minor suggestions, below: - line 83: provide reference for the statement 'Ct value can indicate the potential infectiousness of different patients' (e.g. van Kampen et al Nat Commun 2021) - lines 102-4: suggest to provide a supplementary figure to illustrate the mask sampling set-up - line 162: please describe the sample type which the rapid antigen test at diagnosis was performed on - line 201: Figure 1 legend - 'spatial' distribution is a misnomer? - line 227: using the mask as an 'ideal method to quantity transmission risks' would underestimate the transmission risks via other routes of transmission? - lines 233-235: may be could suggest that the present results would inform infectiousness of COVID-19 patients with mild/moderate illness, which would have a more relevant interpretation on the transmission risk in the community (compared to severe cases who would be hospitalised)? - lines 255-257: although there is heterogeneity in exhaled breath viral shedding, should also express some uncertainty on whether it is directly related to heterogeneity in transmission as transmission can be via other routes - references: please confirm and update preprints that is published (e.g. ref # 1 is published in JAMA Network Open) ********** 6. 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Non-invasive adapted N-95 mask sampling captures variation in viral particles expelled by COVID-19 patients: Implications in understanding SARS-CoV2 transmission PONE-D-20-37005R1 Dear Dr. Mistry, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing my comments and the additional details on the sampling procedure. Regarding the sampling score, I would suggest to add a brief sentence in the Discussion section commenting the arbitrary nature of the assignment of the sampling score, and be more cautious when making this conclusion of "The variation in the sampling score was not significant, indicating that the intensity of the performance of tasks may not have affected the virus output in respiratory particles in this sampling". ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-37005R1 Non-invasive adapted N-95 mask sampling captures variation in viral particles expelled by COVID-19 patients: Implications in understanding SARS-CoV2 transmission Dear Dr. Mistry: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Joël Mossong Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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