Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-26279 An effort-based social feedback paradigm reveals aversion to popularity in socially anxious participants and increased motivation in adolescents PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Power, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two expert reviewers have evaluated your manuscript. Although both reviewers are enthusiastic about the results, they note some important concerns detailed below. For example, both reviewers recommend revising the introduction to clarify the theoretical frameworks and background that lead to the hypotheses. In addition, Reviewer 1 identified methodological issues relating to the analyses, including the use of categorical (rather than continuous) variables and also inconsistencies between the reported statistics and claims in the discussion and abstract. In addition to these issues, please ensure that URLs/accession numbers/DOIs associated with data and materials are available or will be made available after acceptance so that we can ensure their inclusion before publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 21 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well written manuscript describing a novel variant of the EEfRT task used to determine if the amount of effort expended varies by peer status and probability of positive feedback. Individual differences relating to sex, age, and social anxiety symptoms are explored. This new task is of sound design and makes an important contribution to the literature. However, use of categorical rather than continuous variables limit the power of some analyses, and interpretation of the social anxiety data need to be revised substantially to match the statistical results reported. This and other comments are described below. Say more in the introduction about why it might be that males tend to choose the harder task more often in the monetary EEfRT task. The introduction should do more to contextualize potential interactive effects of age and social anxiety for peer-based social cognition. For example, see Smith, Nelson, Kircanski et al., 2020. Were there sex differences on the Peterson Puberty Scale? Was puberty controlled for in analyses that consider sex? Were there scoring differences in the adult and child version of the LSAS? If so, how were those differences handled? Please list the pre- and post-task questions verbatim. If a Likert scale was used, please describe the numeric and verbal anchors. Was the deception question simply a yes or no question? If not, what was the operational definition of deception? Please provide the logic for always assigning the easy task to the peer with a very low number of Instagram followers. Although this mirrors the classic EEfRT task, those unfamiliar with the task would benefit from further explanation of why it is set up this way. Are results consistent when age is used as a continuous rather than categorical measure? Please report on whether they are consistent and describe inconsistencies in the supplement. Likewise, are results consistent when the LSAS is treated as a continuous variable? Please indicate the N who fell above the clinical cutoff in each age group. No logic is provided for the use of two clinical cutoffs. Given there is a great deal of variability in anxiety symptoms in community samples, using the LSAS as a continuous variable would provide a more nuanced understanding of anxiety. It appears that one relation with LSAS as a continuous variable is provided in the supplement, but no mention of that occurs in the primary text. Secondary analyses that include interactive effects of sex, age, and anxiety should be described in the methods section. Given the small number of cases that fell above the clinical cutoff, these secondary analyses should be performed using age and anxiety as continuous variables. The significance indicators in Figure S3 do not always seem to map onto the lower order results described in the supplemental tables. For instance, social anxiety x probability data seem to be missing from the tables. The authors characterize effects for social anxiety as follows: “Participants with higher symptoms of social anxiety avoided selecting high-status accounts and favored low-status accounts, relative to participants without symptoms of social anxiety, but differences only reached trend level in post-hoc comparisons (p’s > 0.084).” This does not fully capture the data described in the supplement – that there were no effects of social status among those with social anxiety. Only non-anxious individuals differentiated by social status. These results need to be better described in the text. The non-significant results currently highlighted in the text should be removed. In the discussion the authors highlight the idea that men (change to males – these data average across children and adults) are more likely to exert more effort for a social reward than women (change to females). However, in the introduction the authors indicate the same relation is observed in the monetary domain. Thus, it is impossible to make a claim that this is specific to social experiences without a direct comparison between tasks. A direct comparison across social and monetary tasks is a critical next step that should be discussed. This is mentioned in the discussion, but could be highlighted further. In the discussion, it is important to note that it appears that effort is malleable among non-anxious individuals. Anxious individuals seem relatively unaffected by contextual factors (at least based on the data reported about status in the supplemental materials – probability data were not reported – perhaps this is where this effect may have emerged). This line in the discussion is quite misleading: “Second, participants with high anxiety scores, compared to non-anxious subjects, were more likely to select low-status and to avoid high- status choices, causing them overall to display no modulation of choice by status (in contrast to non-anxious participants, who scaled effort to status).” As described by the author’s own supplemental results, there were no significant between group differences. This type of language needs to be eliminated from the discussion and abstract. Effects were primarily driven by status-related differences within the non-anxious group. Also – please change the language from “normal” to “non-elevated”. S ocial Anxiety x Social Status Elevated Low vs. medium 12 0.91 0.379 Medium vs. high 12 0.27 0.790 Low vs. high 12 0.49 0.633 Normal Low vs. medium 74 5.82 < 0.001 *** Medium vs. high 74 3.58 < 0.001 *** Low vs. high 74 6.46 < 0.001 *** Low Normal vs. elevated 15 1.40 0.183 Med Normal vs. elevated 16 0.05 0.964 High Normal vs. elevated 23 1.80 0.085 “The increase in motivation for low social status peers may be a safer or more secure social decision, and is consistent with prior work showing that individuals with higher anxiety symptoms are more risk- averse (33) and show fear-avoidant decision-making behaviors (34).” It is not clear what increase in motivation the authors are referring to – there is no difference within the high anxiety group for any pair-wise comparison of status level, nor is there a difference between the low and high anxiety groups at any status level. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript entitled “An Effort-Based Social Feedback Paradigm Reveals Aversion to Popularity in Socially Anxious Participants and Increased Motivation in Adolescents” for consideration at PLOS ONE. As stated by the authors, this study created a novel social feedback program to assess motivational and effort-based ties to social links in adolescents and adults with and without high social anxiety symptoms. This is an interesting topic, and in general I found this study to be a good contribution to the literature. Overall this manuscript is likely to be of interest to the broad audience at PLOS ONE, and has particular relevance for social media and technology-based approaches to future treatment. Having carefully considered this study, I provide (enumerated below) a few suggestions that may be of use to the authors in their efforts to further refine their manuscript. I provide one substantive comment regarding the introduction section below as well, that I highly suggest the authors consider: 1. Within the introduction, the authors identified potential differences in the literature that may contribute to adolescent versus adult social processing as well as some information regarding social anxiety and the impact that those symptoms may have on social processing. Although the authors present this information, it is extremely brief. I would strongly suggest that the authors significantly enhance their introduction section to set up a more solid rationale for the study. As it is currently written, they do not provide a compelling rationale that sets their study apart from others currently in circulation. Specifically, the authors should flesh out the theoretical underpinnings of adolescent versus adult social processing, as well as social feedback processing in individuals with social anxiety. Further, it would be beneficial for the authors to discuss other social feedback and decision-making paradigms that have been used in both adult and adolescent populations. 2. Somewhat related to my first comment above, the discussion section of this manuscript could be expanded significantly to reflect the novelty of the paradigm the authors have created, and how it could compare to currently existing paradigms. I suggest the author’s consider this point. 3. Within the discussion section, the authors jump to discussing neuroimaging studies using this paradigm. While I think this is more than appropriate, it does not directly link to the preceding sections. I suggest the authors thread this point into their discussion section more, and then elaborate on the novelty of this paradigm for neuroimaging studies. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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An effort-based social feedback paradigm reveals aversion to popularity in socially anxious participants and increased motivation in adolescents PONE-D-20-26279R1 Dear Dr. Bos, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, David V. Smith, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors did an excellent job addressing all of my concerns. This paper has the potential to make an important contribution to the field. Great work! Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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